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saw baar chaha tumhey ek baar bhi nibha na sakey
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saw baar chaha tumhey ek baar bhi nibha na sakey - 25th May 2003, 06:47 PM

Wo Pal Pal Ka Yaad Aana~Wo Pal Pal Ki Tanhai~Ehsaas-e-Tamanna Ehsaas-e-Judai

saw baar chaha tumhey ek baar bhi nibha na sakey
laut key us zamaney mein hum jaa na sakey
zindagi ney kuch aiysey looti khushi meri
key phir chah key bhi hum muskuraa na sakey
pukara tum ney to aaney ki koshish ki magar
thorey qadam chaley aur phir qadam barh_daa na sakey
hadh-e-nigaah tak ayaa toofaan firdos-e-ishq mein
beaabruu howey, raasta baana na sakey
sach kehtey hain hum, baat mano to
bhool kar bhi tumhein hum bhula na sakey
saw baar chaha tumhein ek baar bhi nibha na sakey
laut key us zamaney mein hum jaa na sakey


Karti Nahi Shairee... aur qalam utha rakha hai.....

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25th May 2003, 09:01 PM

wah .. bahut payara sa Qalam likha hai aapne
keep it up


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25th May 2003, 09:18 PM

waaqaye bahot khoob likhaa hai aapne!
ghazal behad pasand aayii..

aage bhii yehii ummiid rahe gii kii isi taraH aap mehfil meiN raang laate raheN ge!

taareef ke saath,
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25th May 2003, 10:31 PM

aapne kaafi mushkil ground per yeh ghazal likhi hai.
magar phir bhi kaafi had tak aap ise pur asar banane mein kamyab hain.
shayed iski wajah aap ke lehje ki sachchaaee aur ikhlaas hai.
likhte rahen, ham zaroor parhen ge.

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26th May 2003, 01:09 PM

Behad khubsoorat kalaam likha hai aapne! Isme ek ajab si rawani hai.. lafzon ki, ehsaason ki, jazbaaton ki.. bohat pasand aaya hume! Umeed hai ki aapke aur bhi kalaam paRne milenge..


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