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14th August 2010, 12:09 AM
YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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14th August 2010, 12:16 AM
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
vaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh raps
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14th August 2010, 12:49 AM
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
behad khoobsurat....maza aa gaya padh kar naresh saheb....
daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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14th August 2010, 01:41 AM
Naresh jee ........ ek ala tareen aur beshkimti khayaalo ke gunche se piroyi aapki yeh kalaam behad haseen guldaste se kam nahi hai, jisme tanz ke kanto se lekar khushnuma patte tak saje hai..... It's a biggest and outstanding poem.......
Hum kuch aur nahi kahe sakte dil se daad .........
Jab usne kaha hum se ab tuu apna na raha
Dil jal sa gaya humara mazi ko sochte sochte
Faisle taqdeer ke lakeere badal nahi sakti
Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti
Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga
Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti
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14th August 2010, 01:57 AM
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Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
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Naresh sahab aadab ,,
Jitni bhi tareef ki jaye is khayal ki wo kamm hogi ,, Bhai kamal kar diya apne shayad apko pata nahi ... Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..Eak nahi balke hazarah dad apki khidmat hazir hai khubool karen .. ...Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe .. Do eak bate.N puchni hain apse Inshallah PM ke zariya puch longa .. Filhal is nayab takhleeq pe banda-e-nachiz ki dad qubool ho ..
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14th August 2010, 06:10 AM
Naresh sahab kya baat hai bhut hi umda kalaam aapka, bhut hi acha likhte haiN aap aapka ye sher yaqeenan khaas daad ka haqdaar hai qubool keejiye
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
likhte rahiye,
aslam
you.n na samjhoge kinare pe khade rehkar tum
behta dariya hu.n mujhy haath se choo kar daikho
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14th August 2010, 08:28 AM
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YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
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naresh bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob.....dil se daad.....yun hi tumhaari lekhni rang barsaati rahe yahi dua hai
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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14th August 2010, 03:52 PM
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Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
vaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh hhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh raps
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Bahut bahut shukriya............Parveen Komal Ji !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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15th August 2010, 08:50 AM
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Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
behad khoobsurat....maza aa gaya padh kar naresh saheb....
daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
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Vikram Ji ... HAPPY INDEPENDENCE DAY... ! aapki pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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16th August 2010, 06:17 AM
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Naresh jee ........ ek ala tareen aur beshkimti khayaalo ke gunche se piroyi aapki yeh kalaam behad haseen guldaste se kam nahi hai, jisme tanz ke kanto se lekar khushnuma patte tak saje hai..... It's a biggest and outstanding poem.......
Hum kuch aur nahi kahe sakte dil se daad .........
Jab usne kaha hum se ab tuu apna na raha
Dil jal sa gaya humara mazi ko sochte sochte
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Parwaaz Sahab ........ aapka kavyaatmak andaaz me diya jawaab .... mujhe behad pasand aaya janaab......saath hi aapki pasandegi aur ijazat afzaai ka bahut bahut shukriya.....yunhi saath nibhaate rahen... khush rahen...
apna theek se khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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16th August 2010, 06:00 PM
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Naresh sahab aadab ,,
Jitni bhi tareef ki jaye is khayal ki wo kamm hogi ,, Bhai kamal kar diya apne shayad apko pata nahi ... Wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh..Eak nahi balke hazarah dad apki khidmat hazir hai khubool karen .. ...Allah apko hamesha khush rakhe .. Do eak bate.N puchni hain apse Inshallah PM ke zariya puch longa .. Filhal is nayab takhleeq pe banda-e-nachiz ki dad qubool ho ..
khadim
qadeertoopchi
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Qadeer Sahab ! Aadaab ! aapki khaas taareef aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya.... aainda bhi aise hi hausla badhaate rahenge... khush rahen...
jee ... aapne tabadle khayal ki khwaish zaahir ki hai.....swaagat hai... ! Pm yaa yahoo se online baat kar sakte hai.....mera e-mail id post ke aakhir me ankit hai .... ! mujhe khushi hogi ..... aapse baat karke ....
apna theek se khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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16th August 2010, 06:49 PM
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YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
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Naresh ji,
bahut khoob dear... ehsaas bahut sunder hai aur lafzon me bhi kashish hai... dilse daad hazir hai... yuhi likhte rahiye... khush rahiye....
"LAMHA"
mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa ,
ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe....
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17th August 2010, 08:06 AM
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Naresh sahab kya baat hai bhut hi umda kalaam aapka, bhut hi acha likhte haiN aap aapka ye sher yaqeenan khaas daad ka haqdaar hai qubool keejiye
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
likhte rahiye,
aslam
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Aslam Bhai .... Aadaab ! aapki pasandegi aur khaas daad ka bahut bahut shukriya... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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17th August 2010, 10:32 AM
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YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
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bahut khoob Naresh ji,,,, dil se daad hazir hai....!!!!
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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17th August 2010, 10:40 AM
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YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
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superb...............................hats off to ur poetry.
reps +++
god bless u
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17th August 2010, 11:31 AM
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
aap hamesha hi bahut shandaar likhte hai Jnaab..
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17th August 2010, 08:03 PM
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naresh bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoob.....dil se daad.....yun hi tumhaari lekhni rang barsaati rahe yahi dua hai
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Rajinder Bhai.... Aadaab ! aapki pasandegi ... daad .... duaaon ka bahut bahut shukriya... aise hi hausla badhaate rahiyega... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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17th August 2010, 08:11 PM
Mashaaaaaaaaaaa Alaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
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18th August 2010, 05:59 AM
Lamha Ji .. Aadaab ! Aapki Purkhulus taareef aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya... aainda bhi aise hi hausla badhaati rahiyega.. khush rahiye...
duaaon ke saath...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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18th August 2010, 05:44 PM
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bahut khoob Naresh ji,,,, dil se daad hazir hai....!!!!
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Bahut bahut shukriya ... Kavita Ji ! aapki pasandegi aur daad ka !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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19th August 2010, 03:01 AM
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superb...............................hats off to ur poetry.
reps +++
god bless u
[sorry reps add nahi kar paa rahi]
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Sunita Ji ... Aapki Khaas Nawaazish Aur Ijazat Afzaai Ka bahut bahut shukriya ... ! Khush RaheN...
duaaon ke saath ...
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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19th August 2010, 03:44 PM
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YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
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ji khoob rehi ye peshkesh..................
Radhika
Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye
Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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20th August 2010, 03:11 AM
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Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
aap hamesha hi bahut shandaar likhte hai Jnaab..
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ABABBU Ji ...... Aapke saraahne ka Bahut bahut shukriya... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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20th August 2010, 07:11 AM
speechless........................................ ......................mook
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Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
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speechless........................................ ......................mook
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ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE }
Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai
Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de
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20th August 2010, 11:46 AM
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YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
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aapkaa likhaa naresh seedhe dil me utar gayaa hai jitni bhi taareef karu mai kam hogi is gazak ke liye daad apke liye meri taraf se ss
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21st August 2010, 07:56 AM
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Mashaaaaaaaaaaa Alaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
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Aapka koshish ko saraahne ka ..........bahut bahut shukriya Janaab JI !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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30th August 2010, 10:38 PM
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ji khoob rehi ye peshkesh..................
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Radhika Ji...... aapki pasandegi ka bahut bahut shukriya... khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath....
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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31st August 2010, 08:52 PM
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speechless........................................ ......................mook
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Parveen Ji ...... Post par aane ka bahut bahut shukriya !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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2nd September 2010, 08:02 AM
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aapkaa likhaa naresh seedhe dil me utar gayaa hai jitni bhi taareef karu mai kam hogi is gazak ke liye daad apke liye meri taraf se ss
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Aapki Pasandegi aur daad ka bahut bahut shukriya... Saloni Ji ! khush rahen...
duaaon ke saath,,,
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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7th September 2010, 11:12 PM
बहुत अच्छा लिखा है अपने..
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
क्या बात है
कुछ ऐसे पल जिनको संजोना है ,
शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे
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23rd January 2012, 05:50 PM
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बहुत अच्छा लिखा है अपने..
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
क्या बात है
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Sakhi Ji ... Bahut Inaayat Hai Aap Kii ... Behad ShukriyaaH !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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24th January 2012, 11:36 AM
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
very very nice .................................. !
Manshaa Thaakur
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24th January 2012, 07:55 PM
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Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
very very nice .................................. !
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Bahut Inaayat Hai Aap Kii ... Manshaa Ji ! Behad ShukriyaaH !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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24th January 2012, 09:57 PM
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YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
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bahut achcha naresh ji kabile taarif
Rashmi Sharma
path par kaante bahut hain tere
par manjil par jaana too.ne
dar na jatilata se jeewan ki
isko saral banana too.ne
pasat na hone paye honsle
khud ka sahas khud hi juta le
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25th January 2012, 08:41 AM
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YahaaN Koi Apna Nazar Aayega Kaise
Haisiiyat Se Chhota Ho Jaayega Kaise...
Milaa Nahi MuddatoN Uss Shakhs Se
Gar MilooN Toh Haath Milaayega Kaise...
Andhera Bahut Hai Chiiragh Jalaa Toh Luu
Hawaa Ko Magar Koi Samjhaayega Kaise...
Gar Khuda Har Zarurat Purii Kar De Yahaan
Phir Aadmi MazbooriyaN Giinaayega Kaise...
"Naresh" Ki Qaifiiyat UdaasiyoN Bhari Hai
Puchhne Pe Apni Shahariyat Bataayega Kaise...
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Behad khoobsurat ehsaas hai Naresh bhai - aapki kalam hamesha dil mein utar jaati hai
Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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26th January 2012, 11:49 AM
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bahut achcha naresh ji kabile taarif
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NawaazishaaT Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Rashmi Ji !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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26th January 2012, 01:19 PM
bahut khoob....................naresh jee.behatreen ghazal banee hai.
padhkar lutf aa gayaa.har ek sher lajawaab hai.
aapko dili daad o mubaraqbad.
khush rahe likhte rahe....................
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27th January 2012, 07:57 PM
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Behad khoobsurat ehsaas hai Naresh bhai - aapki kalam hamesha dil mein utar jaati hai
Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
-aapka apnaa
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NawaazishaaT Kaa Bahut Bahut ShukriyaaH !!!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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30th January 2012, 06:28 PM
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Originally Posted by uff ak
bahut khoob....................naresh jee.behatreen ghazal banee hai.
padhkar lutf aa gayaa.har ek sher lajawaab hai.
aapko dili daad o mubaraqbad.
khush rahe likhte rahe....................
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NawaazishaaT Kaa Bahut ShukriyaaH ... Uffak Ji !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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