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30th November 2014, 08:47 PM
Ashok jee

Namaste

Umdaah Ghazal.par dil se daad...ummid karta huun aap aage bhi bazm ko sajaate rahenge

Khush rahiye...apnaa khayaal rakhen

Duaaon ke saath ijaazat

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1st December 2014, 08:41 PM
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Good one Mizaj, the second sher was excellent...

ता उम्र रहा इक रोज़-ए -मुकम्मल का इंतज़ार
किसी में शाम न मिली तो किसी में सहर नहीं
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ashok ji...........behad khoobsurat gazal aur umda ehsaas....aapko aur bhi padne ka mokka milega, esi umeed ke saath

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3rd December 2014, 11:25 AM
bahot haseen peskash hai majaaz saahab...... aaapko padhkar dil ko behad sukoon haaasil huaa hai yaqeen maaniye...

ummeed hai aage bhi aapko padhne ka zarf haaasil hota rahega

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