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It is gujarati shayri no 2... -
13th December 2005, 12:47 PM
Raatri na svapna ni yaad, savaare naa aave to saaru,
tamaari aa fariyaad,atyaare naa aave to saaru, Phoolo nu anupam saundarya joine mane thai che ke, aa jeevan maa paankhar naa aave to saaru, doobi java maate aa tofaani dariya maa padyo chu, have fari aa sharir kinaare naa aave to saaru, vednaa maa tadapto maanvi boli uthe che ke, have koi dilaaso deva naa aave to saaru, KAVITA have dil boli uthyu che ke, tu kyaank kyaarey naa aave to saaru..... Jimmy...  har saans ke saath yujhe yaad karta hai koi, maut sacchai hai ek roz aani hai, lekin teri Judaai main har Roz marta hai koi.... |
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13th December 2005, 08:36 PM
Jimmy,
phari thi aa gazal ma tamara hriday ni vednaa ubhraayi aavi chhe... it's beautifully written with full of emotion... I like the entire creation... again I can understand but please do take good care of yourself and keep writting! Have a nice day!  |
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thanx parul ji..... |
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thanx parul ji..... -
13th December 2005, 09:23 PM
Thank you parul ji, just kind 4 ur info i want to tell u smthing that shes now alright and talk with me today evening. so am happy now but not verry well. ok dont mind...i am happy to know that u like my gujarati shayri....bye and take care always b happy....
har saans ke saath yujhe yaad karta hai koi, maut sacchai hai ek roz aani hai, lekin teri Judaai main har Roz marta hai koi.... |
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14th December 2005, 04:02 AM
Dear Jimmy,
I agree with Parulji. What a wonderful creation. Please do keep writing. I am also happy that she is feeling better. Take care. Prakruti |
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14th October 2013, 10:39 PM
Highly intensified emotions........
........Superb.............. |
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