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Location: Adipur Kutch (india)
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4th December 2009, 01:09 AM
Kabhi meri yad sataye to lot ana..
kabhi dil gabraye to laut ana... ghairon ko tu ne dil me basa lia hai... tere dil bar tum ko tuhkray to laut ana... Hazaron zakham tu ne mairay dil ko diye... jab tera koi dil dokhaye to laut ana... jewan ojaar k mera buhat khosh hoo tum... zindagee tairee koi barbad kar jaye to laut ana... zamane k sath aaj tum bohat khosh ho na... agar zaman tum ko char jaye toh laut ana... dil tera b jab zakhmo se chor jaye... koi b tum ko na apnaye toh laut ana |
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4th December 2009, 10:04 AM
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Mashooq ji namaskaar aap es pariwaar ke bahut purane sadsya haiN, aur bahut deir baad apne ghar aaye haiN, aapka ek baar phir se apne hi ghar meiN suwagat hai  aapki poetry hume behad acchi lagi, ahsaas bahut khaas lage, sabhi sher tareef ke kabil haiN, shikwa aur pyar dono ka saath accha laga....keep it up. aate rahiey god bless .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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An Incomplite Dream
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4th December 2009, 02:48 PM
Aadaab Janab.............
Bahut hi khoobsurat gazal kahi hai aapne sabhi sher dil mein ghar ker gaye........ Aapko pahelei martaba padha hai aur aapke kalam ne aur khayalon ne bahut mutasir kiya........ Keep Writting........ Yeh sher behad khoob laga..... ghairon ko tu ne dil me basa lia hai... tera dilbar tum ko tuhkray to laut ana... Likhate rhaiye, Khush rhaiye... Apna khayal rakhiye. Khuda Hafez...... 
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5th December 2009, 12:32 PM
lagta hai aap sdc ke sabse purane members me se ek haiN....
wow! almost 10 years!! great!!.. aapki ghazal bohat acchi hai.... KEEP COMING.... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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5th December 2009, 12:50 PM
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duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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