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kabhii aah lab pe machal ga_ii kabhii ashk aa.Nkh se Dhal gaye
vo tumhaare Gam ke chiraaG hai.n kabhii bujh gaye kabhii jal gaye

mai.n Khayaal-o-Khvaab kii mahafile.n na baqadr-e-shauq sajaa sakaa
tumhaarii ik nazar ke saath hii mere sab iraade badal gaye

kabhii rang me.n kabhii ruup me.n kabhii chaa.Nv me.n kabhii dhuup me.n
kahii.n aafataab-e-nazar hai.n vo kahii.n maahataab me.n Dhal gaye

jo fanaa huye Gam-e-ishq me.n u.nhe.n zindagii kaa na Gam huaa
jo na apanii aag me.n jal sake vo paraa_ii aag me.n jal gaye

yaa u.nhe.n bhii merii tarah junuu.N to phir un me.n umjh me.n ye farq kyaa
mai.n giraft-e-Gam se na bach sakaa vo huduud-e-Gam se nikal gaye

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26th October 2015, 10:16 AM

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kabhii aah lab pe machal ga_ii kabhii ashk aa.Nkh se Dhal gaye
vo tumhaare Gam ke chiraaG hai.n kabhii bujh gaye kabhii jal gaye

mai.n Khayaal-o-Khvaab kii mahafile.n na baqadr-e-shauq sajaa sakaa
tumhaarii ik nazar ke saath hii mere sab iraade badal gaye

kabhii rang me.n kabhii ruup me.n kabhii chaa.Nv me.n kabhii dhuup me.n
kahii.n aafataab-e-nazar hai.n vo kahii.n maahataab me.n Dhal gaye

jo fanaa huye Gam-e-ishq me.n u.nhe.n zindagii kaa na Gam huaa
jo na apanii aag me.n jal sake vo paraa_ii aag me.n jal gaye

yaa u.nhe.n bhii merii tarah junuu.N to phir un me.n umjh me.n ye farq kyaa
mai.n giraft-e-Gam se na bach sakaa vo huduud-e-Gam se nikal gaye

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waahh dhaval bhai kyaa kahne... abardast ghazal share ki hai aapne....
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26th October 2015, 12:04 PM

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kabhii aah lab pe machal ga_ii kabhii ashk aa.Nkh se Dhal gaye
vo tumhaare Gam ke chiraaG hai.n kabhii bujh gaye kabhii jal gaye

mai.n Khayaal-o-Khvaab kii mahafile.n na baqadr-e-shauq sajaa sakaa
tumhaarii ik nazar ke saath hii mere sab iraade badal gaye

kabhii rang me.n kabhii ruup me.n kabhii chaa.Nv me.n kabhii dhuup me.n
kahii.n aafataab-e-nazar hai.n vo kahii.n maahataab me.n Dhal gaye

jo fanaa huye Gam-e-ishq me.n u.nhe.n zindagii kaa na Gam huaa
jo na apanii aag me.n jal sake vo paraa_ii aag me.n jal gaye

yaa u.nhe.n bhii merii tarah junuu.N to phir un me.n umjh me.n ye farq kyaa
mai.n giraft-e-Gam se na bach sakaa vo huduud-e-Gam se nikal gaye

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Waaah....bahut pasand aayi aapki share ki huyi ghazal....
Shukriya..dhaval sahab...

Aate rahein.....
Khush rahein....



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17th November 2015, 12:53 AM

dhaval....itne bhari bharkam gazhal...arrreeee aap meaning toh likh dete toh thodi samajh mai aa jaati...bahaut koshish ki par sar ke upar se nikal gayi kaafi toh :-(

Thodi bahaut samajh aayi toh it sounded good.

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17th November 2015, 02:03 AM

Jiyaa ..bhaari bharkham shabd kahaan hai maaine to ek dam seedhi saadi Ghazal pesh kii hay fir bhee mujhe lagtaa hai tumhe shayad do shabd samjh me nahi aaye hogee aftaab means sooraj ...mahtab means the moon...baqadre-e-shauq means as per desire.... ... ab chalo itni kehnat karwai paani poori ki party to banti hai

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17th November 2015, 08:14 AM

Chottu...........bahut khoobsurat gazal share ki hai tumne, majja aa gya pad kar


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kabhii aah lab pe machal ga_ii kabhii ashk aa.Nkh se Dhal gaye
vo tumhaare Gam ke chiraaG hai.n kabhii bujh gaye kabhii jal gaye

mai.n Khayaal-o-Khvaab kii mahafile.n na baqadr-e-shauq sajaa sakaa
tumhaarii ik nazar ke saath hii mere sab iraade badal gaye

kabhii rang me.n kabhii ruup me.n kabhii chaa.Nv me.n kabhii dhuup me.n
kahii.n aafataab-e-nazar hai.n vo kahii.n maahataab me.n Dhal gaye

jo fanaa huye Gam-e-ishq me.n u.nhe.n zindagii kaa na Gam huaa
jo na apanii aag me.n jal sake vo paraa_ii aag me.n jal gaye

yaa u.nhe.n bhii merii tarah junuu.N to phir un me.n umjh me.n ye farq kyaa
mai.n giraft-e-Gam se na bach sakaa vo huduud-e-Gam se nikal gaye

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bhut khub bhai......
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