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22nd March 2008, 10:28 AM
sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain
jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai........... sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........ uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........ tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai $...!
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22nd March 2008, 10:46 AM
Bahut khuuub. . .Sach me badiya. . .Keep going
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22nd March 2008, 01:58 PM
hi neha,
main yeh jaanata hoo ki tum nahi jaanti mujhe par .................. or main bhi nahi jaanta hoo....... lekin main chahta hoo ki aaj k baad hum ek doosre k liye ajnabi nahi rahe ...............agar main aapko yeh poochunga ki aapki kya raaye he to aap culty kha jaayengi dard se rishta he mera khushi mere naseeb me nahi humse bhi koi pyar kare itne hum khushnaseeb nahi my helpline is hippy_happy_huppu@yahoo.co.in |
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22nd March 2008, 02:00 PM
hum hum he baaki sab paani kam he
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22nd March 2008, 02:36 PM
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is pore reply main meri poetry ki koi tarif koi burai na thi u mean main ne itna bura likha hai k app tarif tu kiya burai k laiq b nahi samjhte sorry next tme acha likhne ki koshish karongi.  $...!
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24th March 2008, 09:54 AM
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25th March 2008, 01:45 PM
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just kidding waise shairi bahut achha hai thanks and kepp it up Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna s@L@uddinSuh@n... 
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25th March 2008, 02:34 PM
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uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........ ye line apne bahut hi achi likhi hai muje bahut pasand aayi hai apki ye puri gazal khushi rahiye AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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25th March 2008, 04:11 PM
wah kaya raz kia hai bhut khoob
Jeene ki naye aada di hai, khush rehen ki uss ne dua di hai, Ae khuda ussay sara jahan dena, Jis ne apne dil me humein jaga di hai sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........ So nice n sweet shayri arz ki hai aap ne lagta kisi ko aap bhut dil se chahte hai Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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25th March 2008, 10:48 PM
Tujh se mil ke bicher gaye,tujh se bicher ke mil gaye Aisi bhi dooriyan rahen,aise bhi faasle rahe Tu bhi na mil saka aur umer bhi raaigan gayi Tujh se to khair ishq tha,khud se bare gile rahe |
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thanks...wese tarif dil se kar rahe hain na ya dil rakhne ko tarif kar rahe hain  plz explain... aur haan yehi sach hai k main kisi ki rah dekhti hoon mind it.$...!
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thanks a lot thank u so much k apne apne qimti waqat main se thora time meri poetry ko b diya thanks again.tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai wese muje apni is poetry ka ye sher ziada pasand hai even ye poetry hi main ne is sher ki waja se likhi hai....pehle ye likha tha $...!
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thanks anil ji....kafi dino k bad apse baat ho rahi hai all set na? any ways thanks 4 ur likeness hmm ghalat lagta hai apko main kisi ko bhi dil se nahi chahti siwaee KHUDA TALAH k baqi rishte tu duniawi hain jin k liyee main kabhi bhi apne dil ko daoo par nahi laga sakti...hahahahgot it?$...!
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26th March 2008, 07:34 AM
Bahut khuuub.bbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb
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26th March 2008, 10:07 AM
ji haa app se bhut dino baat ho pa rahi, par kaya kare kaam bhi karna hai or study bhi karni hai, bich me time nikal kar aap ke nazam par leta hu
Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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26th March 2008, 11:57 AM
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26th March 2008, 12:09 PM
tum ko punjabi samjgh me aati hai,
waise pakistan me kaun c state or provience me ho city kaun c hai Naulekahe par tere khoon ki boond hai, Motiyo ki jagah par jada kaun hai, Jiski khatir daga chandini se kare, Puch suraj ki woh dilruba kaun hai? |
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26th March 2008, 02:57 PM
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aur rahi time ki baat to kisi ke pass time nahi hota hai per isko mehshoosh karne ke liye aana padta hai aur haan ye bhi line bahut achi hai jo apne likhi hai chalo me bhi kuch likh deta hu mill jaaye har koi yuhi raaho me to kese pata chalega ki intzaar kiya hai ek baar tadap ke dekho ge kisi ke chahat me to pata chalega ki pyar kiya hai AankheN khuleeN to jaag uTheeN hasrateN tamaam Uss ko bhi kho diyaa jissay paya thaa khwaab mein
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26th March 2008, 03:10 PM
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ab meri tareef me tumhe kami bhi lagne lagi hai any way dil rkhne keliye nahi dilse hi kar raha hun raah dekhti ho well kiya jaa nsakta hun kiski koi khas hai kiya naam jansakta hun is website pe hai ya koi aur Kitni badi mazak hai ye zindagi ke sath Wo kaise Log the Ya Rub Jinhone Pa Liya Tujh ko Hume To Hogaya Dushwar Ek Insaan ka Milna s@L@uddinSuh@n...
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28th March 2008, 12:05 AM
hi NEHA,
aapne kaha ki humne aapki poetry taarif nahi ki ? arey nahi frnd aisi baat nahi he, agar mujhe aapki poetry pasand nahi aati to kya hum aaapko reply dete?kher main nahi jaanta tha ki aap ishare nahi samajhti aapko bol k batana padta he, aap waaqayi me bahut khub likhti he agar mujhe laga ki kahi kami he to main aapko tok doonga q ki main fesla on the spot karta hoo bole to main peeth piche baat nahi karta hoo or aapke liye isse achcha or kya hoga ki aapko dekhkar meri bhi dilchaspi bhi badh rahi he to agar izaazat he to main bhi kuch kehna chahta hoo to arj kiya he!!!!!! murjha gaye phool par bahar wahi he, door rehte he to kya? par pyar wahi he, jante he mil nahi sakte hum aapse,magar in ankhon me intezaar wahi he................ dear frnd main yeh jaanna chahta hoo ki jab aap mujhe reply de to main konse box me jaakar aapka msg check karoo? main shayri.com ka naya member hoo isliye main iske baare me jyad nahi jaanta agar time mile to batana ki aapki tarah main bhi apne shair likh ke display karna chahta hoo meharbaani hogi awaiting ur favorable reply albela_rose hippy_happy_huppu@yahoo.co.in |
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30th March 2008, 06:59 AM
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30th March 2008, 07:03 AM
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ohh so u r taking interest in my personals plz this is confidentialha ha hagot it na? ok then dil se keh rahe hain tu thanks no i will not show the name of my "dreaming LOVER" take care bye $...!
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30th March 2008, 07:14 AM
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first thanks n then its ok jab b apko koi kami lage i mean in my poetry u can point out that.... take decision on the spot,so it is nice n 2nd thing k ur stanza is outstanding.....at least i m passing it with 98% marks 3rd is this k if u want to post some thing on site so just open shayri.com....then log in...then go in shayri-e-ishq (or in dard,in mashoor shayri whatever u like) then see on the top of the page...there will be a box in which u see [new thread] this is the exect point just click on it n then on the opened page u write what ever u want n then submit....u can check also by preview that what n how u wrote all that so first check by preview n then submit ur thread it will be better.n u can check ur private message in user control pannel, in ur inbox now ok. bye $...!
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30th March 2008, 07:20 AM
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 any ways no i dont know punjabi but may be my would be husband will malik (punjabi)i m in karachi n realted with islamabad. $...!
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30th March 2008, 07:22 AM
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Hi Neha -
31st March 2008, 01:46 PM
HI NEHA
KYA LIKHTHE HO YAAR AAP.... BAHUTH ACCHE...! M A NEW MEMBER.... Mujhe daad dena kuch khaas tho aatha nahin.... Kisi ke dil ko kaise behlaaoo yeh bhi tho aatha nahin... Lafz gum ho gaye hon jaise tumhare alfaaz dek kar, Varna is shayar ki mehfil se koi jaatha nahin... LOVE  SIM sansain meri rukti nahi par chalte chalte thamti hain jane usko bair hai kesa,mujse rothe jata hai........... sari raat main ro ro katoon thame na ansoo pal bhar ko ishq ka khel wo khel kada,,jo mujko diboe jata hai........ uske naam ki mala japte lamhe,sadiyaan beet gaeen phir b usko yaqin nahi,wo mujhko rulae jata hai........ tehal tehal kar chat par akeli uski raheen takti hoon jan boojh kar yaroon main,wo waqat ko bitae jata hai mazi ke sudar lamhoon ki yad mujhe satati hai uska bojhal lehja,mere lub ko hansae jata hai[/quote] |
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Aadab neha ji, kaise hai aap? Masha allah bohot khoob, isi tarah mehfile sajate rahiye.insha allah tarakki dur nahi, khush rahiye apna khayal rakhiye ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(Ļ`·.·īĻ) Always ************* `·.ļ(Ļ`·.·īĻ) Keep (Ļ`·.·īĻ)ļ.·ī Smiling! `·.ļ.·ī |
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i m ok thankswhat about u? thanks a lot dear i will try my best. u too take care ALLAH hafiz $...!
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hi... well come on shayri.com thanks that u r liking my poetry Mujhe daad dena kuch khaas tho aatha nahin.... Kisi ke dil ko kaise behlaaoo yeh bhi tho aatha nahin... Lafz gum ho gaye hon jaise tumhare alfaaz dek kar, Varna is shayar ki mehfil se koi jaatha nahin... it is nice nice way to admiring my poetry$...!
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Hi, neha
thnx fr give me reply,main aapka tahdil se shukriya ada karta hoo ki aapne mere reply k liye apna kimti time diya or mujhe shayri.com ka use kese karna he yeh bhi bataya, main ummid karta hoo ki meri yeh kuch lines apko pasand aayegi......... koi kehta he pyar nasha ban jaata he, koi kehta he pyar saza ban jaata he, pyar karo agar sachche dil se to, pyar jeene ki wajah ban jaata he..................... albela_rose |
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ur weLL come jo stanza apne likha hai its really amazing n nicest' itna k main ise apne "Love 1" ko dedicate karna chahongi agar apki permission ho tu.... thanks a lot $...!
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aapne meri line padhe k baad jo uski taarif ki he mujhe khushi he ki is duniya me kadar karne waale ab bhi mojud he or aapne kaha ki aap kisi ko yeh dedicate karna chahti he to mujhe khushi hogi ki meri stanza is kaabil bhi he ki kisi ko dedicate bhi ki jaaye isse badhkar mere liye khushi ki kya baat he or main aapko izaazat deta hoo ki aap iska use apni marji se kae sakti he ...............isse khush hokar main kuch line or paish kar raha hoo ummid he aapko pasand aayegi....................? Hum woh nahi jo aapko naarazgi me chod denge, Hum who nahi jo aapse nata tod denge, Hum to who dost he ..agar aapki saanse ruki to Hum apni saanse jod denge……… albela_rose |
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asslam alykum -
14th April 2008, 12:50 AM
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ummid he aap par allah ka karam hoga or aapki dua se hamari dua kabool ho rahi hogi... ummid he yeh chand ash-aar pasand aayenge Mohabbat ka ajeeb karobar humne kiya, Who bewafa sahi magar pyar humne kiya, Agar woh chadd agye tanha to mat kaho buraunko, Kasorr unka nahi aitbaar humne kiya……… albela_rose |
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