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Post ghazal - aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye - 10th October 2008, 07:37 PM

adaab dostoN !

yuN to ghazal kahnaa ab mere liye khatam saa ho gaya hai par waQt be baQt junoon e shayri apne hone kaa aihsaas dilataa rahtaa hai !

gustaakhi muaaf bade dinoN baad kaagaz kala kiya hai ! aapki nazar e inaayat kaa talabgaar rahungaa !

pesh e khidmat hai !


aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye


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adaab dostoN !

aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye

aadaab o tasleemat !

moHteram appka kalaam beHad passand aya , peRhene meN bhi kaafi rawaani lagi , meri taraf se daad kabool kijiyee , bus aik shai"r ka aik lafz smajh se door raha meN ne use lal rang meN zahir kiya hai , ager bura na maanieN to uska matlab zaroor bata dijye ga janab ki nawazish ho gi


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10th October 2008, 08:00 PM

mujeeb bhai !

behad khushi hoti hai jab aap jaise shayar Qalaam pe raushni daalte haiN !

muaafi chaahta huN bhai .. darasal roman meiN urdu zubaan ko likhnae meiN mujhe hamesha zahmat utthaani padi hai !

jo lafz aapne poochaa hai uske maayne to theek uss kaa aage wala lufz hai farak ye hai ki ek baar uss ko urdu meiN likh diyaa aur ek baar hindi meiN !
issi bahaane ghazal meiN tarannum bhi ban gaya aur behar ki rasam bhi adaa ho gayi !

aapko takleef utthaani padi iss ke liye sharmindaa huN !

taareef ke liye tah e dil se shukriyaa adaa karnaa chaahta huN !

aage bhi aisi rahnumaayi kaa intezaar kartaa milunga !

apnaa khyaal rakhiye !


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mujeeb bhai !

behad khushi hoti hai jab aap jaise shayar Qalaam (kalaam) pe raushni daalte haiN !

muaafi chaahta huN bhai .. darasal roman meiN urdu zubaan ko likhnae meiN mujhe hamesha zahmat utthaani padi hai !

jo lafz aapne poochaa hai uske maayne to theek uss kaa aage wala lufz hai farak ye hai ki ek baar uss ko urdu meiN likh diyaa aur ek baar hindi meiN !
issi bahaane ghazal meiN tarannum bhi ban gaya aur behar ki rasam bhi adaa ho gayi !

aapko takleef utthaani padi iss ke liye sharmindaa huN !

taareef ke liye tah e dil se shukriyaa adaa karnaa chaahta huN !

aage bhi aisi rahnumaayi kaa intezaar kartaa milunga !

apnaa khyaal rakhiye !
kshitiz bhai ,

mazrat khuwa hoN keh meN smajh nahieN paya , aur bhai meN koi acha shaa'ir to nahiN hoN lakin koshish jaari hai keh acha ban paaoN ,

lafz hai "baarhaa" yeh urdu zuban ka nahieN farsi zuban ka lafz hai jiske maa'ni haiN bar bar ager meN ghalat nahieN hoN to is lafz ko ROMAN URDU meN "baarhaa" likha jaaey ga , teHQeeQ ker laiN achi baat hai

mazrat khuwa hoN aik aur lafz ko bhi opper maiN ne saHiH kerne ki koshish ki hai , taalib-e-e'lm se koi ghalti ho gai ho to muaafi ka Haqdaar hai

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aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye - 10th October 2008, 08:23 PM

bilkul bajaa farmaya sahib aapne !

maiN aapki ray se poori tarah se ittefaaQ rakhtaa huN !

Kalaam aur Qalam ki shuruaat meiN jo hurf hai dono ke talaffus meiN zaraa saa hi farak hai (muaafi chaahta huN furk hai) aur ek rishtaa bhi ki..

Qalam se kalaam likhe jaate haiN

yahaaN meraa matlab kalaam se hi thaa , kalaam ko Qalaam likhne ka sabab bas itnaa thaa ki yahaN mauzood log usse kalam naa samjheiN muaafi chaahta huN har insaan aapki tarah fan e shayri ka mahir to nahi !

aaindaa khyaal rakhungaa !

darasal meraa maan naa hai ki hum kisi bhi zubaan ko mukammal tabhi likh sakte haiN jab vo apne asli shakal meiN ho !

mujhe to urdu hindi meiN likhte waQt bhi mukammal nahi lagti fir roman to maasha allaah !

BaarHaa ko baarahaa likhne ka sabab sirf itnaa thaa ki baat kaayreen ki samajh se pare naa jaaye

mujhe faarsi aur arbi kaa katayi ilm nahi hai ! sirf urdu zubaan ki thodi bahut maalumaat hai !

behad khushi hui ki aap ne apnaa waQt diyaa aage bhi nigaaheiN aap par rahengi !

apnaa khyaal rakhiye !


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adaab dostoN !

yuN to ghazal kahnaa ab mere liye khatam saa ho gaya hai par waQt be baQt junoon e shayri apne hone kaa aihsaas dilataa rahtaa hai !

gustaakhi muaaf bade dinoN baad kaagaz kala kiya hai ! aapki nazar e inaayat kaa talabgaar rahungaa !

pesh e khidmat hai !


aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye
Aadaab kshitiz ji kese hain aap ?
kshitiz naam mujhe lena kafi mushkil lagta hai kya yeh aapka real name hai ab aapki gazal par aatey hai aapko jab bhi padta hoon dil khush ho jata hai aapjese shayr hi to SDC ki jaan hai.n aur aapki shayri to padne ki to baat hi alag hai aap nayi nayi shayri likhte rahiye taki hame padhne ko milti rahe........khaaksaar aapke kalaam par daad pesh kar raha hai kubool farmaiye........Khuda Hafiz


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adaab dostoN !

yuN to ghazal kahnaa ab mere liye khatam saa ho gaya hai par waQt be baQt junoon e shayri apne hone kaa aihsaas dilataa rahtaa hai !

gustaakhi muaaf bade dinoN baad kaagaz kala kiya hai ! aapki nazar e inaayat kaa talabgaar rahungaa !

pesh e khidmat hai !


aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye
kshitiz ji bohat bohat bohat zaberdast ghazal lagi aapki mujhe her shair bohat khubsurat bana hai lekin phir bhi jo mere dil ke bohat qareeb lage zaroor batana chahoongi ...............


baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye


bohat khoob kshitiz ji jitni daad di jaye kam hai is silsile ko jaari rakhiyega aate rahiyega


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10th October 2008, 11:16 PM

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adaab dostoN !

yuN to ghazal kahnaa ab mere liye khatam saa ho gaya hai par waQt be baQt junoon e shayri apne hone kaa aihsaas dilataa rahtaa hai !

gustaakhi muaaf bade dinoN baad kaagaz kala kiya hai ! aapki nazar e inaayat kaa talabgaar rahungaa !

pesh e khidmat hai !


aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye (bilkul sahi)

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye (kaya baat hai)

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye (hmmm...bahut khoob)

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye (aisa hi hota hai)

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye (oye-hoye.....)

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye (bahut kamaal)



hmmmmmmmmm..........................

namaskaar shitiz jee..................akhir aapne hume apne ahsaaso.n se ru-b-ru hone ka mokka de hi diya....bahut meharbaani janab.....ab yeh silsilla toot.na nahi chaiye

hume aapki poetry bahut bahut bhaut acchi lagi.....sabhi sher pasand aaye....!


dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye



aapki kalam etna waqt khamosh kaise rahi....

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11th October 2008, 12:43 AM

Kshitiz Sahib...

Phir Ek baaR behad Sunder Ghazal Pesh Karii aaPne! har Ek Sher Khoob Likha hai aaPne!

SakooN mila Pad kar aur accha bhi lega! Bus isi Tarah Likhte Rahiiye auR Mehfil Ko RoshaN karte Rahiiye!

Tareef Qabool Kare!


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11th October 2008, 05:49 PM

kashif bhai !

kaise haiN aap ?

jee ye mera aslii naam hai !

badi khushi hui jaan ke ki khaakhsaar ki ghazaleiN aapko pasand aati haiN !

aage bhi iss tarah ki koshisheiN jaari rahengi !

tareef ke liye shukRguzaar huN

apnaa khyaal rakhiye !


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11th October 2008, 05:56 PM

koi to ho !

gustaakhi muaaf ho mujhe abhi tak aapka naam nahi maloom hai !

tareef ke liye tah e dil se shukriyaa adaa karnaa chaahta huN ..

jab aap jaise kaayreen hauslaa afzaayi ke liye mauzood haiN to shayri to hoti hi rahegi ..

aage bhi aapki nazar e inaayat ka talabgaar rahungaa !

apnaa khyaal rakhiye !


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11th October 2008, 06:12 PM

Sunitaa jee !

maine kabhi bewajeh shayri meiN yakeen nahi rakhaa !

beech meiN to shayri karnaa bilkul khatM saa ho gayaa thaa !

fir jab ye junuun rah rah ke apne zindaa hone kaa aihsaas karaane lagaa to aap logoN ke beech waapis chala aaya !

ummeed kartaa huN aage bhi mire ashaar aapko pasand aate rahenge !

tareef tah e dil se Qabool hai !

aap apnaa khyaal rakheiN !


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12th October 2008, 06:18 PM

sharad bhai !

taareef ke liye shukRguzaar huN !

apnaa khyaal rakho !


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adaab dostoN !

yuN to ghazal kahnaa ab mere liye khatam saa ho gaya hai par waQt be baQt junoon e shayri apne hone kaa aihsaas dilataa rahtaa hai !

gustaakhi muaaf bade dinoN baad kaagaz kala kiya hai ! aapki nazar e inaayat kaa talabgaar rahungaa !

pesh e khidmat hai !


aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
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shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
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dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye
Behad hee khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai kshitij jee aap ne, bahut arse bad ek umda ghazal padhane ko mili, aage bhi aise ghazal padhane ko milegi yeh ummid karta hoon, khuda aap ko aur hunar de.

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adaab dostoN !

yuN to ghazal kahnaa ab mere liye khatam saa ho gaya hai par waQt be baQt junoon e shayri apne hone kaa aihsaas dilataa rahtaa hai !

gustaakhi muaaf bade dinoN baad kaagaz kala kiya hai ! aapki nazar e inaayat kaa talabgaar rahungaa !

pesh e khidmat hai !


aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye
kshitiz ji namaskar

bahut hi umda gazal likhi hai aapne.... yakee.n maniye gazal rawangi bahut hi sundar lagi. sare sher dil per dastak dene main kamyab rahe per mujhe maqta behad asardar laga...
merii or se badhai


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Yar really Good Bhai. Main bhi bohat din baad is mehfile yaraan main aya hu...
Sir i am even wonder to see you here. Yar apka likha bohat din bad nazar main
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adaab dostoN !

yuN to ghazal kahnaa ab mere liye khatam saa ho gaya hai par waQt be baQt junoon e shayri apne hone kaa aihsaas dilataa rahtaa hai !

gustaakhi muaaf bade dinoN baad kaagaz kala kiya hai ! aapki nazar e inaayat kaa talabgaar rahungaa !

pesh e khidmat hai !


aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye
bhai bahut achcha likha hai aik bhi sher kamjor nahi,saare ke saare sher jabardast rahe,bahut maja aaya aik khuubsurat gazal padhkar,bahut dino baad apko padha,achccha laga,share karte rahen,sukriya


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aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

very beautiful ..... himmat ki bata karte ho ........


baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

hmm barhaa .. har baar .... ek sath nahi use ho sakte .. same meaning
aur dekhiye .... word ho sake to pahle misre se hata le same emaning word use kar le .. bajan mai kami la raha hai


dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

bahut khoob ....

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

nice one ........


dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

acha sher hai lekin pahla misra contradicting sa lag raha hai...
doosre sher se thoda sa differ ........
but not sure ....


shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

kamyaab sher hai ..........
is mere dil se.. flow toot raha hai

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye

and this is ........... very very impressive ... thought
apne naam ko menaing dena .. this one is my favt .
just like be poet

well if u know hindi .. to pzl hindi font main bhi likhe ....
flow mai aana asaan ho jata hai
urdu hai to urdu mai

haan padhne walo ke liye roman mai hi likhe
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manu bhai !

kaise haiN aap ?

der se aane ke liye muaafi chaahta huN ...

jee taareef ke liye behad shukRGuzaar huN !

aap apnaa khyaal rakhiye !


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Dilip sahib !

badi khushi hui jaan ke .. ki ghazal aapko pasand aayi !

mirii janib se aage bhi issi tarah ki koshishoN ko anjaam dene ki Qawaaid rahegi !

tareef ke liye bahut bahut shukriyaa

apna khyaal rakhiye !


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Sir i am even wonder to see you here. Yar apka likha bohat din bad nazar main
aya... acha laga... umeed hay rabta rahe ga...
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Khaan bhai !

kaise haiN aap ?

aapko iss buzm meiN dobara dekha to khushi bayaaN karne ke liye alfaaz ki talaash abhi bhi jaari hai ..

maiN bhi issi umeed meiN huN ki ab ye rabt barQaraar rahegi

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Baagi bhai !

kaise haiN aap ?

aapko mere ashaar pasand aate haiN .. meri khushnasibi

umeed kartaa huN ye hauslaa afzaaii aage bhi baeQaraar rahegi !

tareef ke liye tah e dil se shukRGuzaar huN

apnaa khyaal rakhiye !


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vikas bhai !

kaise haiN aap ?

maiN tah e dil se shukRGuzaar huN jo aapne iss Qadar zarranawaazish kii !

jee maine ghazal meiN .. faa-i-laa-tuN , faa-i-laa-tuN , faa-i-laa-tuN , faa-i-luN behar kaa istemaal kiya hai !

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahi

faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-luN
baa-ra-haa-har-baa-r-hum-ko-de-khi-ye-hum haiN-wa-hi

iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-luN
iss-mi-re-dil-se-fa-Qat-dil-ko-la-gaa-kar-de-khi-ye

iss lihaaz se mujhe baarahaa ka wuzn bhi durust lagaa aur misra saanii meiN behar bhi barQaraar dikhi !

aap iss pe kuch roshni daaleiN ..

ho sakta hai aapse hi mujh ahmak k ilm meiN kuch izaafa ho jaaye !

baaki ..

taareef ke liye fir se shukriyaa adaa karnaa chaahta huN

ijaazat di jiye

apnaa khyaal rakhiye !


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kshitiz sahab,

kya kahuN...nishabd hoon....har sher mein fir wahi rang, wahi khoobi jo ek arse se barqarar rakhte aaYeeN hai aaP.

gustakhi maaf par mehfil ko aage badhaa raha hoon

dillagi ko dil ki lagi bana kar dekhiYe
Khuda ko khud mein zara basa kar dekhiYe

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adaab dostoN !

yuN to ghazal kahnaa ab mere liye khatam saa ho gaya hai par waQt be baQt junoon e shayri apne hone kaa aihsaas dilataa rahtaa hai !

gustaakhi muaaf bade dinoN baad kaagaz kala kiya hai ! aapki nazar e inaayat kaa talabgaar rahungaa !

pesh e khidmat hai !


aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye

Kshitiz Ji,
Aapki Gazal hume pasand aayi....Ek sachai hai ismain ...ab to jab aaina dekhenge aapki yeh nagme ek bar yaad jaroor karenge ....

aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye


hume yeh linc jyada pasand aayi ..........

Humari taraf se ek sher arz hai ...

unke khayalon mein kuchh yun doobe rahtey hain
Aaina hum dekhte hain aur nazar woh aate hain


sayad aapko pasand aaye


Daad Dilse kabool kijiye ...Khus rahiye
ab ijaazat dijiye

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[quote=kshitiz;311915]vikas bhai !

kaise haiN aap ?

maiN tah e dil se shukRGuzaar huN jo aapne iss Qadar zarranawaazish kii !

jee maine ghazal meiN .. faa-i-laa-tuN , faa-i-laa-tuN , faa-i-laa-tuN , faa-i-luN behar kaa istemaal kiya hai !

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahi

faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-luN
baa-ra-haa-har-baa-r-hum-ko-de-khi-ye-hum haiN-wa-hi

iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-laa-tuN-faa-i-luN
iss-mi-re-dil-se-fa-Qat-dil-ko-la-gaa-kar-de-khi-ye

iss lihaaz se mujhe baarahaa ka wuzn bhi durust lagaa aur misra saanii meiN behar bhi barQaraar dikhi !

[b] hmmmm .... bahar sahi hai bhayee lekin .... bas yai hai ki lafz jiska manhi ek hi ho sath sath .. zaroori to ahi .. aap kuch aur bhi yaha lafz rakh sakte hai...

bahar tab bhi sahi hogi ....
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anu bhai !

do ashaar meiN hi dil churaa liye aapne

bahut dinoN se chota bhai akela mahsoos kar raha thaa .. ab bada bhai bhi aa gaya hai khoob jamegii !

bhai tareef sar aakhoN pe

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Aapki Gazal hume pasand aayi....Ek sachai hai ismain ...ab to jab aaina dekhenge aapki yeh nagme ek bar yaad jaroor karenge ....

aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye


hume yeh linc jyada pasand aayi ..........

Humari taraf se ek sher arz hai ...

unke khayalon mein kuchh yun doobe rahtey hain
Aaina hum dekhte hain aur nazar woh aate hain


sayad aapko pasand aaye


Daad Dilse kabool kijiye ...Khus rahiye
ab ijaazat dijiye

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Diya jee !

aaina ek aisi cheez hai jiss meiN aap chaahe to apna jism aur rooh dono dekh sakti haiN !

sher bahut pasand aaya aaaka

daad meri jaanib se bhi ..

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30th October 2008, 12:36 PM

aaine meiN sach ko ek din aazmaa kar dekhiye
apne insaaN se kabhi nazareiN milaa kar dekhiye

baarahaa har baar hum ko dekhiye hum haiN wahii
door rah kar dekhiye yaa paas aa kar dekhiye

Waah kyaa baat hai Kshitu bhai...?


dikh raha hai sab magar tumko nazar aataa nahii
aaNkh se parde zaraa apni hataa kar dekhiye

khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

Waaaaaaaahhh... mazaa aa gaya...


dil e muztar ko naa milnaa thaa sukuuN naa mil sakaa
khoob vo kahte the haal e dil bataa kar dekhiye

shayri kii khoobiyaN tumko nazar aayengi .. par
iss mire dil se faQat dil ko lagaa kar dekhiye

Kyaaa baat hai... bahut hi khoob...!


dekhiyega aasmaaN ki aasiri meiN ye zamiiN
do kadam jaanib KSHITIZ ki bas badhaa kar dekhiye

Aji janaab... do kadam kisi ne aapki jaanib badhaaye to bass aapka kaayal huwe bina nahin reh paayega....!!

Dearest Kshitiz,

Mujhe yaad hai iss ghazal pe humne baat ki thhi ek baar... aaj padhkar bahut hi accha laga... bahut khoob bayaani humesha ki tarah... Tumhaari ghazalon me ek jaan hoti hai... bolti huwi hi lagti hain mujhe...

Dil se daad kubool karna bhai... aur apna khayaal rakhna... Aur baaki... Hum sab pakde huwe hain!!!


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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27th November 2008, 11:12 PM

swati jee !

kaisi haiN aap ? jee muaafii chaahta huN deR se jawaab dene ke liye , na jaane kaise iss jaanib meri nazar chook gayii !

jee ye to aapki zarranawaazii hai jo kaale kaagaz meiN bhi aapko roshnii dikh gayi

maiN aage bhi aisi hausla afzaaii ka talabgaar rahunga !

taareef ke liye tah e dil se shukRguzaar huN !

aap apnaa khyaal rakheiN !


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27th November 2008, 11:17 PM

pulkit bhai !

humaari jaan to aap jaise dostoN meiN basar karti hai jinhe humaari har baat pasand aati hai !

taareef tah e dil se Qabool hai !

apna khyaal rakho !


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29th November 2008, 12:40 AM

mafi chaungi itne din baad padi gazal...
bhaut khub likhi hai...
khatam ho jaayenge sab shikwe shikaayat aapke
ek dafaa mujhse zaraa taalluk badhaa kar dekhiye

wah kya andaz hai..hehehehe...
magar shikwa anhi mita ab kya karun???


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