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12th February 2009, 11:05 AM
Ek chhoti si koshish.....
Kisi daayare me na bandh paayaa,
Na kisi saanche me dhaal paayaa,
Naam iska hai "Mohabbat"
Jiska izahaar main kabhi kar na paaya,
Jitanaa rahaa main door,
Unhe,utana hi kareeb payaa,
Jataa kar mohabbat ko zamaane ke darmiya.n,
Mene is "Hakikat" ko kisi shaayar ke liye "Kissa" na banaayaa,
Sahil pe khade ho bas mouj se milne ki chahat na thi,
Maine mohabbat ko sagar se bhi gahra paayaa !!
Medha jain
"jalta hai charag bhi kisi kone me pda,
magar ye raj un tez hawao.n ko kya pta"
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12th February 2009, 12:07 PM
Maine apne dil mein....
mohabbat ko sagar se bhi gehra paayaa,
har ek manzar me mujhe bas tu hi nazar aaya,
Maine apne dil ki....
mohabbat ka izzhaar kabhi kar na paaya,
ek chotti si koshish hi to ki thi maine,
tujhpar apna pyar jataane ki,
kyun chah kar bhi main tujhe paa nai payaa........ !
Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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21st May 2009, 11:32 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by MEDHA_JAIN3
Ek chhoti si koshish.....
Kisi daayare me na bandh paayaa,
Na kisi saanche me dhaal paayaa,
Naam iska hai "Mohabbat"
Jiska izahaar main kabhi kar na paaya,
Jitanaa rahaa main door,
Unhe,utana hi kareeb payaa,
Jataa kar mohabbat ko zamaane ke darmiya.n,
Mene is "Hakikat" ko kisi shaayar ke liye "Kissa" na banaayaa,
Sahil pe khade ho bas mouj se milne ki chahat na thi,
Maine mohabbat ko sagar se bhi gahra paayaa !!
Medha jain
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Medha ji
aajkal aap kaha busy hai....bazm mai dekhai nahi deti...aapki aaj maine mohabbat nazm padhi....sachmuch maine "sagar se bhi gehra paayaa" aapki shabdh rachna ko.....bahut acha laga padhkar.....
ab ye bataao kab aa rahi hai aapki nayi rachna....aur aap.....
---naresh mehra---
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14th February 2010, 10:34 PM
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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15th February 2010, 06:35 PM
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Originally Posted by MEDHA_JAIN3
Ek chhoti si koshish.....
Kisi daayare me na bandh paayaa,
Na kisi saanche me dhaal paayaa,
Naam iska hai "Mohabbat"
Jiska izahaar main kabhi kar na paaya,
Jitanaa rahaa main door,
Unhe,utana hi kareeb payaa,
Jataa kar mohabbat ko zamaane ke darmiya.n,
Mene is "Hakikat" ko kisi shaayar ke liye "Kissa" na banaayaa,
Sahil pe khade ho bas mouj se milne ki chahat na thi,
Maine mohabbat ko sagar se bhi gahra paayaa !!
Medha jain
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very nice medha jii.............
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16th February 2010, 04:35 PM
Nice Lines Medha Jee...............
Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil
Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...
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12th February 2012, 11:23 AM
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Originally Posted by Fathomless
Maine apne dil mein....
mohabbat ko sagar se bhi gehra paayaa,
har ek manzar me mujhe bas tu hi nazar aaya,
Maine apne dil ki....
mohabbat ka izzhaar kabhi kar na paaya,
ek chotti si koshish hi to ki thi maine,
tujhpar apna pyar jataane ki,
kyun chah kar bhi main tujhe paa nai payaa........ !
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Shukriya acche reply ke liye
"jalta hai charag bhi kisi kone me pda,
magar ye raj un tez hawao.n ko kya pta"
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12th February 2012, 11:24 AM
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Medha ji
aajkal aap kaha busy hai....bazm mai dekhai nahi deti...aapki aaj maine mohabbat nazm padhi....sachmuch maine "sagar se bhi gehra paayaa" aapki shabdh rachna ko.....bahut acha laga padhkar.....
ab ye bataao kab aa rahi hai aapki nayi rachna....aur aap.....
---naresh mehra---
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Mehra ji bahut bahut shukriya......mafi chahungi me reply nahi kar paai....ese hi sath dete rahe....
"jalta hai charag bhi kisi kone me pda,
magar ye raj un tez hawao.n ko kya pta"
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12th February 2012, 11:25 AM
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very nice medha jii.............
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Bahur bahut shukriya Shipra ji......
"jalta hai charag bhi kisi kone me pda,
magar ye raj un tez hawao.n ko kya pta"
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13th February 2012, 11:07 PM
Medha ji tareef kabool kijiye.
bahut hi umdaa khayalaat hai.
so niceee
Zid uski mera wazood hi mita dene ki,
aur aarzoo meri sirf usko paa lene ki.
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