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Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.



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Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.

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mittal sahab ko mera salaam,

waise bahut kam hi muktak kavitayeN mujhe pasan aa paati haiN, par yakeen maaniye aapne jis saadgi se rishtoN ke badalte maayenoN ko dikhaya hai vo kaabil-e-tareef hai,hum sab ye dekhte hain aur dekh ke chup se ho jaate haiN,bas umeed karta huN ki aap aage v aisi pehskasheN laate raheNge...!!

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Mittal Sahab ........aapki rachna saadhgi ke libaas me .....bahut umdaa peshkash ban gai....rishton ka sach dikhati is rachna ko tahe dil se daad hazir hai...qubuul farmaayen... khush rahen...

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Parents are divine beings. No one can love us and care for us as selflessly as mother and father do. Yet, we take them for granted while they are alive. Even get irritated. Once they are gone we realize how priceless they were for us. Nothing can ever take the place of parents. No one can love as purely as they did. Here is a very moving poem about a man who returns home long after the parents were dead and gone. How empty he finds the home that hardly feels like home.

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saral sabdo me sab risto ko bata diya

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