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Woh lamha...! - 29th November 2009, 06:09 PM


Woh lamha jo maine kabhi jiyaa hi nahi
ILzaam they itne koi apne sar liyaa hi nahi....

Khule rakhe they darwaaze woh aayega
Usne mujhe intezaar ka waqt diyaa hi nahi....

Rakhii thii ek kitaab bahut puraane dinon ki
Khol ke dekha koi panna haath aayaa hi nahi....

Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon
Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...

Har baar maine hakiqat ko bahut dair se jaana
Farebii zamane ne sach ka aaina dikhayaa hi nahi...

Raasta zindgi ka mushkilon se bhara bahut thaa
Yeh acha huaa apne ko kabhi kamzor banayaa hi nahi...




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Ab dekhu jidhar tum hi tum Mujhe nazar aaye hai... "




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7th December 2009, 09:32 AM

Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon
Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...



Bahut Khoob ... YE mujhe kaafi pasand aayi..
Bas itna kahunga..

Aisa nahi ki ki wo mujhse pyaar karta nahi
Magar fir bhi wo ikraar karta nahi
Majburiyon Ne use bhi rulaya hoga..
Warna Yu to wo barisho mai chalta hi nahi.....
   
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12th December 2009, 10:13 PM

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Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon
Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...



Bahut Khoob ... YE mujhe kaafi pasand aayi..
Bas itna kahunga..


Aisa nahi ki ki wo mujhse pyaar karta nahi
Magar fir bhi wo ikraar karta nahi
Majburiyon Ne use bhi rulaya hoga..
Warna Yu to wo barisho mai chalta hi nahi.....
Aapke aane aur sher ki sarahana karne ka bahut bahut shukriya...aainda bhi aise hi hausla badhate rahiyega....khush rahiye...

duaaon ke saath...




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
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15th December 2009, 07:40 PM

Naresh jee........ AadaaB

Janab kafi achche ahsaas kahe hai aapne yahan. bahut achcha laga, khaasker yeh sher sach mein bahut khoob laga,

Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon
Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...



Likhate rhaiye,
Khush rhaiye....
Khuda Hafez.....


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Naresh jee........ AadaaB

Janab kafi achche ahsaas kahe hai aapne yahan. bahut achcha laga, khaasker yeh sher sach mein bahut khoob laga,

Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon
Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...


Likhate rhaiye,
Khush rhaiye....
Khuda Hafez.....
Sameer Ji....aap mera humesha hausla badhate hai....shayad yahi karan hai........main ab kuch likhlne laga hu.....jo aapko pasand aane laga hai..........aapka sarahane aur ijazat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya.....aainda bhi aapka aise hi saath milta rahega....khush rahiye....

apna khayal rakhiye...
duaaon ke saath....




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23rd December 2009, 08:35 AM

Auro ki subha suraj ke ughne se shuru hoti hai
Mera toh din uska chehra dekhne se nikalta hai..
Raat ki bekarari ka koi matlab nahi tab tak
Mere saath rehne ka faasla jab tak rehta hai...




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Naresh mehra ji....
ghazalon ke peeche khayal achcha hai..har ehsaas ki akkasi hoti hai..
post karne ke liye shukriya...
kuchh sher aapki ghazal ke format pe arz hain
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Jis lamhe ki talaash mein tujh tak pahoncha
Tu ne wo lamha bataya hi nahin...
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aakhirash rakkha jab mein ne us lamhe ka sawaal
usne kaha main ne kuchh chhupaya hi nahin...
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roz'e abad ko jaaun, ke maikade ko main..
taa-umr kisi ne saath nibhaya hi nahin...


na jiski shakl hai koi, na jiska naam hai koi - ek aisi shae ka kyun hamein azal se intezaar hai...
   
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bahut achchi koshish hai.... ehsaas bahut khoob rahe.... aapko padhna achcha lagta hai... keep up the good work.... khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye....


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Naresh mehra ji....
ghazalon ke peeche khayal achcha hai..har ehsaas ki akkasi hoti hai..
post karne ke liye shukriya...
kuchh sher aapki ghazal ke format pe arz hain
...
..
.
.
Jis lamhe ki talaash mein tujh tak pahoncha
Tu ne wo lamha bataya hi nahin...
.
.
.
aakhirash rakkha jab mein ne us lamhe ka sawaal
usne kaha main ne kuchh chhupaya hi nahin...
.
.
.
roz'e abad ko jaaun, ke maikade ko main..
taa-umr kisi ne saath nibhaya hi nahin...
Aapne kimti waqt nikal ke mere ehsaason ko padha aur pasand kiya...iske liye bahut bahut shukriya.....aapke likhe sabhi sher mujhe bahut achhe lage.....aainda bhi aise hi hausla badhate rahiyega....khush rahiye....

yuhi milte rahiye....
duaaon ke saath...




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Naresh ji,
bahut achchi koshish hai.... ehsaas bahut khoob rahe.... aapko padhna achcha lagta hai... keep up the good work.... khush rahiye aur likhte rahiye....
Lamha Ji........Namaste ! aapka meri adnaa si koshish ko saraahne aur pasand karne ke liye......bahut bahut shukriya....aainda bhi aise hi hausla badhate rahiyega...khush rahiye...

apna khayal rakhiyega...
duaaon ke saath....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Naresh saheb ek baat kehni thi pata nahi kamyaab ho paooga ya nahi apni baat kehne me. Waise to main khud bohat bada lailm insaan hu lekin maine jo ab tak mehsus kiya hain aapke kalamo ko padhkar use kehna zaruri samajhta hu.

Aapke khayaal hamesha bohat achche hote hain lekin aap hamesha apne kalamo me ulajh se jate hain. kitni hi dafa aapka dusra misra aapke pehle misre se bilkul mukhtalif hota hain ya kabhi kabhi aap koi aisa sher Ghazal me keh jate hain jo pure mauzu ko ko ek badal deta hain.

Aap apne dil se kafiye ko barkaraar rakhne ka dar nikaal de, aisa nahi hain ke koi kalam aapne shuru kiya hain to use khatam karna zaruri hain jald se jald kabhi kabhi shayro ko ek Ghazal likhne me kaiee kaiee saal guzar jate hain. Allama Iqbal Saheb Allah unhe Jannat naseeb kare ek ek sher me 60 martaba correction karte the.

Sabr se kalam likhe sher me wazan paida kare..........Allah aapke kalam ko izzat aur takat bakshe.

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29th January 2010, 11:29 PM

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Naresh saheb ek baat kehni thi pata nahi kamyaab ho paooga ya nahi apni baat kehne me. Waise to main khud bohat bada lailm insaan hu lekin maine jo ab tak mehsus kiya hain aapke kalamo ko padhkar use kehna zaruri samajhta hu.

Aapke khayaal hamesha bohat achche hote hain lekin aap hamesha apne kalamo me ulajh se jate hain. kitni hi dafa aapka dusra misra aapke pehle misre se bilkul mukhtalif hota hain ya kabhi kabhi aap koi aisa sher Ghazal me keh jate hain jo pure mauzu ko ko ek badal deta hain.

Aap apne dil se kafiye ko barkaraar rakhne ka dar nikaal de, aisa nahi hain ke koi kalam aapne shuru kiya hain to use khatam karna zaruri hain jald se jald kabhi kabhi shayro ko ek Ghazal likhne me kaiee kaiee saal guzar jate hain. Allama Iqbal Saheb Allah unhe Jannat naseeb kare ek ek sher me 60 martaba correction karte the.

Sabr se kalam likhe sher me wazan paida kare..........Allah aapke kalam ko izzat aur takat bakshe.

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Sajid Ji....Aadaab ! aapki raaye bahut kimti hai......koshish karunga aapke dikhaaye margdarshan par likh saku....aapke saath ka bahut bahut shukriya.....aise hi saath nibhaate rahiyega.....mujhe aapke samjhaane ka tarika bahut pasand aaya....

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30th January 2010, 08:54 AM

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Naresh mehra ji....
ghazalon ke peeche khayal achcha hai..har ehsaas ki akkasi hoti hai..
post karne ke liye shukriya...
kuchh sher aapki ghazal ke format pe arz hain
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Jis lamhe ki talaash mein tujh tak pahoncha
Tu ne wo lamha bataya hi nahin...
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aakhirash rakkha jab mein ne us lamhe ka sawaal
usne kaha main ne kuchh chhupaya hi nahin...
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roz'e abad ko jaaun, ke maikade ko main..
taa-umr kisi ne saath nibhaya hi nahin...

Aapke margdarshan ka bahut bahut shukriya....! aage bhi aise hi saath nibhaate rahen....aur hausla bhi....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Parakhna Mat-Parakhne Mein Koyii Aapna Nahiin Rehta
Kissi Bhii Aaeene Mein Der Tak Chehra Nahiin Rehta




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Woh lamha jo maine kabhi jiyaa hi nahi
ILzaam they itne koi apne sar liyaa hi nahi....

Khule rakhe they darwaaze woh aayega
Usne mujhe intezaar ka waqt diyaa hi nahi....

Rakhii thii ek kitaab bahut puraane dinon ki
Khol ke dekha koi panna haath aayaa hi nahi....

Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon
Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...

Har baar maine hakiqat ko bahut dair se jaana
Farebii zamane ne sach ka aaina dikhayaa hi nahi...

Raasta zindgi ka mushkilon se bhara bahut thaa

Yeh acha huaa apne ko kabhi kamzor banayaa hi nahi...
ji bhaut pyare ehsaas bayaan kiye hai aapne,koi purani yaad taaza kerte nazar aaye.............................


Bahut socha thaa apni chahat usey bata doon
Aaj diya maine phool toh usney liyaa hi nahi...


Har baar maine hakiqat ko bahut dair se jaana
Farebii zamane ne sach ka aaina dikhayaa hi nahi...



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naresh bhai apka jawab nahi. bahut achi gazal likhi hai apne

apka ye sher bahut lajawab hai muje bahut pasand aaya

Rakhii thii ek kitaab bahut puraane dinon ki
Khol ke dekha koi panna haath aayaa hi nahi....



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