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4th February 2005, 02:30 PM
shu tane khabar chhe?
aabh ma thi je zar-mar zar-mar zare chhe pachhi vadad bani je dhodhmar varse chhe e maro j to prem chhe shu tane khabar chhe? hufadi savar na aakhsh ma je chamke chhe ne rate sheetal chandani bani damke chhe e maro j to prem chhe shu tane khabar chhe? chand-chakori ne phool-bhamra ni je preet chhe nadi na vahen ma vahetu je sangeet chhe e maro j to prem chhe shu tane khabar chhe? khilati vasant ma je suvas bani maheke chhe muasam ma je chahek chahek chaheke chhe e maro j to prem chhe shu tane khabar chhe? kai ketaliye vedna o je hasta mukhe sahe chhe ne tari rag rag ma je lohi bani vahe chhe e maro j to prem chhe shu tane khabar chhe? kai chhupo nathi, aakhi duniya ni e same chhe.. chhata janam-janam thi je fakt tara name chhe.. e moro j to prem chhe aav tane madavu enathi ,shu tu ene odakhe chhe je tarathi pan vadhu tane odakhe chhe e maro j to prem chhe -Priya |
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4th February 2005, 03:12 PM
Fabulous priya!....bahuj saras..keep it up
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4th February 2005, 03:29 PM
Thank u komal for reading it
keep in touch have a nice time -Priya |
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4th February 2005, 04:13 PM
Kavi che Priya
Bahuj saru ane sundar lakhelu che tue, aavi j rite lakhti rehje ho. chal kadji rakhje aavje bhaibandh |
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4th February 2005, 04:32 PM
irfan ji
r u gujju?? really ??? very glad to know tht u can u/s guj. thank u 4 replying my post -Priya |
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4th February 2005, 04:42 PM
shu tane khabar chhe?
e maro j to prem chhe Priya Itna mujhe samajh aa gaya...If u can help me understand the rest I dnt know why? but mujhe humesha hi gujarati poetries bahut acchi lagti hain... I am taking tuitions from Meena didi, till the time i reach a level.. help me Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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4th February 2005, 04:43 PM
Hi,
Priya Ma to Gujarati hu hi, lekin gujarati me abhi tak koi kavita nahi likhi mene tujko likhte dekha to tareef kardi, usme naraj hone ki koi baat nahi. take care by freind |
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5th February 2005, 12:05 PM
yes pulkit ji
agar aap ki guju shayri padhna achha lagata hai..to hum jarur aap ki help karenge. i've tried to translate it for u .. kya tujhe pata hai? aakash me se rim-zim rim-zim jo barasata hai phir ban ke badal jo jor se barasata hai vo mera hi pyar hai kya tujhe pata hai? gungunati(warm) subah ko aakash me jo chamkata hai aur rat ko banke sheetal chandani jo damkata hai vo mera hi pyar hai kya tujhe pata hai? chand-chakori aur phool-bhauwaren ki jo preet hai nadiya ke pani me jo baheta sangeet hai vo mera hi pyar hai kya tujhe pata hai? khilati vasant(spring) me jo khushbu banke mahekta hai har mausam me jo chahek chahek chahekata hai vo mera hi pyar hai kya tujhe pata hai? jane kitane dardo ko jo haste hue saheta hai aur teri rag rag me jo lahu banke baheta hai vo mera hi pyar hai kya tujhe pata hai? bilkul chhupa nahi vo puri duniya ke samne hi hai.. phir bhi janam-janam se jo sirf tere naam pe hi hai.. vo mera hi pyar hai aa tu mai milau usase, kya tu use jaanta hai jo tujhse bhi jyada tujhe jaanta hai vo mera hi pyar hai now tell me ,, if u like this have a nice time -Priya |
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5th February 2005, 12:07 PM
aur irfan ji
are hum naraz thodi hai...infact i m glad to know u tht u r gujju -Priya |
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5th February 2005, 12:25 PM
Hiii Priya....
Bahut khoobsurat.... Lovely Words dear... Mazaa aa gaya padhkar.... Dil se daad kubool karna meri.... Aap Log itna accha likhte hain.. chaahe woh Mena Didi hon, Komal, Pappu ji, Parul yaa tum... Ke guajarati ki taraf pyaar badhna swabhaavik hai.... Thanks for the transltn....aage bhi hak se main aapse kehta rahoonga... TCLagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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5th February 2005, 01:14 PM
hi pulkit
thank u very much aapki tarif ke liye.... hindi me to tum achha likhte ho...par i hope k ek din gujrati me bhi itana hi achha likhoge aur aap bejijak kahe sakte hai tarnslation ke liye khabhi bhi... kuchh bhi...i'll try my level best for tht have a nice time -Priya |
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8th February 2005, 12:43 PM
Hi,
Priya Priya we are a only for freinds, welcome freind and welcome to my thread. by take care by freind |
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9th February 2005, 06:43 PM
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priya, aav tane madavu enathi ,shu tu ene odakhe chhe je tarathi pan vadhu tane odakhe chhe e maro j to prem chhe tarif ma koi shabd kahish toi taarif oochi thashae....... saras ........ ras sahit je chhe te aaj chhae...... meena |
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10th February 2005, 09:30 AM
Thank U Meena Didi,
Tame mari kavita vanchi ane reply aapo e mane bahu game chhe ha evu nathi ke khali tamari tarif j vanchvi game,,ha tarif game jarur, pan jo kai khutatu hoy kavita ma, ne tame kaho to e pan game thanx again -Priya |
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10th February 2005, 06:32 PM
Priya Ji,
Wah! Ek ek line dadh ney patra chey! Aa toh bahuj adhbhut prem kehvay!! Shun kharekhar avo prem aa navyug maa shodhyo jadey? Farithi kahish key khubaj prasansha patra rachna chey!! Rajan! |
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10th February 2005, 08:05 PM
Its priceless...............priya..............
shu lakhyu che bas vachta vachta hu khovai gayo..... its simply gem.........!!! Sal!m.....!!! |
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11th February 2005, 12:41 AM
Shu Vaat chhe Priya... Shabdo nathi ke hu shu kahu tamne ke aa vanchi ne mane ketlo anand thayo chhe, kharekhar shabdo ne ketli saras reete sajavi ne lavya chho... bas aamaj lakhta rehjo!
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11th February 2005, 09:34 AM
Thank u parul,
thank u very much for reading it keep in touch always -Priya |
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11th February 2005, 09:38 AM
Thank u salim,
i m very glad ke tane aa kvita gami, salim tame mari "To chale " vanchi? na vanchi hoy to time male vanchi lejo...kadach gamse e pan...same section ma and Thank u rajan ji.....tamara loko ni tarif j kadach soruce of inspiration chhe mara mate thank u very much -Priya |
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6th October 2006, 05:41 PM
Hi Priya,
I am a new member on this site. Hats off to you for creating this ghazal. I found in your poem as romantic as Ramesh Parekh, as beautiful as Chinu Modi, as classical as Manoj Khandheriya and of course, as lovely as Mariz. Waiting for your more ghazals.......Carry on......... -Nirlep. |
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Thanx Nirlep
-Priya |
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23rd December 2007, 05:07 PM
sunder sabdo ishwar ni saugad chhe.
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23rd December 2007, 07:14 PM
HAKIKAT MA KHOOBAJ SARAS ANE KHOOBAJ SARI RITE TAME TAMARA PREM NI VYAKHYA AAPI CHE
AAMAJ LAKHTA RAHO MIND BLOWING AATHI VISHESH SHABDO NATHI MARI PASE TAMANE WAKHANVA TAMETO PREM NE BAHOOJ UUCHA STHANE BESADI DHIDHO CHE WAH WAH WAH MAN PIGADI GAYU EKEK PANKTI MA ZOOR CHE TAMARI BIJI POST NI RAAH JOISH Kitne mare kitne aabhi rahoo.N me hai Kuch aa.Nsoo baki nigahoo.N me hai |
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27th December 2007, 12:47 AM
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wah priya bahu ja saras lakhyu chhe mane bahu ja pasand aavyu khas karine shu tane khabar chhe kai chhupo nathi aakhi duniya ni e same chhe chhata janam-janam thi je fakt tara naam chhe e maro ja to prem chhe aa char line mane bahu ja pasand padi chhe to bas aam ja lakhta rahejo |
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7th February 2008, 03:03 PM
So Sweet Priyaji.
Jevu Tamaru Name Tevij Tamari Gujarati Lakhan. Vah Priya Ji Vah |
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