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zindagi - 20th April 2006, 12:11 PM

Hi,
I m rubeena parveen
main pehli bar apna likha hua kuch de rahi hoon ummid he pasand ayega. aur main ummid karti hoon ap log mujhey ye bhi batayaenge ki kahin kuch ghalti ya kami to nahi he.

Zindagi sabhi ki khushgawar nazar aati he
Har waraq iska dekho to ye azab nazar ati he
Pareshani aur zindagi hain ek shai(cheez)ke do nam
Kamyab hain wo log jin ko ye bhati he
Chuninda afrad ko deti he ye khushiyan
Zyada tar ko to ye rulatihe
Suntey they chaar din ki he zindagi
Magar ye to bahut taweel(lambi) nazar ati he
Tum bhi to Rubeena ho unmain shumar
Jinko ye zindagi bahut satati he

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hi nice - 20th April 2006, 02:06 PM

Hi Rubeena

good good very nice aapne bhut acha likha hai isi tarha likhte rehiye bahut aage tak jaogi isse bhi acha likho ye duya hai hamai aage tum barogi ye umeed hai hamari..

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20th April 2006, 03:56 PM

Ek diya jo sare rah jalane nikle,
Aandhya bankar kai log buzane nikle.


Hey Krishna tu is kalyug mein aa kar to dikha…

Tune 18 saal ki umar me mama kans ko mara,
BIN LADEN ko hath laga kar to dikha…

Tune Arjun ko to Saari Geeta sunayee,
Mere Project Manager se ek baar baat kar ke to dikha..

Tune to Arjun ka Sarathi banke Pandavon ko jitaaya
Indian Cricket team ka Coach ban ke WorldCup jitaake to dikha…

Tune bhari mehfil mein draupadi ko saree pehnai,
Mallika sherawat ko ek jodi kapde pehna ke to dikha…

Tune gokul ki 1600 gopiyan patai,
Meri company ki sirf ek ladki ko pata kar to dikha…

Hey Krishna tu is kalyug mein aa kar to dikha…



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aaj tak apni be kali ka sabab khud bhi jana nahi ki tujh se kahen
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ek dya jo - 20th April 2006, 04:19 PM

hi
rubeena ji
aap pahele bar lekhe ho to etna accha lekhe ho agar aap pahle se lekhti hoti to malum nahi ketne shayri ko peche chor de hoti
aap ese taraha lekhte ek duneya m aap ka alag pahchan hoga
ye mera duaa hai


Ek diya jo sare rah jalane nikle,
Aandhya bankar kai log buzane nikle.


Hey Krishna tu is kalyug mein aa kar to dikha…

Tune 18 saal ki umar me mama kans ko mara,
BIN LADEN ko hath laga kar to dikha…

Tune Arjun ko to Saari Geeta sunayee,
Mere Project Manager se ek baar baat kar ke to dikha..

Tune to Arjun ka Sarathi banke Pandavon ko jitaaya
Indian Cricket team ka Coach ban ke WorldCup jitaake to dikha…

Tune bhari mehfil mein draupadi ko saree pehnai,
Mallika sherawat ko ek jodi kapde pehna ke to dikha…

Tune gokul ki 1600 gopiyan patai,
Meri company ki sirf ek ladki ko pata kar to dikha…

Hey Krishna tu is kalyug mein aa kar to dikha…




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dukh fasana nahi ki tujh se kahen
dil bhi mana nahi ki tujh se kahen
aaj tak apni be kali ka sabab khud bhi jana nahi ki tujh se kahen
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20th April 2006, 04:30 PM

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bahut achee hai - 20th April 2006, 04:33 PM

agar ye aghaz hai to to safar-e-sukhan khushnuma rahega bahut achee lagee zindgee

firaq kee kahee baat yaad aa gayee

zindgee kya hai e dost
aa sohchen aur udas ho jayen

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21st April 2006, 11:28 AM

rubeena ji
aapka sawagat hai shayri ki chhoti magar piyaari si family mai
aapko padhkar bus itna hi kahenge ki jab pahila hi kalam itna pyara hai bhaut hi achha padhne ko milega hum yaqeen hai

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Re: zindagi - 23rd April 2006, 08:30 PM

Rubeena,

Lagta nahi ke aapne pehli baar likha hai... yeh to bahut khoobsurat hai... mujhe bahut pasand aaye aapke aashaar... likhti rahiyga... do keep coming...


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24th April 2006, 10:09 AM

Rubeena,

Lagta nahi ke aapne pehli baar likha hai... yeh to bahut khoobsurat hai... mujhe bahut pasand aaye aapke aashaar... likhti rahiyga... do keep coming...


Pulikit ji
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reply ke liye bahut bahut shukurya jan kar achha laga ki apko is nachez ki choti si koshish pasand ayi

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Re: zindagi - 24th April 2006, 03:12 PM

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Originally posted by Rubeena Parveen
Hi,
I m rubeena parveen
main pehli bar apna likha hua kuch de rahi hoon ummid he pasand ayega. aur main ummid karti hoon ap log mujhey ye bhi batayaenge ki kahin kuch ghalti ya kami to nahi he.

Zindagi sabhi ki khushgawar nazar aati he
Har waraq iska dekho to ye azab nazar ati he
Pareshani aur zindagi hain ek shai(cheez)ke do nam
Kamyab hain wo log jin ko ye bhati he
Chuninda afrad ko deti he ye khushiyan
Zyada tar ko to ye rulatihe
Suntey they chaar din ki he zindagi
Magar ye to bahut taweel(lambi) nazar ati he
Tum bhi to Rubeena ho unmain shumar
Jinko ye zindagi bahut satati he

shukurya
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waaah rubinaa ji aap ke vichaar padh kar sach mai tasaali hui
bahut hi achha likha hai aap ne bas aise hi likhte rahiye

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25th April 2006, 09:36 AM

manu ji
adab
sabse pehle reply ke liye shukurya jan kar achha laga ki apko ye choti si koshish pasand ayi .aur agar ap logon ka pyar milta raha to ye koshish zarur jari rahegi
thanx once again

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