Shyam saahab,
aapkii kaii ghazaleN paDii haiN, par javaab dene kaa maukaa nahiiN mil paaya. aapke dil-e-jazbaa ne aakhir majboor kar hii diyaa chand lafz baaNTne meiN!
"aap gaye to gaye , par aapaki yaado ko kyu chhod gaye?
ab unka koi maayana nahi aise vaado ko kyu chhod gaye?"
«-- waah.. puraane khayaaloN ko aapne naya nazaaraa diyaa hai! bahot khoob..
aap kah rahe he ki aaj kal hum achha likh rahe he( muje to maalum nahi) par usaka ek reason ye bhi he ki aaj kal hame aap jaise dost sun rahe he, aur hamaare dil ki feelings ki kadra kar rahe he...waise to shayri.com par hum kareeb kareeb 18 month se conected he..par tab hum apani mother language gujarati me jyada likhatey the..isiliye yaha post nahi karate the...pahele pahele hindi me likhane ki try ki thi par koi khaas nahi ban paaye..phir thoda "home-work" kiya aur hindi me start kiya.
anyway dost aap apane naam ki tarah aise hi chamakate raho..aur ye jaha ko roshana karo aisee duva ke saath shukriya.
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pyaare aman bhai,
arey saahab, ab humane ye to jaana ki aap asptaal me the,,par kyu the ye nahi jaana..haa thoda thoda to samaj shakta hu mein..par saahab apani helath ka khayaal rakha karo yaar...!!!
aur ha ham bhi badi besabari se aapake reply ki wait kar rahe the,,Aman ji aapake kahane par to hum is mahefil me he..par shaayad hamaare kalaam aapaki nazaroN ki inaayat ke kaabil nahi the..isiliye aapane abhi tak reply nahi diya hoga.....agar do-char aur "lekho" ke baad bhi agar aap reply na karate na....to hum aap par aur ek gazal bana daalate...hahahahaha.
anyway Aman ji.
shukriya dil se..!!
aur ha apana khayal rakhiyega.
wah shyam ji aapka likhna dl ko chu sa gaya,,
aap gaye to gaye , par aapaki yaado ko kyu chhod gaye?
ab unka koi maayana nahi aise vaado ko kyu chhod gaye?"
in lines ka koyi jawab nahi
Priya
Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......
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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!
hi priya.
ye yaadein bhi na.......dil me chingaari ki tarah har pal sulagati raheti he.......aur kabhi kabhi unaki koi nishaaniya un par hawa ka kaam karati he...shola bana deti he...aur ye sab jo ham kaagaj par utaar de te he........wo to ye sholo ka dhunva hota he...bas dhunva........aur kuchh nahi.
anyway thanks dost.
thanks for replying.
shyam saheb
zaban ka thora problem aap ke haan nazar aataa hai
"bade anamol ban gaye he wo, me isaki hifaajat nahi kar shakta,
"jo hamane ek saath bitaaye the, wo lamho ko kyu chhod gaye?"
magar jo shairaana takhiyuul aap ke kalam mein nazar aata hai voh mein ne bohat kam dekha hai aaj kal.
mein aap ke parwaze takhiyuul ka to motarif ho gaya hoon.
yeh aap ki eik aur shahkar ghazal hai.
hope to read many more from you.
keep it up
musharrafhusain
Aapki ye ghazal bhi aapki likhi harr ghazal ki tareh purasr hai..
"aap gaye to gaye , par aapaki yaado ko kyu chhod gaye?
ab unka koi maayana nahi aise vaado ko kyu chhod gaye?
Sahi likha hai aapne..jaane waale chale to jaate hain magar apne peeche jo apni yaadenchod jaate hai..woh umar bhar unko tadpaane ke liye bahut hoti hain..
unako padhakar, "shyam" to kya har koi shaayar ban jaayega,
ek ek labz kaante ki tarah chubhe, aise khato ko kyu chhod kar gaye
wah ..kya sach mein woh likhawat itni haseen hai ..jo kisi ko bhi shayar bana de?
bahut khoob,likhte rahiye..
Varinder
kyon zindagi ki raah mein akele chalta hai dost
chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai...
musharraf saahab.
aadaab.
saahab ab itani bhi taarif ke kaabil nahi he ham...aapaka badappan he ki aap hamaari itani taarif kar rahe he..vaakai me ye aapaka badappan he...ha ye baat pakki he ki aage bhi ham koshish karate rahenge bahetar likhane ki..!! taarif ke liye phir se shukriya.
apana khayaal rakhiyega.
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virendar ji.
kaise he aap??
virender ji phir se ek baar aapaka shukriya taarif aur vaqt dono ke liye....aur apani kahiye...kya chal raha he ?? sab thik thaak?
virendar ji apana khayaal rakhiyega.
aur likhatey rahiyega.
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pratham ji.
thanks alot for reply....aapane hamaara kalaam padha aur taarif ki isake liye bahot bahot shukriya.
pls take care.
bye foe now.
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4th June 2003, 06:56 PM
salam shyam ji
kaise hai janab? myself is aaquib
aapka post padha to mehsus hua ki aapke chehre par jitni muskan dikhti hai utna hi dard aapke sine me chhupa hai
bahot khub likha aapne
likhte rahe
aaquib
Tum nahi pass,koi pass nahi
Ab muje jindagi ki koi aas nahi
hi aaquib bhai.
how r u?
dost thanks alot for replying...aur ek baat ka shukriya ki aapane hamaare chahere ki muskaan ko nahi balki dil ke dard ko jaana...shukriya aapaka.......varna aaj kal to sab chahere ko hi to dekhate he..!! aur ha ye pyaar website par aapaka hum bhi swaagat karate he...aapane jo pahela kalaam likha he behad khoobsurat kalaam he..umeed karata hu ki aage bhi aap aise hi likhatey rahenge.
shukriya ke saath.
hi khaan saaahab...Aaadaab.
khaan saahab kaha the aap itane din? kai dino ke baad aapaki aur se koi khabar aai..sab thik thaak to he na dost?
khaan saahab aapaki taarif ke hum dil se shukraguzaar he...aapane taarif ki to hamaari gazal ko ek roshani mili.
thanks khaan saahab.
apana khayaal rakhiyega.