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shaad-agaaz thi guftaar... - 26th March 2005, 10:31 AM

DostoN chand sher hain jo aapki nazar kar raha hoon... shuruaat khushi se ki the lekin phir se ek baar ghumgeen anjaam niklaa hai... aapki nazr-e-karam ke liye haazir hai.... mulahizaa farmaeeye...


kya tune zulfoN ko apni sanvaar dala hai,
ke aaj raat mein shaamil zara ujaala hai.

kya tune maathe pe bindya sajaana choD diya,
ke aaine ka mijaaz aaj kuch niraala hai.

kya neend aayee nahi raat tujhe derr talak,
ke zer-e-shams-o-maah aasmaan kaala hai.

zer-e-shams-o-maah = under sun & moon (her eyes)

chua nahi naseem-e-subha ne kya aaj tujhe,
har ek hasti ka dum jaise ghuuTne wala hai.

naseem-e-subha=morning wind

kya saadgi se qatl ka iraada kar baithe..?
na puuch kaise humne apna dil sambhala hai.

hamare haath ki rekha hamaari dushman hai,
warna mehnat mein apna naam sabse aalaa hai.

humse pucho kya farq hai rayees-o-muflis mein,
ke apni raat diwali hai din diwaala hai.

rayees=wealthy, muflis=poor.

shaad-aagaaz thi guftaar magar abb "Talib"
qbl-e-anjaam yunn laga ke koi naala hai.

shaad-aagaaz=joyous beginning,
guftaar=conversation/talking.
qbl-e-anjaam=before ending.
naala=cry/rudan


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27th March 2005, 08:57 AM

Talib jiju,

Yeh kya ho gaya hai aapko...??
Shaadi ka ladoo se yeh halat hai kya?

Bahi dard pe likha khoobsurat likha magar yeh kya baat hui...??

Bilkis di ko pata chalega to khair nahi aapki....

Dard aap par kuch has raha hai

Khushi ke mauke par yunh dard ki baat ki nahi jaati...
Pyaar karna hai to khushi se kijiye dard se nahi...
Dard na kissi ko dost hai na kabhi ho sakta hai...
Kabhi Dard mein, gum mein, Tanhaye ki galiyon mein na ghumiye...
Dard kabhi khoobsurat nahi hota...
Ek adiction hai Dard... Aur koi addiction zindagi ke liye acha nahi hota..

A Person feels what he thinks.... Today happiness awaits you in a new way in ur life... It is upto you to open the doors to it... or let it go....

Umeed hai aap meri baaton ka bura nahi maanenge...
Aur likhenge aur kuch aisa jo har ek chehre par muskan chod jaaye... dard nahi....

dua hai rab se aapke ird gird bhi kabhi dukh ke badal na mandraye

Aapke saare dard mere meri sari khushiya aapki
--Famous lines by a very great Man Me

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27th March 2005, 10:06 AM

Talib jee…

This better be your last ghazal in this forum…iss ke baad aap hamesha ishq section mein dikhaayi dene chahiyein…samjhe…


Waise ghazal bahut khubsurat hai…ispe kuch kehna padega hee…

kya tune zulfoN ko apni sanvaar dala hai,
ke aaj raat mein shaamil zara ujaala hai.

kya tune maathe pe bindya sajaana choD diya,
ke aaine ka mijaaz aaj kuch niraala hai.

[color=dark blue]Hamesha kee tarah aapke tasavvur kee nazar mein jaadu hai, nasha hai aur phir musavvir ke rangon se bani tasveer... [/color]

kya neend aayee nahi raat tujhe derr talak,
ke zer-e-shams-o-maah aasmaan kaala hai.

[color=dark blue]hmmmn…iske baad dark circles under someone’s eyes will never seem ugly to me… [/color]

chua nahi naseem-e-subha ne kya aaj tujhe,
har ek hasti ka dum jaise ghuuTne wala hai.

[color=dark blue]uff…yeh andaaz qaatilana… [/color]

kya saadgi se qatl ka iraada kar baithe..?
na puuch kaise humne apna dil sambhala hai.

[color=dark blue]………….[/color]

hamare haath ki rekha hamaari dushman hai,
warna mehnat mein apna naam sabse aalaa hai.

humse pucho kya farq hai rayees-o-muflis mein,
ke apni raat diwali hai din diwaala hai.

shaad-aagaaz thi guftaar magar abb "Talib"
qbl-e-anjaam yunn laga ke koi naala hai.

Yeh dastuur hai ki har cheez ke aakhiri waqt mein insaan maatam manata hai, apne rudan se dharti aasmaan ko rula dena chahta hai…lekin phir nayi subah hoti hai…khuubsurat, armaan bhari, aur khushiyaan liye huye…aur jald hee use sab kuch bhuul jaata hai…bhagwaan kare aapko apne naye jeewan mein wo sab khushiyan milein jinka chaahat aap karein…

[color=dark blue]Haath kee rekha bhi sanwar jaayegi
Jo bilkiss ki adaa usmein ubhar aayegi

Degi pyaar ta umr jiska tu intekhaab kare
sitare khushiyon ke daaman mein bhar laayegi[/color]


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Re: shaad-agaaz thi guftaar... - 28th March 2005, 10:12 AM

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kya tune maathe pe bindya sajaana choD diya,
ke aaine ka mijaaz aaj kuch niraala hai.


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hamare haath ki rekha hamaari dushman hai,
warna mehnat mein apna naam sabse aalaa hai.
talib jee...

dil chu lene maiN mahir aapke alfaazoN ki talwaar jab ... saade kagaz par chalti hai ... tab na jane kagaj bhi kaise apne aapko khak hone se bachata hoga ... ye to wo hi janta hai ... aapne jo ashaar yahaN likhe ... sahi kaha .. ki khushi se gham ki taraf rukh kar gaye aap ./.. par phir kshitiz bhai ki baat yaad aayi .. ki har dard kahiN kisi khushi maiN hi panapta hai ... khair jo bhi ho ... ek pur asar kalam ko anjaam de hi diya aapne .. bohat khoob ...

pora kalam apne aapn maiN ek nageena hai ... par jo maine ye quote kiye .. bohat pasand aaye ... aapke samne koi hasti to nahi rakhta ... par ek shrota ki tarah wah karne se nahi rok sakta khud ko ... meri dher sari daad kabool kareN aap ...

apna khayal rakhiyega ...

aapka apna

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28th March 2005, 01:01 PM

kya tune zulfoN ko apni sanvaar dala hai,
ke aaj raat mein shaamil zara ujaala hai.

kya tune maathe pe bindya sajaana choD diya,
ke aaine ka mijaaz aaj kuch niraala hai.

Waaahhh!


kya neend aayee nahi raat tujhe derr talak,
ke zer-e-shams-o-maah aasmaan kaala hai.

chua nahi naseem-e-subha ne kya aaj tujhe,
har ek hasti ka dum jaise ghuuTne wala hai.

Waahh...Bahut hi khoobusrat!!


kya saadgi se qatl ka iraada kar baithe..?
na puuch kaise humne apna dil sambhala hai.

hamare haath ki rekha hamaari dushman hai,
warna mehnat mein apna naam sabse aalaa hai.

Bahut khooobb!! kyaa saadgi se qtal ka iraada kar baithe!! WaaH!


humse pucho kya farq hai rayees-o-muflis mein,
ke apni raat diwali hai din diwaala hai.

shaad-aagaaz thi guftaar magar abb "Talib"
qbl-e-anjaam yunn laga ke koi naala hai.

Beautiful!!

Talib Bhai!!

Ek baar fir aapka andaaz, aapke ehsaas aur aapke ashaar behad khoobsurat lage... bahut khoobsurati se bayaan kiya hai aapne inko.... Padhkar behad accha laga.... Meri daad kubool lijiyega....

Apna khayal rkahiyega.. aur yun hi mehfil sajate rahiyega


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Talib saheb,

Aap ki baat hameesha se bahut aachi lagti hai. Kehne ki zaroorat nahin ki bahut khoob ban padi hai. Khuda aap ki kalam ko salamat rakkhe....

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