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Thumbs up Ghazal: iShQ tuune zaKhm aise de diye...! - 20th July 2015, 07:33 PM

Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namskaar aur Aadaab!!

aik baar fir bazm meiN haaZir huuN nayii Ghazal ke saath.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii Ghazal pasaNd aayengee... aapki raa'ey kaa iNtezaar rahengaa.. mulaaiizaa farmaaiiye....!


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iShQ tuune zaKhm aise de diye
naa hi ziNdaa hum rahe naa mar rahe

wo zamaanaa KhuShnumaa saa Kho gayaa
Ghumzadaa dil Ghumzadaa hum ho gaye

Ik mukammal ziNdagee kii aarazoo
Ye Khayaal aate hi aaNsuu gir paDe

maikade se dosatee jab se hu’ii
GhooNT kaDwe ziNdagee ke pee rahe

maikade: bar

Ghar taraf jo deKhate haii lauT kar
deKhate haiN dard ke hii Qaafile

Ik zamaane baad mujh ko tum diKhe
zaKhm saare kar gaye fir se hare

dushmanii haii "JOSH" kee yuuN iShQ se
iShQ par wo ik Ghazal bhee naa liKhe

"JOSH" kaisaa waasataa ye iShQ se
door reh kar bhee ise ho chaahate


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20th July 2015, 10:25 PM

Bohut dard bhare ehsaas....

Bohut achi lagi aapki ye pyari si koshish

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20th July 2015, 10:39 PM

Waaaahhh.dhaval ji......bahut pasand aaya aapka dard me dooba hua ye kalaam......bahut sari daad kubool kijiyega..
Bas ek baat ki ishq se itni bhi dushmani kya...ki ek ghazal bhi na likhe........Agli baar ishq me miliye janaab...
likhte rahiye....
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Dhaval ji, aapne bahaut khubsoorat likha hai...har ek sher bahaut pasand aaya.

Aur khaaskar ke yeh lines toh dil ke bahaut kareeb rahi...

Ik zamaane baad mujh ko tum diKhe
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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namskaar aur Aadaab!!

aik baar fir bazm meiN haaZir huuN nayii Ghazal ke saath.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii Ghazal pasaNd aayengee... aapki raa'ey kaa iNtezaar rahengaa.. mulaaiizaa farmaaiiye....!


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iShQ tuune zaKhm aise de diye
naa hi ziNdaa hum rahe naa mar rahe

wo zamaanaa KhuShnumaa saa Kho gayaa
Ghumzadaa dil Ghumzadaa hum ho gaye

Ik mukammal ziNdagee kii aarazoo
Ye Khayaal aate hi aaNsuu gir paDe

maikade se dosatee jab se hu’ii
GhooNT kaDwe ziNdagee ke pee rahe

maikade: bar

Ghar taraf jo deKhate haii lauT kar
deKhate haiN dard ke hii Qaafile

Ik zamaane baad mujh ko tum diKhe
zaKhm saare kar gaye fir se hare

dushmanii haii "JOSH" kee yuuN iShQ se
iShQ par wo ik Ghazal bhee naa liKhe

"JOSH" kaisaa waasataa ye iShQ se
door reh kar bhee ise ho chaahate


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21st July 2015, 04:10 PM

Dhaval ji, bohot achhi koshish.
Aapka yeh kalaam achha laga.

Likhte rahiye

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Chottu...main hairaan hu ki teri kalam kuch waqt khamosh kaise rhi, etne umda, etne josh bhare, dard bhare ehsaas kaise ghute rhe teri kalam meiN, ab esko phir se khamosh mat hone dena...duaa hai teri kalam chalti rhe...par dard ki jagah agar ishq jayada ho to majja do-guna ho jayega.

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bahut khub - 28th July 2015, 09:01 PM

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Kaise ho aap..? Aapki ghazal padhi..to reply likhe bina raha nahi gaya.. Bas etana kaunga ki likhate rahe.

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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namskaar aur Aadaab!!

aik baar fir bazm meiN haaZir huuN nayii Ghazal ke saath.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii Ghazal pasaNd aayengee... aapki raa'ey kaa iNtezaar rahengaa.. mulaaiizaa farmaaiiye....!


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iShQ tuune zaKhm aise de diye
naa hi ziNdaa hum rahe naa mar rahe

wo zamaanaa KhuShnumaa saa Kho gayaa
Ghumzadaa dil Ghumzadaa hum ho gaye

Ik mukammal ziNdagee kii aarazoo
Ye Khayaal aate hi aaNsuu gir paDe

maikade se dosatee jab se hu’ii
GhooNT kaDwe ziNdagee ke pee rahe

maikade: bar

Ghar taraf jo deKhate haii lauT kar
deKhate haiN dard ke hii Qaafile

Ik zamaane baad mujh ko tum diKhe
zaKhm saare kar gaye fir se hare

dushmanii haii "JOSH" kee yuuN iShQ se
iShQ par wo ik Ghazal bhee naa liKhe

"JOSH" kaisaa waasataa ye iShQ se
door reh kar bhee ise ho chaahate


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Mere Pyaare dostoN:

Namskaar aur Aadaab!!

aik baar fir bazm meiN haaZir huuN nayii Ghazal ke saath.. ummid kartaa huuN aapko merii Ghazal pasaNd aayengee... aapki raa'ey kaa iNtezaar rahengaa.. mulaaiizaa farmaaiiye....!


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iShQ tuune zaKhm aise de diye
naa hi ziNdaa hum rahe naa mar rahe

wo zamaanaa KhuShnumaa saa Kho gayaa
Ghumzadaa dil Ghumzadaa hum ho gaye

Ik mukammal ziNdagee kii aarazoo
Ye Khayaal aate hi aaNsuu gir paDe

maikade se dosatee jab se hu’ii
GhooNT kaDwe ziNdagee ke pee rahe

maikade: bar

Ghar taraf jo deKhate haii lauT kar
deKhate haiN dard ke hii Qaafile

Ik zamaane baad mujh ko tum diKhe
zaKhm saare kar gaye fir se hare

dushmanii haii "JOSH" kee yuuN iShQ se
iShQ par wo ik Ghazal bhee naa liKhe

"JOSH" kaisaa waasataa ye iShQ se
door reh kar bhee ise ho chaahate


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Bohut dard bhare ehsaas....

Bohut achi lagi aapki ye pyari si koshish

Yun hi likhte rahiye.
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Aaj bade dinon baad khud ki hi likhi hui ghazal padh rahaa tha... Padhte rahen aage bhee

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Waaaahhh.dhaval ji......bahut pasand aaya aapka dard me dooba hua ye kalaam......bahut sari daad kubool kijiyega..
Bas ek baat ki ishq se itni bhi dushmani kya...ki ek ghazal bhi na likhe........Agli baar ishq me miliye janaab...
likhte rahiye....
Khush rahiye...
Madhu jee

Namaste

Padhne ke liye shukriyaah.. Saath dete rahen

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Dhaval ji, aapne bahaut khubsoorat likha hai...har ek sher bahaut pasand aaya.

Aur khaaskar ke yeh lines toh dil ke bahaut kareeb rahi...

Ik zamaane baad mujh ko tum diKhe
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Keep writing.
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Ghazal kee pasandgee ke liye main aapka behad shukraguzaar huyb

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Chottu...main hairaan hu ki teri kalam kuch waqt khamosh kaise rhi, etne umda, etne josh bhare, dard bhare ehsaas kaise ghute rhe teri kalam meiN, ab esko phir se khamosh mat hone dena...duaa hai teri kalam chalti rhe...par dard ki jagah agar ishq jayada ho to majja do-guna ho jayega.

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19th April 2018, 01:13 AM

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Kaise ho aap..? Aapki ghazal padhi..to reply likhe bina raha nahi gaya.. Bas etana kaunga ki likhate rahe.

Akant...
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Main theek hun bhaiya.. Aap sab se hi seekhaa thaa thoda bahot kich likh letaa hub ab

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bahut khoob Dhaval miyaan.................. kya baat hai
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Bahut badhiya Dhaval... Gehre ehsaas, sundar bayaani. Likhte raho yun hi.
Pulkit bhaiya

Namaste

Thank you so much. Padhte rahuye

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Dhaval bhai - Der se nazar padhi aur ab aa paaya hoon, khoob ehsaas hue hai yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
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Bohat achi koshish hai dhaval yunhi likhte raho khush raho
Maani didi

Thank you... Padhte rahuye

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