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Chand Gali to utra hoga - 15th April 2010, 06:59 AM
Chand gali to utra hoga
Mujhse shayud rootha hoga

Zahar pyalaa de kar mujhko
Kuch to wo bhi tarpa hoga

Chupke chupke poNcha hoga
AaNkh se gar kuch tapka hoga

Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga

NeeNd uRa kar meri wo bhi
Shub bhar chatt par tehla hoga
   
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15th April 2010, 10:05 AM
Usne khat to bheja hoga
Mujh tak hi na pahuNcha hoga

Nice One ........Brijinder Ji........Bahut Umdaa Khayal raha aapka........bahut khoob !



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18th April 2010, 12:29 PM
Usne khat to bheja hoga
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bahut hi khoob

bahut hi khoob

kafi der kar di lekin apne ye sher likhne main
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18th April 2010, 05:39 PM
Ehsaas acche haiN Brijinder jii.......................



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bahut acche janaab.......

u r one of the best here

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Mere Haato Se Kalam Cheen Lo Yuhi Mar Jaoonga Me

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thanks - 21st April 2010, 02:41 AM
I am very thankful to all of you for the kind words,especially to Amit saheb for those very beautiful words.I am moved.
   
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