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Zindagi - 24th October 2009, 05:59 PM

Dosto

ek aur koshish aap sab ki nazar................




Har din naye roop meiN nazar aati hai zindagi
kabhi hai hasati to kabhi rulaati hai zindagi


Kadam-kadam par leti hai kuch naye imtehaan
fir bhi har haal meiN jeena sikhaati hai zindagi


Gar housale ko apne, tum khud hee karlo buland
aasman ko chhune ko, pankh failaati hai zindagi


Waqt ke haatho.N ki kathputali hai hum insaan
Har pahelu se waqef hameN karaati hai zindagi


Dhundhlo sitaare Ghamo.N ke baadalo.N ko cheer
Sitaaro sang khud bhi zagamagaati hai zindagi


Ek Ghazal ke saath Chhedo khushi ka saaz tum
Hamen aaj koii raag naya sunaati hai zindagi


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24th October 2009, 11:14 PM

Bahot khoob............................................. .............

Aise hi Likhti rahiye..........................

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25th October 2009, 09:55 AM

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Bahot khoob............................................. .............

Aise hi Likhti rahiye..........................

Fezan
Fazan jee

Kaise hai aap??? Ummid karti hoon khairiyat se honge.
BaRe lambe arse ke baad aap se roo-ba-roo hone ka mauka mila.. achha laga

housla afzaayee ka bahot bahot shukriya..

ummid karti hoon aap ka saath aage bhi milta rahega


aap ki dost

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25th October 2009, 03:33 PM

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Dosto

ek aur koshish aap sab ki nazar................



Har din naye roop meiN nazar aati hai zindagi
kabhi hai hasati to kabhi rulaati hai zindagi


Kadam-kadam par leti hai kuch naye imtehaan
fir bhi har haal meiN jeena sikhaati hai zindagi


Gar housale ko apne, tum khud hee karlo buland
aasman ko chhune ko, pankh failaati hai zindagi


Waqt ke haatho.N ki kathputali hai hum insaan
Har pahelu se waqef hameN karaati hai zindagi


Dhundhlo sitaare Ghamo.N ke baadalo.N ko cheer
Sitaaro sang khud bhi zagamagaati hai zindagi


Ek Ghazal ke saath Chhedo khushi ka saaz tum

Hamen aaj koii raag naya sunaati hai zindagi
Dii .......... Aadaab.........

Yeh to wakai sach baateN hai zindagii ki, Sabhi sher bahut khoob hai aur sachche haiN
Bahut khoob behad achchi lagi aapki yeh gazal rawani bhi khoob hai is gazal mein aur adaygii bhi.... Highlighed sher behad khoob lage...

Daad hazir hai......

Likhati rahiye khush rahiye

Apna kahyal rakhiye..
Khuda Hafez....


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25th October 2009, 09:48 PM

Purvi Jii,,

Kia kehnay sarkaar.....

Boht hi aalaa.... aik dam dil ka aar paar ho gayi
aap ki yeh tehreer.....

Likhtey rahiye aur acha acha sa....

Take care,,

Regardz,
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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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