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Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain.. - 12th July 2006, 10:39 PM

Saawan ka aana ho.. aur saajan se door hon... bas kuch aise hi lamhon yeh kavita likh daali.. woh tanhaai ka ehsaas.. woh judaai jo hai paas.. bas kuch likhne ki koshish.. umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi


Tanha Tanha aaj bhi hain..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Rim jhim rim jhim boondein aayin..
Woh nagmein.. woh baaTein saaTh le aayi..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Kabhi The Unke iTne paas hum..
Na Tha doori ka koi ehsaas Tab..
Saansein humari.. mehak unse aaTi Thi..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Yaad aa raha hai woh guzra zamana...
Woh humara rooThna aur unka manaana..
Woh godi mein sar rakh ke unki so jana..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Ghir ghir aaTa Tha jab bhi saawan..
SaaTh hoTe The Tab jab hum saajan..
Woh bheegna.. aur woh bheegana..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Woh us mausam hi sardi mein haaTh Thaamna..
Woh haaThon ki garmi me sab kuch bhulaana..
Woh bijli se darna.. aur darr ke lipaT jaana..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Woh boondon ka swyamvar rachaana..
Woh khud hi kehna.. keh ke sharma jaana..
Woh har baaT me ladna aur hasaana..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Woh bheegi si subah mein apni palkein malna..
Woh bheegein se honThon se shabnam churana..
Woh boondon se ek doosre ko bheegona..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...

Woh baarish ki gadgadaahaT..
Woh boondon ka shor..
Woh paani ki behti dhaara..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...

Woh zamana yaad aaTa hai..
To khushi aur dard..dono ko saaTh laaTa hai..
Aaj hum hain yahan.. Tum ho vahan..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...

Yaad aaTa hai beeTa har pal..
Aankhein nam kar jaaTa hai..
Kuch sawaal phir laake saamne khade kar deTa hai..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...

Tanhaai ka ehsaas yun To har pal hoTa hai..
Par saawan mein saajan ke bina..
Yeh lamha sadiyon ki judaai ka ehsaas karva jaaTa hai...
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...

Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...


~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~


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18th July 2006, 03:33 PM

Dear Priya,

Accha likha hai tumne.... apni bechani ko bahut acche se shabdoin me dhaala hai... accha laga padhkar.... likhti raho yun hi...


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18th July 2006, 06:02 PM

Pulkilt Bhaiya...

Aapka saath yunhi milte rahega to zaroor likhti rahungi....

Bahut bahut shukriya for taking time out and replying me....

Thankyou so much!

Take care..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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19th July 2006, 07:33 PM

Tanha Tanha aaj bhi hain..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Rim jhim rim jhim boondein aayin..
Woh nagmein.. woh baaTein saaTh le aayi..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..


Hello Priya

how r u?After a long time saw ur poetry.....and each word flowing with beautiful thoughts.....bahut khoobsurat likha hay tumney....Barish ki khoobsurti piroye yeh shabd bahut ache lage....

keep writing
take care


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20th July 2006, 12:13 PM

hello Chahaat

appka sawan dekha aur padda bahut accha lagga, humey bhi aise beetey huey kai sawan yaad ayye, jo humney bhi piya ke saath beetaye hai. appka yeh shayer appni halat se milta sa lagga.

Tanhaai ka ehsaas yun To har pal hoTa hai..
Par saawan mein saajan ke bina..
Yeh lamha sadiyon ki judaai ka ehsaas karva jaaTa hai...
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...


aise hi kisi sawan ka majja lete kisi aashiq ne kaha hai:

"bijle se dar kar unka humse lipat janna,
dua hai kudaya yeh bijli roj chamkey"


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21st July 2006, 04:16 AM

Quote:
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Tanha Tanha aaj bhi hain..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Rim jhim rim jhim boondein aayin..
Woh nagmein.. woh baaTein saaTh le aayi..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..


Hello Priya

how r u?After a long time saw ur poetry.....and each word flowing with beautiful thoughts.....bahut khoobsurat likha hay tumney....Barish ki khoobsurti piroye yeh shabd bahut ache lage....

keep writing
take care
Sukanya ji..

Aapko meri aur saawan ki guftgoo pasand aayi jaan ke bahut khushi hui...

Bahut bahut shukriya aapka.. jo aap vakt nikaal ke yahan aayi.. umeed hai aage bhi yeh saath yunhi bana rahega..

apna khayal rakhiyega..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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21st July 2006, 04:18 AM

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hello Chahaat

appka sawan dekha aur padda bahut accha lagga, humey bhi aise beetey huey kai sawan yaad ayye, jo humney bhi piya ke saath beetaye hai. appka yeh shayer appni halat se milta sa lagga.

Tanhaai ka ehsaas yun To har pal hoTa hai..
Par saawan mein saajan ke bina..
Yeh lamha sadiyon ki judaai ka ehsaas karva jaaTa hai...
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain...


aise hi kisi sawan ka majja lete kisi aashiq ne kaha hai:

"bijle se dar kar unka humse lipat janna,
dua hai kudaya yeh bijli roj chamkey"
Di....

Vaah..... kya khoob sher kaha hai aapne... ji haan khuda kare aisi bijliya to har vakt hi chamkti rahein... lol...

Aap samay nikaal ke yahan aayi.. mujhe padha aur saraahaa... sach maaniye bahut acha laga...

umeed hai yeh saath ab humesha barkaraar rahega..

Apna khayal rakhiyega..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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24th July 2006, 08:35 PM

priya ji,
bahut achi lagi aapki yeh rachna.apne mehboob se doori aur haaye yeh bheega mausam,bakhoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne,yeh lines padhke to waaqi kisi ki yaad aagayi,

Kabhi The Unke iTne paas hum..
Na Tha doori ka koi ehsaas Tab..
Saansein humari.. mehak unse aaTi Thi..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Yaad aa raha hai woh guzra zamana...
Woh humara rooThna aur unka manaana..
Woh godi mein sar rakh ke unki so jana..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

dil se daad kabool kijiye.


yun bin bulaaye milne chala aata hai,
gham ko mujh se yeh unsiyat kaisi??

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Priya - 27th July 2006, 03:42 AM

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priya ji,
bahut achi lagi aapki yeh rachna.apne mehboob se doori aur haaye yeh bheega mausam,bakhoobi bayaan kiya hai aapne,yeh lines padhke to waaqi kisi ki yaad aagayi,

Kabhi The Unke iTne paas hum..
Na Tha doori ka koi ehsaas Tab..
Saansein humari.. mehak unse aaTi Thi..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

Yaad aa raha hai woh guzra zamana...
Woh humara rooThna aur unka manaana..
Woh godi mein sar rakh ke unki so jana..
Tanha Tanha saawan mein yaad aaj bhi hain..

dil se daad kabool kijiye.
Akelijaan ji..

meri kavita ne aapke beete kuch pal yaad dilaa diye... jaan ke bahut khushi hui..

aapko meri kavita pasand aayi.. aur daad bhi di.. uske liye behad shukriya...

bas woh us din baarish me bheegte hue.. "unhe" yaad karte hue.. bas aise hi kuch likh diya...

bahut bahut shukriya..

apna khayal rakhiye..

~Priya



"Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum..
Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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12th August 2006, 12:29 AM

My Didi,

You've wrtitten a very beautiful poem about rain and being away from love.

I really like it. Good Job! And next time try n write some happy versions!

Luv ya!

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My Didi,

You've wrtitten a very beautiful poem about rain and being away from love.

I really like it. Good Job! And next time try n write some happy versions!

Luv ya!

~Sabi
Hi Sabi!!!!!!!!!

It's so nice to see you here after such a long time...

Thankyou soo much for liking this one... As usual it was a pleasure seeing you here.....

And you know something I can even make out the reason you've chosen this one to reply... right..... I'm not gonna say that in public but dear will talk to you soon about the same.

I have some smart info reagrding...... you know what...

Love ya baby!

do keep replyin.. it always bring a huge smile on my face seeing you here.

Love n luck!

Take Care..

Yours..... Di....



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Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.."

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