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Love Khata Iss Dil Ki Hai Jo Pyaar Use Bepanah Kar Raha Hai - 7th July 2009, 02:48 PM

Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai


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7th July 2009, 03:13 PM

Nice work Praneeta Jee..............


Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai

Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai


Pari ............ outstanding ...................
jaise kuch foot gaya ho.... yun hi nikla gayee ho baat... baat nikli magar seedha dil se ho......


Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

again awesome ..... !!
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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai
Praneeta......2 gud..sabhi sher achhe lage khaas kar

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai

if possible get the poem checked for correct hindi words like aisi,kaisi...........nice work..keep writing


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Duniya mein dard-e-dil ki dawa hoti to pee gaye hote
Zindagi itni aasaan hoti .....to jee gaye hote.

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Nice work Praneeta Jee..............

shukriya dost............................
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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai
Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

mujhe ye words bahut pasand aaye , ye pyar bhi ajeeb chiz hai koi kitna bhi door chala jaye ye dil use ko pyar karna nahi chhodta..............
keep it up................
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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai



Dear Pari

etna dard hairaani ho rahi hai, ki pari ka dil dard se bhara hua hai....socha na tha aisa.
khair shayri ki baat karuN to bahut khoob likha hai, sacchi kehti hoon mujhe sabhi sher bahut acche lage....kisi ek sher ki tareef nahi kar sakti.

good work
keep it up

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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai
Parneeta ji.......itna dard.........meri aankho ne muddato baad mehsus kiya hai.......aapki nazm se....sabhi sher umda hai...kisi ek sher ki taarif kar ke .....aur shero ke saath be-insaafi hogi..........very nice creation.......vaise bhi aap bahut acha likhti hai........




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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai

Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai


Pari ............ outstanding ...................
jaise kuch foot gaya ho.... yun hi nikla gayee ho baat... baat nikli magar seedha dil se ho......


Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

again awesome ..... !!
shukriya.......yeh aap ki sabse badi compliment hai mere liye...thnx 1s again
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Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai



nice one praneeta...........ye sher bohat accha hai....yuhi likhti raho...






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Praneeta......2 gud..sabhi sher achhe lage khaas kar

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai

if possible get the poem checked for correct hindi words like aisi,kaisi...........nice work..keep writing

shukriya dost......
i got spell check done by zainy...........thnx 2 her
below is the corrected version


Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh adaa kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi mere marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh judaa kar raha hai
Zarurat nahi usay kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum ayse alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Usay aaj bhi chahne ka kambaqt gunaah kar raha hai
Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume, toh gilay shikwe kaise
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar usay bepanah kar raha hai


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13th July 2009, 05:15 PM

Parii Dear.......

Really outsanding.... feelings expressed by you.......
I think some sher I ll never forget in my whole life.......
Directly touched to my heart........

Well keep it up.. and hurt all of heart's....

Keep smiling........
God Bless you......

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Kat nahi paunga ek kadam ka rasta bhi
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Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

mujhe ye words bahut pasand aaye , ye pyar bhi ajeeb chiz hai koi kitna bhi door chala jaye ye dil use ko pyar karna nahi chhodta..............
keep it up................

shukriya padhne ke liye..........sach farmaya aap ne. yaad aane wale yaad aate hi rahte hai fir chahe koi kuch kar le....hmm
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Dear Parii..

kaise hain aap?

Ghazal is awesome ...

har ek lafz dil ko chuu gaya hain ...likhti raho

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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai..

bahut hi dil ko choo jane wali poem hai PRANEETA JI
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Praneeta ji,
ishq me jab choth lagti hai, toh dard ki inteha ho jaati hai........., apki gazal ka pehla sher hi mere dil ko choo gaya, aaj toh is gazal ka matlab bhi ba-khoobhi samajh aa raha hai, padke aisa laga jaise koi mere dil ka haal bayan kar raha hai.............
aaj sirf daad se kaam nahi chalega, daad ke saath saath dil se ek dua hai apke liye, ki ap hamesha khush rahein..........
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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai



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etna dard hairaani ho rahi hai, ki pari ka dil dard se bhara hua hai....socha na tha aisa.
khair shayri ki baat karuN to bahut khoob likha hai, sacchi kehti hoon mujhe sabhi sher bahut acche lage....kisi ek sher ki tareef nahi kar sakti.

good work
keep it up

tumahri diii

hello diiiiiiiiii

shukriya aap ko yaha aane ke liye...khushi hui aap ko dekh kar
dard ke baare mein kya kahu......yeh woh hai jo nazar aate hai
ab bhi kai dard hai jo chipe huwe hai
waqt ke saath shayad saamne aa jaye
uffff.................main yeh kya le kar baith gayi

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Parneeta ji.......itna dard.........meri aankho ne muddato baad mehsus kiya hai.......aapki nazm se....sabhi sher umda hai...kisi ek sher ki taarif kar ke .....aur shero ke saath be-insaafi hogi..........very nice creation.......vaise bhi aap bahut acha likhti hai........

tah dil se aap ka shukriya dost...............u have always encouraged me. i really liked your last few words and i hope to keep up to them
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nice one praneeta...........ye sher bohat accha hai....yuhi likhti raho...




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Really outsanding.... feelings expressed by you.......
I think some sher I ll never forget in my whole life.......
Directly touched to my heart........

Well keep it up.. and hurt all of heart's....

Keep smiling........
God Bless you......

Sirf Teri bad-dua.oN ka asar lagata hai
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Kat nahi paunga ek kadam ka rasta bhi
Behad mushkeel zindagi ka safar lagata hai
shukriya............par main iska matlab nahi samjh payi........"hurt all of hearts"
shayad aap jo kahena chahte hai woh main samajh nahi paayi
khair jo bhi ho shukriya

izzhaar-e-mohobbat mein yu nakaam hue hai
apno ki hi mehafil main hum badnaam hue hai
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sar mere wahi aag lagane ka ilzaam hue hai

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Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

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Aapne ehsaasaat bahut khoobi se bayaan kiye hain... accha laga aapko padhkar... Mujhe lagta hai aap thhoda sa dhyaan roman par den to aur bhi zyada khoobsurat likh paayengi...

Dil se daad kubool kijiye... likhti rahiye...


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pari sweety,
bahot achhi ghazal hai.........har sher dilko chhu gaya......ehesaas jo bayaan kiya hai tumne usko wah wah kahna gunah hoga ..........kisine sach kaha hai ......dil ka halat mahfil mein bayaan karo to .......wah wah hi milta hai .........

ghazal ko dard ke rang mein jo tumne piroya hai vo achha laga
khus raho

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kaise hain aap?

Ghazal is awesome ...

har ek lafz dil ko chuu gaya hain ...likhti raho

take care

tumharii
mandeep
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kaise hain aap?
main toh thik hi hun
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saath banaye rakhiye

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Praneeta ji..

aap k yeh sher diL pe kafi gehra aasar chhodte hain..
bahut badiya likhaa hai aapne...Daad Qabool kijiyega..

muskurahto aur duao k sath..

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Kaise samjhaye hum aaise alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
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Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaise
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai


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ishq me jab choth lagti hai, toh dard ki inteha ho jaati hai........., apki gazal ka pehla sher hi mere dil ko choo gaya, aaj toh is gazal ka matlab bhi ba-khoobhi samajh aa raha hai, padke aisa laga jaise koi mere dil ka haal bayan kar raha hai.............
aaj sirf daad se kaam nahi chalega, daad ke saath saath dil se ek dua hai apke liye, ki ap hamesha khush rahein..........
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ye tumhare liye....

Dur Hain Aap Se Kabhi Shikwa Nahi Karenge,
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Bas Unke Aane Ka Hum Yuhi Ab Intzaar Karenge.


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Aapne ehsaasaat bahut khoobi se bayaan kiye hain... accha laga aapko padhkar... Mujhe lagta hai aap thhoda sa dhyaan roman par den to aur bhi zyada khoobsurat likh paayengi...

Dil se daad kubool kijiye... likhti rahiye...

shukriya Pulkit ji
sahi farmaya aap ne meri roman kachchi hai par aap dost hai mujhe correct karne ke liye...in fact zainy ne corrections ki bhi hai

shukriya aap ke response ke liye
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bahot achhi ghazal hai.........har sher dilko chhu gaya......ehesaas jo bayaan kiya hai tumne usko wah wah kahna gunah hoga ..........kisine sach kaha hai ......dil ka halat mahfil mein bayaan karo to .......wah wah hi milta hai .........

ghazal ko dard ke rang mein jo tumne piroya hai vo achha laga
khus raho

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muskurahto aur duao k sath..

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ye tumhare liye....

Dur Hain Aap Se Kabhi Shikwa Nahi Karenge,
Tum Khush Raho Hum Bas Yahi Duaa Karenge,
Vaada Kiya Tha Jisne Kabhi Saatn Nibhane Ka,
Bas Unke Aane Ka Hum Yuhi Ab Intzaar Karenge.
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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai
bahut khoob pari..

bahut hi sundar peshkash hai ye aapki..
saare hi sher dil ke kareeb rahe..
really its outstanding from ur side..
bahut hi acha flow hai isme..
hatts off to u this time.
take care

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bahut khoob pari..

bahut hi sundar peshkash hai ye aapki..
saare hi sher dil ke kareeb rahe..
really its outstanding from ur side..
bahut hi acha flow hai isme..
hatts off to u this time.
take care

with love and regards
ur frnd
vicky

hello vicky

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yuhi saath nibhate rahiyen
muskurate rahiyen
mehafil mein aate rahiyen

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Praneeta ji,
Ham yahan naye aaye hain. Aapki shayri padhkar bahut achcha laga...kafi touchy sher the...
Umeed hai aap hameshi aise hi mehfil ko roshan karti rahe...
Tahe dil se aapke fan ki ham daad dete hain...Aur yeh duya karte hain ki bhagwaan aapko hamesha khush rakhe...
Apka naya dost
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Yahan jo bhi aaya...gaya haath mal ke..!

Log kehte hain Sher kehta hun .
Apne Zhakhmon se khelta hoon main!!!

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Praneeta ji,
Ham yahan naye aaye hain. Aapki shayri padhkar bahut achcha laga...kafi touchy sher the...
Umeed hai aap hameshi aise hi mehfil ko roshan karti rahe...
Tahe dil se aapke fan ki ham daad dete hain...Aur yeh duya karte hain ki bhagwaan aapko hamesha khush rakhe...
Apka naya dost
Amit

Namaste Amit ji

shukirya aap ke comment ke liye..........hum apki dil se shukrguzar hai ki aap ko humari peshkash achchi lagi aur hum aap ki nayi dost hone ki haisiyat se aap ka SDC par swagat karte hai.....aap ki kuch poems humne padhi hai aur aapni views bhi diya hai aur aage bhi dete rahungi
apna khayal rakhiyen aur mahefil mein aate rahiyen

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Iss tarah meri wafa ka haq woh ada kar raha hai
Mera humnawa hi meri marne ki dua kar raha hai

Sar-basar mit gaye hum jab chhod diya usne saath
Apni yaadon se bhi mujhe woh juda kar raha hai

Zarurat nahi use kisi khanjar ya teer-e-kamaan ki
Muskura kar mera dili sukun woh tabah kar raha hai

Kaise samjhaye hum aisi alam mein dil-e-nadaan ko
Use aaj bhi chahne ki kambakat gunaah kar raha hai

Socha jab bhul gaye woh hume toh gile shikwe kaisi
Khata iss dil ki hai jo pyaar use bepanah kar raha hai
praneeta jee
radhe radhe

bahut khoob.................................


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