Tmara sivai........

[mit4mitali]

Tamara sivai,
aa aankhoma koi vastu nathi,
Man radai mathi,
tamaru naam khastu nathi,


Akeli bhatku chhu,
aa chare taraf na veran ran ma,
Tamara sivai,
aankhona ashru koi nuchtu nathi,


Vedana ghani chhe,
radai ni pan su kahu?
Tamara sivai,
potanu gani koi puchtu nathi,


Jayre jyare nihadu chhu,
tamne baandh aankho thi,
Tamara sivai,
aantar na aarisa ma koi bhamtu nathi,


Gharai jav chhu,
jyare pan vicharo na vadad ma,
Tamara sivai,
koi nu smaran gamtu nathi.....

[jayraj143]

Hi,
Jivan maa JAS nathi,
Prem maa RAS nathi;
Dhandha maa KAS nathi,
Javu chhe swarg maa, Pan eni koi BUS nat! hi..!!

[Dhaval]

mitali ji kem chho?

khub sundar rachna aaje mane vanchva mali ane ae pan gujarati bhasa ma !!, ahiya gujarati loko ne joine mane khub j anand thay chhe ane aape to sache j bauj saras rachna lakhi chhe...

aavij rite hamesa lakhta rehjo tame ,khus raho

jai shree krishna

aapno mitra
dhaval

[mit4mitali]

Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you

mitali ji kem chho?

khub sundar rachna aaje mane vanchva mali ane ae pan gujarati bhasa ma !!, ahiya gujarati loko ne joine mane khub j anand thay chhe ane aape to sache j bauj saras rachna lakhi chhe...

aavij rite hamesa lakhta rehjo tame ,khus raho

jai shree krishna

aapno mitra
dhaval

thank u so much jo tamne aa rachana gami. aa rachana me 5 varas pehala atle ke hu high school ma hati tyre lakhi hati...

aapni dost
mitali.....

[mit4mitali]

Originally Posted by jayraj143

Hi,
Jivan maa JAS nathi,
Prem maa RAS nathi;
Dhandha maa KAS nathi,
Javu chhe swarg maa, Pan eni koi BUS nat! hi..!!

khub sacchi vat kari chhe aape...

mitali