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The Demon Prince
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Battle Begins........ -
5th June 2012, 12:14 AM
I held my heart as strong as a stone,
My mind did the talking, and pity never shown,
I put my heart in the dungeons of the darks,
The darkness so deep, could see no kindle nor spark...
I thought for a while to give myself a chance,
I wanted my Heart to feel good and dance,
I set it free for a while to see,
My Heart felt great and sang love songs...
I gave up my throne for my love of the breeze,
I turned to be the wanderer of the seas,
I made friends, I merried my Heart,
I gave my life a different start...
It's been ages I rose my blade,
For a while I forgot my life's crusade,
Have fallen so weak that I am dismayed,
I need to push myself and wade...
Warrior has to rise to Battle for his life,
Battle within himself, to renew his own life,
Battle with the world, to bring new surprise,
Battle with the GOD, to write his own destiny's uprise...
Time to achieve a feat, to rise above the cloud,
Time to silence the crowd, who have been shouting loud,
Those who know me not, shall know till the world's end,
Battle Begins to recover My Lost Crown...
The Demon Prince...
Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
The Demon Prince...
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16th February 2013, 09:36 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by TheDemonPrince
I held my heart as strong as a stone,
My mind did the talking, and pity never shown,
I put my heart in the dungeons of the darks,
The darkness so deep, could see no kindle nor spark...
I thought for a while to give myself a chance,
I wanted my Heart to feel good and dance,
I set it free for a while to see,
My Heart felt great and sang love songs...
I gave up my throne for my love of the breeze,
I turned to be the wanderer of the seas,
I made friends, I merried my Heart,
I gave my life a different start...
It's been ages I rose my blade,
For a while I forgot my life's crusade,
Have fallen so weak that I am dismayed,
I need to push myself and wade...
Warrior has to rise to Battle for his life,
Battle within himself, to renew his own life,
Battle with the world, to bring new surprise,
Battle with the GOD, to write his own destiny's uprise...
Time to achieve a feat, to rise above the cloud,
Time to silence the crowd, who have been shouting loud,
Those who know me not, shall know till the world's end,
Battle Begins to recover My Lost Crown...
The Demon Prince...
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Ah......such a lovely poem.....
Quite inspiring....
I am surprised to see... not even a single comment on this thread.....
Pls keep writing, and sharing with us...its always a pleasure to read you...
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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17th February 2013, 03:02 PM
Indeed very thoughtproking poem ,The Demonprince.
salutations for good work.
Sanjay Sehgal
Zainy sahiba people generally see and post in Dard section followed
by Ishk se tion.Enlish section tak ate ate viewers thak jate hain.So few
comments in English section
khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar ,
Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar.
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17th February 2013, 07:47 PM
Aadaab Dosto....
Its a great poem except for a few obvious lines... you'll see it when you read it.... the writer has every right to express his opinnions,feelings, wishes... and they indeed are put extremely well and likewise the readers have their own feelings, beliefs, views etc... just wanted to clarify my own reason for not commenting here before... coz I personally do not comment on things where I just can't fully put my true feelings... in short I'd rather not comment than post a dishonest praise!...
A wish all the good for the poet here!!
Duagoh
Ahmad
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28th November 2013, 03:13 AM
Hello,
Thanks Zainy and Hamdam for liking it..
Had been lost for a long while.
Thanks Ahmed, would like your feedback on this.
At least I can learn and improve.
Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
The Demon Prince...
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21st December 2013, 07:31 PM
Amazing truly inspiring. Thanks for sharing
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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12th January 2014, 01:00 AM
Thank you for reading and appreciating brother..
:-)
Main toh kab ka marr chuka hoon,
Zinda hai ye Jism mera,
Ki koi phir apni Mohabbat se,
Jeene ki nayi wajah de dein...
The Demon Prince...
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