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ajabb haalt hain is dil ki
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ajabb haalt hain is dil ki - 4th November 2002, 06:34 PM

ajab haalt hain is dil ki
yeh hain ke mane hi nahein

aaj dil bhut ghabra raha hai
shahid kisko yaad kar raha hain

aaj phir aankhon se ansoo nikal aate hain
bede bede pata nahein yeh dil kaha kho jaata hai

ajab halat hain is dil
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vooooooooooooooow
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vooooooooooooooow - 4th November 2002, 09:30 PM

hi neha

how r u buddy and wht have u been up 2 havnt seen u for a long time and this is a good poem is it gain one of ur those poems which are written in few minutes

how u feeling know anybetter i hope u r because i really missssssssssssss u
i will write to u agian
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nice one
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nice one - 4th November 2002, 11:14 PM

aadaab neha ... bahot hi badhiyaa likha hai aapne ....

jaise roomana jee ne kahan ....do pal mai likha hai lekin humeshaa ke ehsaas ko pirooya ho aisa lagta hai

keep it up....

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Re: vooooooooooooooow - 5th November 2002, 05:03 PM

hi roma

thanx for liking my poem and u know how i write than why r u akin me dear

i m fine hw r u i have just been a little busy with college wrk wht have u been up 2 anything new. congurajulations yaaar u r really lucky.

i m feeling alot better now and i miss u 2
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hi naeem - 5th November 2002, 05:05 PM

how r u and thanx its not as good as ur poems

and u make sure u keep up writing too because i hardly ever c any of ur poems wht happend to that shayt e tanha dil

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