maru naam

[meena chheda]

dosto,
aaj maine meri gujrati mai likhi hui kavita aapke samnae rakhi hai. plsssssssss, aap mujae samjne ki koshish jaroor karna. aapke sarahne ke intzaar mai rahungi.
maru naam

maru naam rame chhe tara hothh par
ne hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun.
maru naam vaansali bani
tara hothhe vadge chhe;
ne relaay chhe je sur,
lohi banine dode chhe
mara rom-rom ma
ne hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun.
tu bani jaay chhe warsaad laagni no
ne mane bhinjve chhe tarbole..
bani jaay chhe
aapno sambandh lilochham
ne hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun.
hu tane kadiy nahi bhulu mitr
ne kadiy nahi visru tari maitri
jyaare-jyaare
aapni maitri na sarovar ma
mara naam ni hodi
tu tarti mukae chhe
hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun
ne mane tyaare jaan thhay chhe
maro swaas pan tu bani jaay chhe.


[hindi maie anuwaad ]

jab bhi mera naam ......
tmhare hothho par muskuraata hai
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan maano rook si jaati hai...

mera naam baansuri ban kar .....
tumhare hothho par thhahar jata hai
aur oonse jo sur nikalte hai...
lahu ban kar .....
mere rom-rom maie bas jaate hai.
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan maano rook si jaati hai..

jab bhi tum ban jaate ho ....
baadal meri bhawnaao ke
aur bars kar bigotae ho mujae
lagaataar.....
ban jaata hai apna rishta hariyala
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan maano rook si jaati hai

maie tumhae kabhi n bhulgi ay dost
na bhul paaungi tumhari dosti...

jab bhi tum apni dosti ke
samundar maie.....
mere naam ki naav ko
hal ke se bahaate ho
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan manoo rook si jaati hai

aur tab mujae ahesaas hota hai..
meri saanse bhi tum ban jaate ho.

[Zeba]

meena ji,
I'm sorry mujhe gujrati nahi samaj aati,magar aap ne itni mehneat se kavita likhi hai .mujhe jitna bhi samajh aaya hai usme mujhe yeh kavita dil se likhi hui lagi.

zeba

[Ursfoeva]

hi meena ji,
kem cho ?
maja ma cho ne ?
hu pan majama chu.. mane khabar nai ke tame pan gujarati cho.
saru lakh yu che!
mane badhu samaj ma avi gayu! good-work in writin in guju.
baki bas, biju badhu kem chale che ?

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hi to everyone else who reads this post, and cannot understand gujarati. i'm guju, if u guyz dont know.

- riddhi

[meena chheda]

zeba dost,
sorry... mera dhyaan hi nahi gaya yaha k aapne mere liyae wakt nikal hai.... aapki aabhari hu aur rahungi.

[meena chheda]

priy riddhi,
thanx a lot... anae sorry mitr... ahi maru dhyaan j nahtu gayu... tane gami... ae j enough chhae mara maate ne mari kavita maate.

[spandn]

bahot aachh!!

hoto pe u chhuna,
dhadkanme jo smana.
barish me simat jana,
nas nas me bahena,

bahot khub, ue nam kihariyali hame bahot bhai.

[meena chheda]

spandn mitr,
thanx..... mari kavita gami ae maate....

[musharrafhusain]

meena ji
i am sorry dost , mein gujrati bilkul naheen samajh paataa hoon magar aap ne yeh mehrbaani ki hai keh is ka hindi tarjuma ker ke bara ehsaan kiya ham per .
behad khooboorat aur meethe alfaaz aur ehsaasaat ke saath likhi gaee is nazm ko perh ker ajeeb si thandak aur tamaniyat ka ehsaas huaa.
dosti rishta hi ehsaa hai , agar ise is ki asli spirit ke saath nibhaya jaaey to aisi hi haseen shahkaar takhleeq hote hain.
dua go hoon aap ke liye aur meri khuahish hai keh aap khush rahen aur isi tarah khoobsurat kalam se hamein nawazti rahen.
musharrafhusain

[meena chheda]

mushi dost....
aapka shukriaa maanna mere liyae aasan hi nahi .....yahi kah sakti hu......
aapki tarif ho gayi.... meri nazam ji gayi....

[mitaparekh1@hot]

hiiiii
kharkhar MAZA AAVI GAYI

[meena chheda]

mita ,
tane maja aawi? manae aanand thhayo. thanx

[punnu]

HI MEENA DI
APNE BAHUT ACHA LIKHA HAI PEHLE MAINE PADA KI GUJRATI MAIN LIKHI HAI PAR MUJHE THODI THODI SMAJH AA GAYI PAR BAD MAIN PATA CHALA APNE HINDI MAIN BHI LIKHA HAI GOOD WORK DIDI ASA HI LIKHNA
BYE
LUV
PUNNU

[meena chheda]

meri punnu
tumhe yah rachna pasad aayi.... muje aur kya chahiyae.. haa... waise to yah meri gujrati rachna thhi... par dosto k kahne se maine ooska wahi par hindi anuwaad kiya hai.
tumhari di

hello meenaji.
khubaj saras kavita lakhi chhe tame.really a nice one.gujarati kavita bahuj ochhi vanchva male chhe.plz u keep writing gujarati kavita.really a nice one.

[meena chheda]

dushyantji,
tamaro khub aabhar.... tamne mari kavita gami ae badal.
ji.. hu gujarati ma j lakhu chhu.... pan ahi post wadhhu nathhi karti... mitro ne adchan pade chhae ... lol
tamne gami.. mane ghano j aanand thhayo.. kaaran aakhre to mara ahesaas gujarati ma j wadhu khilae chhae...

[kshitiz]

Meena ji ..

Pahle to hum mayus ho gaye the coz Guzrati ka G bhi nahi aata hume ..

Aapne hindi me likha tab samjh me aaya padh kar bahut achha laga vakeyi hothoN ki bateiN hotho se nahi kahi aapne magar kalam se likh kar bata di .. bahut achha ..

Aapki hothoN ki batoN se hume bhi kuch yaad aa gaya ummid hai pasand aayega ..

Mere hothoN pe jis rut me teri bateiN nahi hoti
Vo sawan kyoN na ho uss rut me barsateiN nahi hoti
Tera chehra na dekhuN to ye ehsaas rahta hai
Ki iss duniya me jaise chandni rateiN nahi hoti

Take care

[meena chheda]

dost kshitiz,
maja aa gaya... bahot hi khubsurat andaj... yah aaphi bayaan kar sakte ho.. tarif kubul kijiyae meri.

Mere hothoN pe jis rut me teri bateiN nahi hoti
Vo sawan kyoN na ho uss rut me barsateiN nahi hoti
Tera chehra na dekhuN to ye ehsaas rahta hai
Ki iss duniya me jaise chandni rateiN nahi hoti

meri rachna pasand aayi.... ooske liyae bhi aapki shukrgujaar hu jo aapne pata n hote bhi gujarati hi sahi par wakt dene ki koshish ki yah mere liyae bahot badi maaine rakhegi...

[aakash]

shoo kahoon

jyaare-jyaare
aapni maitri na sarovar ma
mara naam ni hodi
tu tarti mukae chhe
hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun



ne mane tyaare jaan thhay chhe
maro swaas pan tu bani jaay chhe.

was excellent

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by aakash
shoo kahoon

jyaare-jyaare
aapni maitri na sarovar ma
mara naam ni hodi
tu tarti mukae chhe
hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun



ne mane tyaare jaan thhay chhe
maro swaas pan tu bani jaay chhe.

was excellent

akiiii,
thanxxxxxxxxx

[akant]

meena ji,

aaj aapki dil ko chhu jaane vaali emotion se bheri kavita padhi bahut achchhi lagi.bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne.masoom kavita..



Akant...

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by akant
meena ji,

aaj aapki dil ko chhu jaane vaali emotion se bheri kavita padhi bahut achchhi lagi.bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne.masoom kavita..



Akant...

akant dost,
tumhe iski masoomiyat chhu gayi....... or kya chahiye....... yah or bhi khil gayi.

[sanjoo]

Meena Ben...waaaah waaaah waaaah waaaah waaaaah baoo saras chhe aa kavitaa..........parr hum ko kuch samjh mai nahii aaya....
ap bhi na hum ko guratii kyun nahi sikhatii hoo...ek tulsii hai wo bhii kisi kaam kii na kaaj kii bass bate kara loo use bhii...aree bhai hum ko bohot zaruraT padne walii hai gujratii kii ap tau aaj hii bataya na kyun....jaha jaooo..waha saB jagah gujju hii gujjuu hai..LOL

Merii sakhii ye tau mazak kii baat hai parr jitnna bhii padhaa aur samjhaa...achha laga.....kamaal ki shaqshiyat kai sath..kalam par bhii bohot achhi pakad hai ap kii...bass aur kyaa kahuu....kal vashi...(APMC) chal rahii hoo na sath....LOL
Ap ka sakhaaa........Sanju!

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by sanjoo
Meena Ben...waaaah waaaah waaaah waaaah waaaaah baoo saras chhe aa kavitaa..........parr hum ko kuch samjh mai nahii aaya....
ap bhi na hum ko guratii kyun nahi sikhatii hoo...ek tulsii hai wo bhii kisi kaam kii na kaaj kii bass bate kara loo use bhii...aree bhai hum ko bohot zaruraT padne walii hai gujratii kii ap tau aaj hii bataya na kyun....jaha jaooo..waha saB jagah gujju hii gujjuu hai..LOL

Merii sakhii ye tau mazak kii baat hai parr jitnna bhii padhaa aur samjhaa...achha laga.....kamaal ki shaqshiyat kai sath..kalam par bhii bohot achhi pakad hai ap kii...bass aur kyaa kahuu....kal vashi...(APMC) chal rahii hoo na sath....LOL
Ap ka sakhaaa........Sanju!

sanjjjjjjjj
thhodi or jahemat oothha lete... to maine hindi anuwaad bhi kiya hai woh nazar aa jaata. khair...... n padhh kar bhi itni taarif kar li.... n jaane padhhte to kya kahte.. lol

[inspired_humour]

meena

mein tamne aana pehla pan javab laikho hato pan tamein javan na aapiyo,

well really tamaru je inspiration che its superb ane tamari kavita na words ekdam perfect ane barobar lage che......

mane bahu khushi thai ke tame ek gujarti cho...


any wayz keep on posting those creations

Nayan ma vasiye che jara yad karjo,

Kai kaam pade jaruri toh saad karjo,

Mane toh padi che aadat vadhare bolvani,

Jo taklif pade toh maaf karjo….!!!

[Tulsika!~]

um..meena ji,
i thought ke mane solid gujurati nathi aavadtu..pan tamari kavita ekdam samaj ma avi, matlab kein aapun ki gujurati bhi solid hai..btw...very nice kavita...saras chhe!! good to know u also write gujurati..now u can become a bilengual writer or may be trilingual..if u started writing in English...hehe good job..and keep it up.....


aur sanjoo ke bachhe....
tulsi humesha jab kaam na ho..tabhi aati hai..:P aur waise bhi..mein tumhari nokar nahi hoon..jo tumhara kaam karungi...translate karvana hai..to uski kimat lagengi.....yaar yeh duniya badi fwd hai...ab har kaam ki kimat lagti hai..so..agar translate karvana hai to...kimat bol...... challl chall....

luv,
tulsika!~

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by inspired_humour
meena

mein tamne aana pehla pan javab laikho hato pan tamein javan na aapiyo,

well really tamaru je inspiration che its superb ane tamari kavita na words ekdam perfect ane barobar lage che......

mane bahu khushi thai ke tame ek gujarti cho...


any wayz keep on posting those creations

Nayan ma vasiye che jara yad karjo,

Kai kaam pade jaruri toh saad karjo,

Mane toh padi che aadat vadhare bolvani,

Jo taklif pade toh maaf karjo….!!!

inspired_humourji,
maafi chahu chhu ke aa pahela tame mane reply aapyo chhae pan maie jawaab n aapyo. ae post par pan hu jaroor jawaab aapish.
aapno aabhaar ke aape mari rachna ni aatli taarif kari.

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by Tulsika!~
um..meena ji,
i thought ke mane solid gujurati nathi aavadtu..pan tamari kavita ekdam samaj ma avi, matlab kein aapun ki gujurati bhi solid hai..btw...very nice kavita...saras chhe!! good to know u also write gujurati..now u can become a bilengual writer or may be trilingual..if u started writing in English...hehe good job..and keep it up.....


aur sanjoo ke bachhe....
tulsi humesha jab kaam na ho..tabhi aati hai..:P aur waise bhi..mein tumhari nokar nahi hoon..jo tumhara kaam karungi...translate karvana hai..to uski kimat lagengi.....yaar yeh duniya badi fwd hai...ab har kaam ki kimat lagti hai..so..agar translate karvana hai to...kimat bol...... challl chall....

luv,
tulsika!~

tulsika,
koi shak nahi ke tumhari gujrati achhi hai. taarif ka shukriaa. or haan, english maie to nahi likha ab tak par marathhi maie likhti rahti hu. so tumhare kahne ke anusaar trilingual hu shayed. lol
khush raho hamesha.

[paplupopat]

jab bhi tum apni dosti ke
samundar maie.....
mere naam ki naav ko
hal ke se bahaate ho
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan manoo rook si jaati hai

aur tab mujae ahesaas hota hai..
meri saanse bhi tum ban jaate ho.

meena jii,

kahate hain gar ek sachcha dost mil jaaye to jindagii aasaan ho jatii haii.

magar dost hii to asaani se nahi milate.

aapke ahesaas -e-dostii ko salaam.

paplu.

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by akant
meena ji,

aaj aapki dil ko chhu jaane vaali emotion se bheri kavita padhi bahut achchhi lagi.bahut hi pyara likha hai aapne.masoom kavita..



Akant...

akant dost,
tumhara in box full hai. maie tumhare pm ka jawaab nahi de pa rahi.

[Pyarali Rajan]

Meenaji,

Tamara tarafthi Gujarati maa kaink vanchwa maley teni aturta hati jey tamoye puri karel chey, bahuj saras and sunder ritey tamey lakhi shako cho. Asha chey key tamo avarnavaar Gujarati maa pan lakhta rahesho-

aapni maitri na sarovar ma
mara naam ni hodi
tu tarti mukae chhe
hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun
ne mane tyaare jaan thhay chhe
maro swaas pan tu bani jaay chhe.


Kharekhar bahuj sunder!!!!

Rajan

[romana]

hi meena di

vow waise to mujhe gujrati kiya hindi bi teek se nahi aati magar aapki yeh kavita bhut hi piaayri hai aur aapne hum jaise pe yeh ehsaan kiya jo saath mai isse hinid mai bi likh diya bhut hi piyaari kacvita hai bhavano se bari bilkul aapki tarah. keep on writing di

bye

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by paplupopat
jab bhi tum apni dosti ke
samundar maie.....
mere naam ki naav ko
hal ke se bahaate ho
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan manoo rook si jaati hai

aur tab mujae ahesaas hota hai..
meri saanse bhi tum ban jaate ho.

meena jii,

kahate hain gar ek sachcha dost mil jaaye to jindagii aasaan ho jatii haii.

magar dost hii to asaani se nahi milate.

aapke ahesaas -e-dostii ko salaam.

paplu.

mitr,
sach hi kaha hai...... zindgi ho jaaye aasan, shart itni si hai... sathh ek pyara sa dost ho .

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by Pyarali Rajan
Meenaji,

Tamara tarafthi Gujarati maa kaink vanchwa maley teni aturta hati jey tamoye puri karel chey, bahuj saras and sunder ritey tamey lakhi shako cho. Asha chey key tamo avarnavaar Gujarati maa pan lakhta rahesho-

aapni maitri na sarovar ma
mara naam ni hodi
tu tarti mukae chhe
hu dhabkaro chuki jaaun chhun
ne mane tyaare jaan thhay chhe
maro swaas pan tu bani jaay chhe.


Kharekhar bahuj sunder!!!!

Rajan

rajan mitr,
tari aasha poori kari saku ne aema khari ootri saku aewi hamesha bhagwaan ne prathhna rahshae. thanxxxxxx mari rachna ne pasand karwa maate.

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by romana
hi meena di

vow waise to mujhe gujrati kiya hindi bi teek se nahi aati magar aapki yeh kavita bhut hi piaayri hai aur aapne hum jaise pe yeh ehsaan kiya jo saath mai isse hinid mai bi likh diya bhut hi piyaari kacvita hai bhavano se bari bilkul aapki tarah. keep on writing di

bye

meri romana,
tum bhi na...... yah ehsaan kya? aisa n kaho.....
or haan... meri tarah yah bhi tumhe pasand aayi... yah jaan kar bahot achha laga.
tumhari di

[pappu]

dear meenaji,
bahu saras lakhyu che. tamara ma sunder vicharo aane pavitra vicharo che. keep it up.
pappu.

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by pappu
dear meenaji,
bahu saras lakhyu che. tamara ma sunder vicharo aane pavitra vicharo che. keep it up.
pappu.

pappu mitr,
mari rachna ni ane mara vicharo ni aa rite taarif karwa badal aapno khub j maan thhi aabhar maanu chhu. thanxxxxxx

[garima]

Originally posted by meena chheda



[hindi maie anuwaad ]

jab bhi mera naam ......
tmhare hothho par muskuraata hai
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan maano rook si jaati hai...

mera naam baansuri ban kar .....
tumhare hothho par thhahar jata hai
aur oonse jo sur nikalte hai...
lahu ban kar .....
mere rom-rom maie bas jaate hai.
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan maano rook si jaati hai..

jab bhi tum ban jaate ho ....
baadal meri bhawnaao ke
aur bars kar bigotae ho mujae
lagaataar.....
ban jaata hai apna rishta hariyala
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan maano rook si jaati hai

maie tumhae kabhi n bhulgi ay dost
na bhul paaungi tumhari dosti...

jab bhi tum apni dosti ke
samundar maie.....
mere naam ki naav ko
hal ke se bahaate ho
oos pal maie saans lena bhul jaati hu
dhadkan manoo rook si jaati hai

aur tab mujae ahesaas hota hai..
meri saanse bhi tum ban jaate ho.

Maa Behad asardar poem.. maine hindi padhi.. kyunki jaisa aap jaanti ho mujhe gujj bilkul nahi aati..

bahoot bahoot achhi lagi ye rachana..

Aaapki laadali

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by garima
Maa Behad asardar poem.. maine hindi padhi.. kyunki jaisa aap jaanti ho mujhe gujj bilkul nahi aati..

bahoot bahoot achhi lagi ye rachana..

Aaapki laadali

meri garima,

meri rachna tumhe pasand aayi... tumhara shukriaa....

maa

[Parul]

Dearest Meena di,

Aapne Gujarati maa vaanchvaa no aanand anero chhe. bahu j sundar lakhyu chhe. bas aama j lakhta rehsho.

Khush raho!

[meena chheda]

Originally posted by Parul
Dearest Meena di,

Aapne Gujarati maa vaanchvaa no aanand anero chhe. bahu j sundar lakhyu chhe. bas aama j lakhta rehsho.

Khush raho!

priy parul,

aabhar .

di