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Sad Itna sa dard.. - 21st December 2003, 05:31 PM

Na jaane apne jameen-o-aasmaaN kyon
Itne tang se nazar aate haiN,
Wo chehre tak apne nahi lagte
Jo apne sang nazar aate hain,

'Ey Khuda' kuchh to roshan kar is 'Chaand' ko
Ye baadal bade gehre ho chale haiN,
Chahkar bhi apne chahne waaloN ke khatir
Hum mut.thibhar aasmaan nahi juta paate.


Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.

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21st December 2003, 06:11 PM

Dear Chaand Jee, bohot khub kaha hein aapne. Hamesha ki tarha. Betabi ka khamoshi ka ek anjaana sa nagma hein mehsoosh ishe karke dekho haar saash yeaha ek sadma hein ish ko jiitna samjho kaam hein jeevan sukh dukh ka sangam hein, kabhi patjhar hein kabhi sawan hein yeh ata jaata mousam hein kabhi hashna na hein kabhi rona hein jeevan sukh dukh ka sangam hein.......Dil hein tumhara*. Aise hi yaad agaya toh likhdiya. Shukriya. Likhte rahiyega. Aapna khayal rakhiyega. God bless you.


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Re: Itna sa dard.. - 22nd December 2003, 10:10 AM

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Na jaane apne jameen-o-aasmaaN kyon
Itne tang se nazar aate haiN,
Wo chehre tak apne nahi lagte
Jo apne sang nazar aate hain,

'Ey Khuda' kuchh to roshan kar is 'Chaand' ko
Ye baadal bade gehre ho chale haiN,
Chahkar bhi apne chahne waaloN ke khatir
Hum mut.thibhar aasmaan nahi juta paate.
chaand dost,
aaj soch rahi thhi ke kya mera maan itna bada hai ke maie tumhari sari tasweer sama paau? to tumhari hi roshni ne mere maan maie yunh jaga bana li ke muje bhi roshan kar diya.....


Wo chehre tak apne nahi lagte
Jo apne sang nazar aate hain,

isi baat ko lekar kuchh poorani yaade nazar ke saamne chha gayi.....
arz karti hu...
Jivan ho basant fir bhi kyun har wakt
Kaehuk ke bina hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Maie dubti rahi bhawnao ke samundar maie
Aur tum kinaare sonae ke mahel maie
Nazre milti rahi fir bhi har wakt
Bina milan ke kyun hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Urmi ki lahrae takraai ja kar
Mahel ki chharo diwaaro se
Thhi bharti fir bhi kyun har wakt
Bina bhigae huae hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
Tairna jaanu fir bhi n aau kinaare
N tum aao naaw lekar bich mazdhaar
Dosti chahiaye fir bhi kyun har wakt
Aham ke sathh hum dono?
Sathh rahte bhi kyun har wakt
Bina sang ke hum dono?
   
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Cool Shukriya DostoN - 22nd December 2003, 10:39 AM

Shukriya Shimul ji, aapko meri ye post pasand aai or aapke is khoobsoorat reply ke liye bhi, veise ek baat bataiyega... ke aap har situation ke liye gaane kaise chun leti haiN? aapki gaanoN ki knowledge bahut achchhi hai shaayad.

Shukriya ek baar phir.

Meenaji shukriya aap mere in khayaaloN ko jo rachnaaoN ki koshishishoN me pirota hooN mai itna maan deti haiN, mere liye waqai bahut maayne rakhti haiN,

Aapki ye jawaabi post waqai bahut pasand aai, jo sab mai apni is chhoti si koshish me na keh saka wo aapne keh diya.

Aapki ek post 'Saath hona' parhi thi, uske wo alfaaz bhi abtak yaad haiN.

Sathh hona kya hota hai,
Nahi samaj paayi maie kabhi;
Tumne hathh badhaya thha meri or,
Aur maie chal padi thhi tumhare sathh
Bina koi sawaal kiye zindgi joad li..
Ise hi sathh hona samja thha maine;

Kya yahi saath hona hai ?

Or jo maine likha-

Wo chehre tak apne nahi lagte
Jo apne sang nazar aate hain,

usme mujhe to kuchh eise hi khayaalat nazar aaye ... ho sakta hai aapki soch kuchh alag ho is baare me..

Par waqai aapka ye reply bhi bahut pasand aaya.

Shukriya aap donoN dostoN ka ...ek baar phir.


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22nd December 2003, 10:49 AM

Wo chehre tak apne nahi lagte
Jo apne sang nazar aate hain,

tumhaare is khayal se aaj maie barabar sahemat hu.... is khayal ki sachhai ko maie jutla nahi sakti.... khair...

tumhe mera sathh hona yaad hai yah maie jaanti hu aur maiene bhi yaad rakha hai k muje tumhe jawaab dena hai... tum mere aaj hi subah kiye pm se yah baat samj gaye hogae k maie bhuli nahi.
   
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b ahot khub - 22nd December 2003, 11:04 AM

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Ye baadal bade gehre ho chale haiN,
Chahkar bhi apne chahne waaloN ke khatir
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22nd December 2003, 02:21 PM

Dear Chaand Jee, shukriya. Shayri parte waqt meri Dilki awaz se. Gana chunne ki zaroorat hi nehi parti! Haan yeh baat aur hein ke gana mein bachpan se sunti ayi hu. Asha karti hu aapko samajh agayi hogi. Thanks once again. Likhte rahiyega. Take care. God bless you.


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