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29th April 2008, 01:26 AM
Hi,
yeh naya game yeh soch kar shuru kiya hai k is se entertainment bhi hogaa aur ham achche achhe sher bhi paRh sakeNge aur sath hi sath hamari memory ki testing bhi ho jaayegi. so, shuru ho jaiye.
karna yeh hai k maiN kisi mashhoor shaair ke ek she'r ka sirf pahla misra likhuNga aur aap ko dusra misra batana hoga. phir uske ba'd ek naya misra likheN [kisi mashhoor shaair ka hi, preferably ustad shoara]
EXAMPLE:
maiN pahla misra deta huN:
yeh na thi hamari qismat k visaal-e-yaar hotaa
to koi dusra banda iska dusra misra yuN likhe:
yeh na thi hamari qismat k visal-e-yaar hota
agar aur jeete rahte, yehii intizaar hotaa
samajh meN aa gayaa na?
agla misra:
yeh masail-e-tasavvuf, yeh tira bayaan, "Ghalib!"
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
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29th April 2008, 02:02 AM
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agla misra:
yeh masail-e-tasavvuf, yeh tira bayaan, "Ghalib!"
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ye masail e tasavuf ye tera bayaan Ghaalib
tujhe hum wali samajhte, jo na baadaa_Khwaar hota
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29th April 2008, 02:08 AM
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ye masail e tasavuf ye tera bayaan Ghaalib
tujhe hum wali samajhte, jo na baadaa_Khwaar hota
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aadaab Maham sahiba
is laRi meN shirkat ke liye maiN aapka mutashakkir huN. welcome. aapne sher to ba-Husn-e-Khoobii mukammil kar diya par aap agla misr'a dena shaayad bhoo gaiN. aapke misr'e ka intizaar rahega. shukria
wassalam
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29th April 2008, 02:34 AM
Adaab,
bauhat umda zouq hei apka ,
bauhat behtreen laree ki ibtidaah ki hei ap ne
daad haazir hei
lijiye janab
sher ka pehla misra haazir hei
GUL HOEE JATEE HEI AFSURDA SULAGTEE HOEE SHAAM
Dekhte hien agla misra kahan se ata hai
magar ssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh apko batanae ki ijazat nehie hei hargiz
let someone else do it
apko malum ho ga hum jante hein
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29th April 2008, 02:43 AM
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Adaab,
bauhat umda zouq hei apka ,
bauhat behtreen laree ki ibtidaah ki hei ap ne
daad haazir hei
apkaa husn e nazar hai jo har past aur adnaa shai meN bulandi talaash kar leti hai. shukrya.
lijiye janab
sher ka pehla misra haazir hei
GUL HOEE JATEE HEI AFSURDA SULAGTEE HOEE SHAAM
misr'e ke liye bahot bahot shukria aapkaa
Dekhte hien agla misra kahan se ata hai
magar ssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh apko batanae ki ijazat nehie hei hargiz
let someone else do it
apko malum ho ga hum jante hein
aapkaa Hukm sar aaNkhoN par
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29th April 2008, 12:48 PM
very nice thread mukhlisji.....................
chaliye mahamji...apka sher hum complete kiye dete hain...........
GUL HOEE JATEE HEI AFSURDA SULAGTEE HOEE SHAAM
dhul ke nikle gee abhi chashma e mehtaab se raat
chaliye ab humari baari..............
badan ke donoN kinaaroN se jal rahaa huuN maiN
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Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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29th April 2008, 01:03 PM
Jiiiii janab FAIZ the ye apke lye hmmmmmmmmmm RIGHTON INDEED!
apka misra
badan ke dono kinaron se jal raha hon mein
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR banda hei ya diya salayee HEHEEHEE
mmmmmmmmmmmmm bataoun agla misra
oka nai batatee
let someone come and do it for us eh ?!
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29th April 2008, 01:21 PM
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Jiiiii janab FAIZ the ye apke lye hmmmmmmmmmm RIGHTON INDEED!
apka misra
badan ke dono kinaron se jal raha hon mein
YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAR banda hei ya diya salayee HEHEEHEE
mmmmmmmmmmmmm bataoun agla misra
oka nai batatee
let someone come and do it for us eh ?!
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maham...................badan hi hain diya salai nahin......... ....
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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29th April 2008, 01:40 PM
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maham...................badan hi hain diya salai nahin......... ....
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hahahha
yaaaaaaar mujhe to ye koi SUCIDAL BOMB ATTACKER LAG RAHA HAI
heheehh
ssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ita pyara thread maham ki shararton ki nazar ho raha hai
jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii se ab koi is ka agla misra de ji
warna shararartain jaaree rahein gee
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29th April 2008, 02:03 PM
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hahahha
yaaaaaaar mujhe to ye koi SUCIDAL BOMB ATTACKER LAG RAHA HAI
heheehh
ssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ita pyara thread maham ki shararton ki nazar ho raha hai
jaldiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii se ab koi is ka agla misra de ji
warna shararartain jaaree rahein gee
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heee maham tum bhi na................diya salai seeee sucidial aatacker pe aa gayi.......... aisa karungi shaam tak kisi ne jawab nahin diyaa....to...hum de denge..........
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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Yaar ye badan ke dono kinaron ke jalne ka kuch macla samjh nai aya
ya tou acidity prob hei ya ulcers hehehe
sshh
ok ok no masti no shararart
sach ye hei ke shadeed uljahn mein hei dimaagh ke iska misra kaunsa hai i thought i knew magar haar gaye hazur apke agayae
acha ye HAZRAT E MUKHLIS ko anae dijiye dekhte hein inko ata hie ke nai
warna ap ata kijiye ga iska misra
Wat say ?@!
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29th April 2008, 03:33 PM
salaam
shukria and welcome Mausam sahiba. hahaha mazaa aa gayaa aapke aur Nahanm sahiba ke beech kii mizaahiya nok jhoNk hehehe ya yeh dynamite stick bhi to ho sakte haiN.
kijiye she'r mukammil kiye dete haiN ham
badan ke donoN kinaaroN se jal rahaa huuN maiN ke
chhuu rahaa huuN tujhe, aur pighal rahaa huuN maiN
aaiye Misra Ji ab aapkaa number hai hehehe
agla misr'a hai:
nahiiN minnat kash-e-daam-e-shuneedan daastaaN meri
Good Luck
wassalaam,
MuKhlis
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salaam
shukria and welcome Mausam sahiba. hahaha mazaa aa gayaa aapke aur Nahanm sahiba ke beech kii mizaahiya nok jhoNk hehehe ya yeh dynamite stick bhi to ho sakte haiN.
kijiye she'r mukammil kiye dete haiN ham
badan ke donoN kinaaroN se jal rahaa huuN maiN ke
chhuu rahaa huuN tujhe, aur pighal rahaa huuN maiN tujhii
aaiye Misra Ji ab aapkaa number hai hehehe
agla misr'a hai:
nahiiN minnat kash-e-daam-e-shuneedan daastaan meri
Good Luck
wassalaam,
MuKhlis
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Oh waaaaaaaaah hmmmmmmmmmm kiya sher ata kiya hai wah ji
NOW THAT MAKES SENSE INDEED!!!!
waise ehm
siachin mein beth ke likha tha ye sher
isko waise cadbury cone icecream pe bhi marketing ke lye likh sakte hein hehehee
sorry guys
yaar i can t resist sharararating on this sher
imaan se aise aise ideas arae hein ke eik kitaab likh saktee hon is sher pe hehehe
sorry sorry mukhlis
aap kaheen hamae sue na kar den ya giraftaar na karwa den apke thread mein ita hanagama karne pe
ok ok
ab maham chup
!!!!!!!
magar sirf thori der ke lye
iti der nai chup raha jata ji kar len jo karna hei
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30th April 2008, 01:09 PM
aisa lagta hai ke har imithan ke liye
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30th April 2008, 01:30 PM
heeeeee....tum to sher ke piche haat dhoke pad gayi...nahin nahin naha dhoke pad gayi................... siachin bhi pahoch gayi..maham tum bhi na too much ho?????
jeee mukhlisji sher to bilkul thik ata aapne kiyaaa aapne par zara lafz zara idhar udhar kiye ..."ke" pehle mishre main nahin hain dusre mishre ke starting main hain.............aur "tujhii" aapne shayad bhul se likh diyaaa
badan ke donoN kinaaroN se jal rahaa huuN maiN
ke chhuu rahaa huuN tujhe, aur pighal rahaa huuN maiN
chaliyee ab aapke mishraji ki baari
nahiiN minnat kash-e-daam-e-shuneedan daastaan meri
Khaamoshii guftaguu hai, bezubaanii hai zabaa.N merii
ab agla sher..........
zamaane ke lab par zamaane kii baateN
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Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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3rd May 2008, 06:40 AM
badan ke dono kinaron se jal raha hon mein
abtak kiseene fiebrigade bhee nahiN bheja
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3rd May 2008, 08:52 AM
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badan ke dono kinaron se jal raha hon mein
abtak kiseene fiebrigade bhee nahiN bheja
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Wafa Ali sahib salam,
aapka is laRii meN Khair maqdam hai.
mu'aaf kijiyega is laRii meN aapko apna misr'a nahiIN dena bal k us she'r ka ORIGINAL misr'a denaa hogaa jaise upar ki misaloN misaaloN meN aap dekheNge. vaise, jis she'r ko apane mukammil kiyaa hai vo already maiN mukammil kar chukaa huN. uske ba'd Mausam sahiba ne ek aur misr'a likha hai jise ka aapko dusra misr'a likh kar she'r mukammil karna hai. shukria.
regaerds
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jeee mukhlisji sher to bilkul thik ata aapne kiyaaa aapne par zara lafz zara idhar udhar kiye ..."ke" pehle mishre main nahin hain dusre mishre ke starting main hain.............aur "tujhii" aapne shayad bhul se likh diyaaa
oops! sorry.
nahiiN minnat kash-e-daam-e-shuneedan daastaan meri
Khaamoshii guftaguu hai, bezubaanii hai zabaa.N merii
waah, bahot Khoob, Bravo! aapne allama Iqbal ka she'r bilkul durust mikammil kiyaa hai. mubaarak ho
ab agla sher..........
zamaane ke lab par zamaane kii baateN
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lijiye ham Muneer Niyazi ke is she'r ko poora kiye dete haiN:
haiN aabaad laakhoN jahaaN mere dil meN
kabhii aao daaman-kushaa mere dil meN
ab meri jaanib se yeh misr'a mulaahizah farmaaiye:
yaa Rab! dil-e-Muslim ko vo zinda tamanna de
Good Luck
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
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lijiye ham Muneer Niyazi ke is she'r ko poora kiye dete haiN:
haiN aabaad laakhoN jahaaN mere dil meN
kabhii aao daaman-kushaa mere dil meN
ab meri jaanib se yeh misr'a mulaahizah farmaaiye:
yaa Rab! dil-e-Muslim ko vo zinda tamanna de
Good Luck
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lagta hain neend meiN sher likha hain aapne......maine koi aur sher mukammal karne ko kaha tha aur aapne koi aur kar diya...ghazal waise ek hi hain par sher apni marzi ka kyuN
zamaane ke lab par zamaane kii baateN
merii dukh-bharii daastaaN mere dil meN
chaliye aapke sher ki baari.....
yaa Rab! dil-e-Muslim ko vo zinda tamanna de
Jo kalb ko germa day Jo rooh ko tarpa day
ab next......
Tum mohabbat ko khel kehte ho....
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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3rd May 2008, 07:31 PM
not to sure buddy but is it :
tum mohabbat ko khel kehte ho
hum ne zindagi barbaad kar lee
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4th May 2008, 06:45 PM
Maham jee:
aadaab!
aap shaayad misra dena bhuul gayee,
chaliye main arz kiye deta huu.n......
intezamaat naye sire se sambhaale jaaye.n..
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4th May 2008, 07:42 PM
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chaliye main arz kiye deta huu.n......
intezamaat naye sire se sambhaale jaaye.n..
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yeh lijiye janaab ham pooraa kiye dete haiN. Rahat Indori ka yeh she'r yuN hai.
intezamaat naye sire se sambhaale jaayeN
jitne kam-zarf haiN mehafil se nikaale jaayeN
agla misr'a:
nikaalaa chaahtaa hi kaam kia ta'noN se tu, "Ghalib!"
tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul
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5th May 2008, 05:29 PM
nikaalaa chaahtaa hi kaam kia ta'noN se tu, "Ghalib!"
tere be mahar kehne se vo tujh par meharabaa.N kyo.n ho ...
next...
Kuch na puch e-humnashi mera nasheman tha kaha...
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Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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nikaalaa chaahtaa hi kaam kia ta'noN se tu, "Ghalib!"
tere be mahar kehne se vo tujh par meharabaa.N kyo.n ho ...
next...
Kuch na puch e-humnashi mera nasheman tha kaha...
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muje is sher ki next line ka to pata nahi hai....par MUKHLIS let me tell u one thing ki ye bahut achi thread hai...i loved it.....keep it up.....good luck....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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nikaalaa chaahtaa hi kaam kia ta'noN se tu, "Ghalib!"
tere be mahar kehne se vo tujh par meharabaa.N kyo.n ho ...
next...
Kuch na puch e-humnashi mera nasheman tha kaha...
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kuch na puch e-humnashi mera nasheman tha kaha
ab to yeh kehna bhi mushkil hain woh gulshan tha kaha
next:
merii daastan-e-hasarat vo sunaa sunaa ke roye
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5th May 2008, 07:26 PM
merii daastan-e-hasarat vo sunaa sunaa ke roye
mere aazamaane vaale mujhe aazamaa ke roye
next.....
maslahat chaahtii hai ke manzil mile
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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merii daastan-e-hasarat vo sunaa sunaa ke roye
mere aazamaane vaale mujhe aazamaa ke roye
next.....
maslahat chaahtii hai ke manzil mile
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maslahat chaahtii hai ke manzil mile
aur dil DhuuNDtaa hai ko’ii kaarvaaN
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vo aaye ghar me.n hamaare Khudaa kii qudrat hai
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maslahat chaahtii hai ke manzil mile
aur dil DhuuNDtaa hai ko’ii kaarvaaN
next:
vo aaye ghar me.n hamaare Khudaa kii qudrat hai
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vo aaye ghar me.n hamaare khudaa kii qudrat hai
kabhii ham un ko kabhii apane ghar ko dekhate hai.n
next...
bhul shaayad bahut ba.Dii kar lii
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Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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vo aaye ghar me.n hamaare khudaa kii qudrat hai
kabhii ham un ko kabhii apane ghar ko dekhate hai.n
next...
bhul shaayad bahut ba.Dii kar lii
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bhul shaayad bahut ba.Dii kar lii
dil ne duniya se dosti kar li.....
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dost ban kar bhii nahii.n saath nibhaanevaalaa
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bhul shaayad bahut ba.Dii kar lii
dil ne duniya se dosti kar li.....
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dost ban kar bhii nahii.n saath nibhaanevaalaa
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dost ban kar bhii nahii.n saath nibhaanevaalaa
vahii andaaz hai zaalim kaa zamaanevaalaa
Betabiya naseeb mein thi warna humnashi....
Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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dost ban kar bhii nahii.n saath nibhaanevaalaa
vahii andaaz hai zaalim kaa zamaanevaalaa
Betabiya naseeb mein thi warna humnashi....
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Lagata hai is sher ka duusra misra kisii ko nahii.n pata, atah aap khud hi bata de.n to mehrbaani hogii
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jee zaroor kiye dete hain hum meherbani......
Betabiya naseeb mein thi warna humnashi....
Yeh kya zaroor tha ki unhi par nazar pade...
akbar illahabadi~
next......
Kuch tabiyat hi mili thi aisi,chense jeene ki surat na hui
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Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
Jaane kya samjhi main useN
Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se
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11th June 2008, 11:39 PM
BETABIYAN NASEEB MEIN THEEN WARNA HIMNASHEEN
RAATON KO JAAGNE KI ZAROORAT THI KYA MUJHE.
prashant vasl
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12th June 2008, 01:10 AM
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Originally Posted by mausam
jee zaroor kiye dete hain hum meherbani......
Betabiya naseeb mein thi warna humnashi....
Yeh kya zaroor tha ki unhi par nazar pade...
akbar illahabadi~
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Kuch tabiyat hi mili thi aisi,chense jeene ki surat na hui
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Kuch tabiyat he mili thi aisi chain se jeene ki surat na hui
Jis ko chaaha use apna na sake jo milaa us se muhabbat na hui
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ab mere pass tum aai ho to kya aai ho
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25th July 2008, 09:11 AM
ab mere paas tum aayee ho to kya aayee ho...
maine maana ke tum ik paikar-e-raanaee ho
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Ab tum aaye ho toh jaane ke liye mat aana
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Ek se musaafir hain, Ek sa muqaddar hai...
Main zameen pe tanha, aur woh aasmaano mein...
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28th July 2008, 01:47 PM
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Originally Posted by naina_cooleyes
ab mere paas tum aayee ho to kya aayee ho...
maine maana ke tum ik paikar-e-raanaee ho
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Ab tum aaye ho toh jaane ke liye mat aana
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naina jee, lagta hai is sher ka agla misra kisii ko pata nahii.n, to aap khud hi bata de.n
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ta.ng aa chuke hai.n kash-ma-kash-e-zindagii se ham
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