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Cool kajal ki dhaar - 4th May 2008, 11:49 AM
nain dwaar khada hai sipaahi
soorat kaisay dil mein samayi
kajal nay aaj tej dhaar lagaii
bahar na jaa paayega harjaii
nain dwaar khada hia sipaahi

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4th May 2008, 11:59 AM
bahut khoob ...srangar ke saath veer ras ka esa udahrad me pahli baar dekh raha hu........bahut acche,pantiya pasand aayi,likhte rahe....dhanyabaad.......
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4th May 2008, 12:03 PM
shukriya. aap ki saraahna pasand aayi. encourage kartay rahiyega.

tum aaye kahe gaye pyaar
mein khadi thi sun nay ko taiyaar
   
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4th May 2008, 12:35 PM
wah ankita nice poost janab bohat acha likha hai app ne ..hmmm nice post..take care...

EK SITAM AUR MERI JAAN ABI JAAN BAKI HAI,DIL MAIN AB TAK TERI ULFAT KA NISHAN BAKI HAI.
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5th May 2008, 10:33 AM
thanks rizi. dekh rahi hoon tum padh toh rahay ho par jawaabmein kuch nahin likha. waiting for a response. Thanks once again for the encouragement.
   
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5th May 2008, 12:49 PM
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thanks rizi. dekh rahi hoon tum padh toh rahay ho par jawaabmein kuch nahin likha. waiting for a response. Thanks once again for the encouragement.


G kya matlab main ne kis baat ka jawab nahi dia hai janab.....pahle muje pata to chale k app ne kya poucha hai phr main jawab dn ga.....take care...

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6th May 2008, 01:25 AM
mera matlab tha ki koi criticism aati. sorry jaldi mein pehlay explanation nahin diya propoer. maafi chahti hoon.
   
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7th May 2008, 12:22 PM
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mera matlab tha ki koi criticism aati. sorry jaldi mein pehlay explanation nahin diya propoer. maafi chahti hoon.


JANAB main app ki bat nahi samja.kya kahna chahti hain app main kis bare main explanation nahi dia hai main ne or app mafi nahi mangey samji ..bye take care..

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8th May 2008, 02:34 AM
ok maafi nahin mangoongi aur explanation meinay nahin diya tha. tum ulta samjh gaye.
   
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11th May 2008, 05:18 PM
acha app ye to batayen k main ne kya kaha hai jo app ne asya kaha tha...

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11th May 2008, 05:58 PM
mujhe yeh yaad aa gayaa:

na kajre kii dhaar huN maiN
na motiyoN kaa haar huN maiN

good try ankita.



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12th May 2008, 11:49 PM
Hello Mukhlis,
thanks. gana mujhe bhi bahut pasand hai.

teri khayalon say sajti hoon
teray khawaabon mein sanwarti hoon
tu dekhna aisay hi jindagi bhar
mein tujhe ko dekh jiti hoon...
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