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Mai khud nu badal dita -
8th December 2007, 11:15 AM
Badalte waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya
Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna vesh badal liya
Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya
Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya
Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke mili
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya
Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya
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Badalte waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya
Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna vesh badal liya
Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya
Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya
Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke mili
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya
Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya
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oya heer tenu kinda sonna likhda hai menu to bahot hi pasand aaya hai oya aange bhi aise hi likhdi rahena maaf karna agar koi bhul ho to mujhe bas itna hi punjabi aata hai
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10th December 2007, 10:52 AM
really great written
thx for sharing
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12th December 2007, 10:29 AM
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oya heer tenu kinda sonna likhda hai menu to bahot hi pasand aaya hai oya aange bhi aise hi likhdi rahena maaf karna agar koi bhul ho to mujhe bas itna hi punjabi aata hai
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Thx Krenil ji ke aapne ne iss poem ko like kiya and mujhe punjabi ne reply dene ki koshish ki, Thx again to read this poem
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12th December 2007, 10:32 AM
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really great written
thx for sharing
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Hello Amit ji
Thx to spend your costly time for this poem, and also thx to like this
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13th December 2007, 03:01 PM
heart touching............
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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14th December 2007, 10:17 AM
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heart touching............
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Hello Sunita ji
Sach dasa tuhadi reply dekh ke bahut hi khushi hundi hai, Thank u ke tusi punjabi poetry vi read karde ho, mere varge nu reply den liya aapna kimati time dende ho, tuhada teh dilo dhanwaad
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14th December 2007, 08:10 PM
heer ji SSA,
bhut hi khushi hoee ke thodi kalm fir to uth khloee, mein hmesha hi thodi poem de intjar vich rehnda han, thanku so much heer ji, punjabi poetry vich jldi vapsi kreo
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15th December 2007, 11:23 AM
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heer ji SSA,
bhut hi khushi hoee ke thodi kalm fir to uth khloee, mein hmesha hi thodi poem de intjar vich rehnda han, thanku so much heer ji, punjabi poetry vich jldi vapsi kreo
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Thx Preet ji, aapna kimti time spend karan liye and reply den liye
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15th December 2007, 06:25 PM
bahut khoob HEER,tusi shabda da ajeha reshmi jaal bunde ho ki read karan vala bas fisalda hi janda hai te qaid ho ke reh janda hai.har bhav komal te sada jeha. likde reha karo .
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bahut khoob HEER,tusi shabda da ajeha reshmi jaal bunde ho ki read karan vala bas fisalda hi janda hai te qaid ho ke reh janda hai.har bhav komal te sada jeha. likde reha karo .
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o mere malik sukar hai tera ke ajj ta is mehfil de mashoor shyar bhi hajir han, Thank u dost ke tusi aapna costly costly time sade varge loka liye vi spend kita,
jis poem nu iss mehfil de sare hi good poet reply de ke tareef kar den, oh poem taa aapne aap sohni ho jandi hai,
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Hello Punjaban Heer .. Sajan -
23rd December 2007, 08:51 PM
Heer g Bahut Badhiya,
Heer g Sab kutch Badal ditya par Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki .kini sohni line hai ye.
keep it up carry on....
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Originally Posted by PUNJABAN HEER
Badalte waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya
Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna vesh badal liya
Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya
Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya
Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke mili
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya
Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya
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24th December 2007, 10:18 AM
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Heer g Bahut Badhiya,
Heer g Sab kutch Badal ditya par
Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
kini sohni line hai ye.
keep it up carry on....
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Thank u Sajan ji ke iss poem nu like karan liye, and ethe samil hon liye
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25th December 2007, 09:09 PM
o'heer tuci kedi galla karde ho.acci tuanu naal heinge ji.
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6th January 2008, 12:03 AM
[QUOTE=aman khan;263359]o'heer tuci kedi galla karde ho.acci tuanu naal heinge ji.Itni Udaas kyoon ho
Seriously Aapne Bahut hi Achchi Poem Likhi hai.Mujhe to bahut pasand aaye.Magar pata nahi kyoon ic ko padh ke Aisa kyoon Laga ke Aap kuch udaas hein.Come On Heer Panjabi to Bahut Zinda Dil Hote hein.yeh Shayri.com Ek Family ki Tarha Hai.Ic ko join karne wala Akela Nahi Rehta.Hum Sab Aapke Saath Hein.Keep Smile
ZINDAGI KI ASLI UDAAN TO ABHI BAKI HAI.HAMARE IRADO KA IMTEHAN TO ABHI BAKI HAI.ABHI TO NAAPI HAI MUTHTHI BHAR ZAMEEN HAM NE.AAGE SAARA AASMAN ABHI BAKI HAI.[/Q
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Seriously Aapne Bahut hi Achchi Poem Likhi hai.Mujhe to bahut pasand aaye.Magar pata nahi kyoon ic ko padh ke Aisa kyoon Laga ke Aap kuch udaas hein.Come On Heer Panjabi to Bahut Zinda Dil Hote hein.yeh Shayri.com Ek Family ki Tarha Hai.Ic ko join karne wala Akela Nahi Rehta.Hum Sab Aapke Saath Hein.Keep Smile
ZINDAGI KI ASLI UDAAN TO ABHI BAKI HAI.HAMARE IRADO KA IMTEHAN TO ABHI BAKI HAI.ABHI TO NAAPI HAI MUTHTHI BHAR ZAMEEN HAM NE.AAGE SAARA AASMAN ABHI BAKI HAI.[/Q
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Thank u Aman khan ji
itani pyari reply dene ke liye and aap sab ke saath ke liye,
aap ki eh wali lines really bahut hi pyari hai,
ZINDAGI KI ASLI UDAAN TO ABHI BAKI HAI.
HAMARE IRADO KA IMTEHAN TO ABHI BAKI HAI.
ABHI TO NAAPI HAI MUTHTHI BHAR ZAMEEN HAM NE.
AAGE SAARA AASMAN ABHI BAKI HAI
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2nd July 2008, 05:53 PM
Heer ji Ek bahut hi wadhia poem read karan nu mili, tusi bahut hi sohna likhea hai.
thanks for sharing
jagpal
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Heer ji Ek bahut hi wadhia poem read karan nu mili, tusi bahut hi sohna likhea hai.
thanks for sharing
jagpal
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Thanks jagpal ji for this reply,thanks ke tusi apana costly time iss poem layi spend kita
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18th July 2008, 06:16 PM
Your welcome
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Originally Posted by ADHURI HEER
Hello Amit ji
Thx to spend your costly time for this poem, and also thx to like this
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20th July 2008, 11:56 AM
heer ji... bahut vadhiya likheya hai.. keep it up...
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heer ji... bahut vadhiya likheya hai.. keep it up...
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Thank u very much for this reply
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23rd July 2008, 10:13 PM
bohat pyara likhya badlan bare.
sanu v sikha de kinj badlain apni soch nu main,
ke hun hor mere toin hijar di peed handai naio jani
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24th July 2008, 02:08 PM
sat sri akal heer,
mein poetry di duniya ch ik naya kadardan han....mein samjhda haan ki tusi changa likhde ho n always write like this.....also promote these on other social sites also....
and we can see punjabi poetry again gaining new heights......
Quote:
Originally Posted by ADHURI HEER
Badalte waqat naal mai khud nu badal dita
Aapna shahir badal dita,apna desh badal liya
Khud nu badalan di mai na koi kasar chhadi
Aapne khayal badal dite,apna vesh badal liya
Tamana badali, reejh badali, sapne badle
Sare raaste badal dite, mukam badal liya
Iss duniya vaag khud nu mai pathar kita
Mai vi loka vaag apna rang badal liya
Har mushkil nu khud mai ja ja ke mili
Aapna sara roop mainu badlna piya
Phir vi Tainu paon di chahat na badal saki
Tere karke hi taa khud nu si badalna piya
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29th July 2008, 03:52 PM
Nice heer ji
Jo log jan bujh kar anjan ban gaye
Mujhey lagta hai bo insan ban gaye
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30th July 2008, 11:26 PM
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Nice heer ji
Jo log jan bujh kar anjan ban gaye
Mujhey lagta hai bo insan ban gaye
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Thanks sagar ji
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1st August 2008, 02:43 PM
Heere, bahut sohna likheya hamesha wang..
loki kehnde ....
" ni heere ni heere,
teryan dukhan da maara ranjha jogi hoyea.."
par mainu ethe kam putha hi lagda,
ethe tan lagda ranjhe ne dukhi kita te
heer jogan ho gyi aa,
enni udassi is not so good for health.. take care..
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Really nice one.... -
5th August 2008, 08:59 AM
Bdlde waqt naal main Insaan Badlde dekhe ne...
kuch palan ch Loki apni pehchan badlde dekhe ne....
Har ik nu Badln di lagi hoi hai iss duniya ch,
Neein v main hanjuan ton Muskaan badlde dekhe ne.....
for ur poetry.....ur poetry is very true to reality
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6th August 2008, 08:22 AM
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Heere, bahut sohna likheya hamesha wang..
loki kehnde ....
" ni heere ni heere,
teryan dukhan da maara ranjha jogi hoyea.."
par mainu ethe kam putha hi lagda,
ethe tan lagda ranjhe ne dukhi kita te
heer jogan ho gyi aa,
enni udassi is not so good for health.. take care..
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thank u very much rupi ji, tuhadi iss reply layi
some time udassi is also make u perfect
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6th August 2008, 08:26 AM
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Bdlde waqt naal main Insaan Badlde dekhe ne...
kuch palan ch Loki apni pehchan badlde dekhe ne....
Har ik nu Badln di lagi hoi hai iss duniya ch,
Neein v main hanjuan ton Muskaan badlde dekhe ne.....
for ur poetry.....ur poetry is very true to reality
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Thanks aman sidhu ji, mainu read karan layi
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12th August 2008, 03:29 PM
Merey haal pe unka muskurana gazab tha
Bina baat unka mujhe satana gazab tha
Milney ki baat chali to bahana bna dena our bina vada kiye unka aana gazab tha
Love is god
helloooooooooooooooooo heer ji
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bohat pyara likhya badlan bare.
sanu v sikha de kinj badlain apni soch nu main,
ke hun hor mere toin hijar di peed handai naio jani
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Sukariya Sanamdeep ji
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14th August 2008, 12:36 AM
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sat sri akal heer,
mein poetry di duniya ch ik naya kadardan han....mein samjhda haan ki tusi changa likhde ho n always write like this.....also promote these on other social sites also....
and we can see punjabi poetry again gaining new heights......
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Thanks simmer ji, tuhadi iss reply layi
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21st December 2008, 01:07 AM
Aaj bahut din baad Online hua hoon..Lagbhag 1 Saal baad...aapka reply padha.Achcha laga...Thanks Heer...Suno..
Manzil unhiko milti hai zinke sapno mein jaan hoti hai...
Pankh se kuch nahi hota HOSLO se udaan hoti hai... SAMJHI..ab kabhi Mayoos nahi hona...Take Care...
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15th April 2009, 10:17 AM
Bahut sohne lafaz likhe ne tuseen
Dalwara
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Bahut sohne lafaz likhe ne tuseen
Dalwara
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Dalwara ji, Thank you very much for this reply
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21st April 2009, 02:48 PM
Kujh door ho gaya si maiN SDC toN. Deep atey Heer diyaaN nazmaaN mainu fer waapis lai aandaa. Bahut hi wadhiyaa likhia hai. Wasdey raho
Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
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Kujh door ho gaya si maiN SDC toN. Deep atey Heer diyaaN nazmaaN mainu fer waapis lai aandaa. Bahut hi wadhiyaa likhia hai. Wasdey raho
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Thank u very much Tilak ji for this beautiful reply.
bahut hi khushi di gall aa ke iss punjabi poetry di mehfil ne tuhanu waapis lai aaanda, Umeed aa ke tuhadi iss mehfil ch hazari lagdi rahegi
Thanks again
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