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tinka bher hi hai jindagi tum mujhe jee lene do - 18th October 2005, 01:42 PM

tinka bher hi hai jindagi tum mujhe jee lene do
jaane kab sath chhod de hash ke ghum pi lene do

bahut bekraari hai ab to es tan mein sanam
mer ker bhi amar hone ka sukh to ji lene do

jo chhup ker baitha hoon dil mein tumhare
dil se baate kerne ka bheram mujhe pi lene do

na jaane kab kat jaaye door udati patang ki
kuchh pal hi sahi aazad hava mein ji lene do

jeevan per chhaya hai jo "Akant" ka darpan
arpan ker du yah janam yahi keram ji lene do




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Re: tinka bher hi hai jindagi tum mujhe jee lene do - 18th October 2005, 02:29 PM

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tinka bher hi hai jindagi tum mujhe jee lene do
jaane kab sath chhod de hash ke ghum pi lene do

bahut bekraari hai ab to es tan mein sanam
mer ker bhi amar hone ka sukh to ji lene do

jo chhup ker baitha hoon dil mein tumhare
dil se baate kerne ka bheram mujhe pi lene do

na jaane kab kat jaaye door udati patang ki
kuchh pal hi sahi aazad hava mein ji lene do

jeevan per chhaya hai jo "Akant" ka darpan
arpan ker du yah janam yahi keram ji lene do




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Hi Bhaiya,

bahoot khoob likha hai.. par aapko pehali baar dard me likhate hue padha hai isliye thoda ajeeb sa laga..

likhate raho.. aur haan apane waystata me thoda waqt apani behan ke liye bhi nikaal liya karo.. aapki koi khabar hi nahi mil rahi hai..


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18th October 2005, 07:49 PM

Akant ji,

Hamnesha ki tarhaa bahut achha likha hai... kuch waqt ho gaya tumhe parha hai... daad kubul karna aur yun hi likhte rehna. khush raho!

   
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hi - 19th October 2005, 02:18 PM

hello

bhut hi piyaari nazam hai magar yeh piyaar or ishq ke shiyaare likhne waale aap shayri - e - dard mai kiya kar rahe hai.

it is a really touchy poem waisey apki sanam kasie hai.

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Re: Re: tinka bher hi hai jindagi tum mujhe jee lene do - 19th October 2005, 03:11 PM

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Hi Bhaiya,

bahoot khoob likha hai.. par aapko pehali baar dard me likhate hue padha hai isliye thoda ajeeb sa laga..

likhate raho.. aur haan apane waystata me thoda waqt apani behan ke liye bhi nikaal liya karo.. aapki koi khabar hi nahi mil rahi hai..


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kaisi ho?? vaise tumhe jaanker ashcharya hoga ki maine shuruat shayri website mein dard forum se hi ki thi. main jyadatar dard mein hi likhata tha.. mujhe laga ki aaj dard forum mein hi ese post kerna chahiye so post ker diya.. vaise esk forum mein bhi eski jagah ban sakati hai.. tum aayi aur apane vichar likhi..achchha laga..

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19th October 2005, 04:45 PM

hi akant sahab......
bahut achcha lagaa padhkar apko.....ek arse ke baad jo padha hai......wiase maine bhi apko dard section me likhte huye pehli baar dekha......khair.....bahut achcha likha hai apne......dil se nikli taareef kabool kijiyega,
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hi - 20th October 2005, 11:27 AM

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Akant ji,

Hamnesha ki tarhaa bahut achha likha hai... kuch waqt ho gaya tumhe parha hai... daad kubul karna aur yun hi likhte rehna. khush raho!

Parul ji,

aap aayi yaha es page per bahut khushi mili. vyastata rah rahi hai aajkal esliye main regualar nahi raha pata.aata bhi hoon to kabhi kabhi bahut kam samay ke liye us dauran aap sabko padhana chata hoon..es vajah se reply bahut kam ker pata hoon per phir bhi kosis kerta hoon ki aap sab ko padh saku..aapaki daad mujhe kabul hai..aur shukriyah ada ker raha hoon aapaka...


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Re: hi - 20th October 2005, 11:31 AM

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bhut hi piyaari nazam hai magar yeh piyaar or ishq ke shiyaare likhne waale aap shayri - e - dard mai kiya kar rahe hai.

it is a really touchy poem waisey apki sanam kasie hai.

keep on writing
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Neha ji,

Bahut bahut dhanyvaad jo aapne meri rachana ko pasand ke kabil samjha.. vaise yah rachana aisi hai ki ese esk forum mein bhi agar main post kerta to chal jata..per esmein chhupe dard ko shayd vaha kam hi samjha jata.. aapko achchhi lagi samjha maine ki eski kimat mil gayi.. aati rahiyega aur khush rahiyega...

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20th October 2005, 01:26 PM

jo chhup ker baitha hoon dil mein tumhare
dil se baate kerne ka bheram mujhe pi lene do

jeevan per chhaya hai jo "Akant" ka darpan
arpan ker du yah janam yahi keram ji lene do


Akant bhai,

Bahut hi khoobsoorat ghazal likhi hai aapane...oopar likhe aashaar kucch zyada pasand aaye mujhe... aise hi likhte rahiye.. TC


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20th October 2005, 05:26 PM

akant bhai ..

hamesha se hi aap bahut achha likhte haiN magar kuch bateiN dil pe bahut gehra asar karti haiN

jeevan per chhaya hai jo "Akant" ka darpan
arpan ker du yah janam yahi keram ji lene do

Bahut khoob akant bhai ..

aise hi likhte rahiye

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thanks - 21st October 2005, 10:43 AM

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hi akant sahab......
bahut achcha lagaa padhkar apko.....ek arse ke baad jo padha hai......wiase maine bhi apko dard section me likhte huye pehli baar dekha......khair.....bahut achcha likha hai apne......dil se nikli taareef kabool kijiyega,
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Kaisi hain aap?? main achchha hoon...
meri creation aapko pasand aayi mujhe bahut khushi mili. ha sahi hai ki ek arse baad hi likh raha hoon. edhar meri vyastata kuchh jyada hi banti ja rahi hai esliye samay kam hi mil pata hai.. aur jab samya milta hai to mood nahi banta ki us samay kuchh likh saku. achank mood bana aur maine yah post likh diya. chunki kaafi dino se main sirf esk section mein hi post ker raha tha..ya yah kahiye ki main pain ki shayri likhane se bhag raha tha. yahi vajah thi ki main dard section mein nahi likh pata tha... aapki tareef hume kabul hai aue eska shukriyah aapko ada kerta hoon...


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hi - 21st October 2005, 11:12 AM

hey bro

vow this poem is just beautiful. i really do like it. dard ke saath piyaar piyaar ka milaap.

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jo chhup ker baitha hoon dil mein tumhare
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jeevan per chhaya hai jo "Akant" ka darpan
arpan ker du yah janam yahi keram ji lene do


Akant bhai,

Bahut hi khoobsoorat ghazal likhi hai aapane...oopar likhe aashaar kucch zyada pasand aaye mujhe... aise hi likhte rahiye.. TC
Thanks Pulkit,

kai din baad kuchh likh gaya vo bhi online hi maine likha tha.yani direct post kiya tha. well uper ki line pasand aayi aur apana kimati vakt diye, main abhari hoon.. samay ki vyastata hai aajakal...

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hamesha se hi aap bahut achha likhte haiN magar kuch bateiN dil pe bahut gehra asar karti haiN

jeevan per chhaya hai jo "Akant" ka darpan
arpan ker du yah janam yahi keram ji lene do

Bahut khoob akant bhai ..

aise hi likhte rahiye

tareef ke sath
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aap aaye yaha es post per dekhker bahut khushi mil. rahi baat shayri ki to kabhi kabhi kuchh line ban hi jaati hai jo apana prbhav gahare tak chhodati hai... uper ki line mein bahut kuchh hai..ya kahu ki sab kuchh hai.. pryasrat rahunga aage bhi likhane ke liye...

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21st October 2005, 06:25 PM

akant bhaiya bahut hi ahcha likha hai aapne bahut ahchi lagi aapki ye rachna mujhe.agar sach kahoon to alfaaz nahi mil rahe hain daad dene ke liye.bas aap yunhi likhte rahiye yahi darkhwast hai meri aapse.

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22nd October 2005, 12:56 PM

na jaane kab kat jaaye door udati patang ki
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Namaskar Akant ji

Kafi samay baad aapki rachna padhey....it's a nice composition. Hamare daad kabul kijeyga.......keep writing

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Re: hi - 24th October 2005, 01:27 PM

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vow this poem is just beautiful. i really do like it. dard ke saath piyaar piyaar ka milaap.

tc
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sachchiiiiiiiiii you have like it very much...thats good. jaha dard hoga vaha to pyar jaroor hoga.. kyoki bina darad ke pyar ki anbhuti hi nahi hoti and vice-versa.aur kya kahu..thanks for liking it...

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Hi - 24th October 2005, 01:30 PM

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akant bhaiya bahut hi ahcha likha hai aapne bahut ahchi lagi aapki ye rachna mujhe.agar sach kahoon to alfaaz nahi mil rahe hain daad dene ke liye.bas aap yunhi likhte rahiye yahi darkhwast hai meri aapse.

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kaise ho aap??? ab etna bhi mat chadao ki uper chadh jau to uter hi na pau..LOL thank you very much.. bas aise hi achanak likha gaya main ese...aur kya kahu... main kosis kerunga aage bhi kuchh na kuchh likhane ke liye...

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Namaskar Akant ji

Kafi samay baad aapki rachna padhey....it's a nice composition. Hamare daad kabul kijeyga.......keep writing

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Der se reply ker raha hoon..eska khed hai... sukanyaa aapko mera likha pasand aaya dil se dhanyvaad apko...


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Great composition........

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Great composition........

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hi - 21st November 2005, 06:37 PM

very nice Akant ji
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Re: hi - 22nd November 2005, 11:57 AM

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hamesha ki tarah fantastic
Thank you Shweta..

chalo aapko pasand aaya..
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25th April 2008, 05:51 PM

Akant jee:

kaise haiN aap? baRe diN ho gaYe aapko aur aapki koShiSh ko bazm meiN deKhe huye.. aaj aapki yeh Ghazal paRhii .. umdaah aNdaaz-e-bayaaN rahaa. mere dil se niklii hu'ii daad-o-mubaaraqbaad ko qabUl keejiyeNgaa.. aapki kavviSh ka iNtezaar raheNgaa..!

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duaaoN ke saath ijaazat

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thanks - 6th May 2008, 06:59 PM

Dear Dhaval,

thanks .. and sorry ki late reply..Bahut dino baad mail ker raha hoon.. per khusi vaisi hi mil rahi hai jaise pahale mila kerti thi. main achchha hoon..ummid kerta hoon ki aap bhi achchhe se honge..apana kheyaal rakhiyega..


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bahut bekraari hai ab to es tan mein sanam
mer ker bhi amar hone ka sukh to ji lene do

jo chhup ker baitha hoon dil mein tumhare
dil se baate kerne ka bheram mujhe pi lene do

na jaane kab kat jaaye door udati patang ki
kuchh pal hi sahi aazad hava mein ji lene do

jeevan per chhaya hai jo "Akant" ka darpan
arpan ker du yah janam yahi keram ji lene do




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bahoot khoob likha hao akant jee aap ne
aap ko vaapis is bazm me dekh kar behad khushii huii
kaash aap jaise bichare log is bazm se vaapis jur jaaye to is bazm ko chaar chaa.nd lag jaaye aur ise us ki khoyii huii ronak vaapis mile.......aamin
aap aise hee aate rahiyega
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dil se mubarakbaad qubuul kare aap ki is ghazal par
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bahoot khoob likha hao akant jee aap ne
aap ko vaapis is bazm me dekh kar behad khushii huii
kaash aap jaise bichare log is bazm se vaapis jur jaaye to is bazm ko chaar chaa.nd lag jaaye aur ise us ki khoyii huii ronak vaapis mile.......aamin
aap aise hee aate rahiyega
aur mehfill sajaate rahiyega
dil se mubarakbaad qubuul kare aap ki is ghazal par
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Dear Manu ji,

der se reply dene ke liye khed prkata ker raha hoon. aapne meri rachana ko padha aur pane vichar bhi likhe.. padhaker dil gad-gad ho gaya..aapka atyant abhari hoon.. aajkal site per bahut kam aana ho pata hai..es liye der se reply ker raha hoon. ek nahi kai vajah hai..Asha kerta hoon ki jaldi hi fir aane lagu site per.. apana kheyal rakhiyega..

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na jaane kab kat jaaye door udati patang ki
kuchh pal hi sahi aazad hava mein ji lene do


bahut khoob, bahut umda likhtey haiN aap AKANT jii, aapki tazza poetry ka intzaar hai

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Dear sunita ji,

Namaste...!!!!!!!

asha aur pura vishvash rakhata hoon ki aap achchhe se hongi. well main vaise hi hoon pahale jaisa bas thoda busy rahane laga hoon. subah internet nahi mil pata to shaam ki internet access kerta hoon. mujhe khushi sabse jyada es baat ki hui ki etani purani rachana aapne khoj ker padh dala..aur aapne reply bhi kiya eske liye abhari hoon aapka. nayi rachana ka mujhe bhi nahi pata ki kab aayegi..
shubhkamnao sahit,

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Swagatammm...

koshish rahati hai ki kuchh behatar likh saku.. aapne ese saraha.. so aapka abhari hoon...


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tinka bher hi hai jindagi tum mujhe jee lene do
jaane kab sath chhod de hash ke ghum pi lene do

bahut bekraari hai ab to es tan mein sanam
mer ker bhi amar hone ka sukh to ji lene do

jo chhup ker baitha hoon dil mein tumhare
dil se baate kerne ka bheram mujhe pi lene do

na jaane kab kat jaaye door udati patang ki
kuchh pal hi sahi aazad hava mein ji lene do

jeevan per chhaya hai jo "Akant" ka darpan
arpan ker du yah janam yahi keram ji lene do




Akant...

ji its too real..............................very nice creation.



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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye

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ji its too real..............................very nice creation.
Dear

Thank you.. for giving some moment on my views which are comes in the way of words. I will try to write better..

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jo chhup ker baitha hoon dil mein tumhare
dil se baate kerne ka bheram mujhe pi lene do


Nice One...............akant Ji






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Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

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Nice One...............akant Ji


Dear Naresh ji,

thank you very much... sher ki her line mein khasiyat chhipi hoti hai.. aapne us khasiyat ko pahachana sach behad khushi huyi..

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bahot khub Akant ji
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Thank you... aap ka naam padh ker ek shayri ki member Pari ji ka naam yaad aa gaya.. thanks for that moments brings in my mind throuh you. swagat rahega..

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Bohat accha likha hai aapne Akant ji...

Aapki aur se nayi peshkash ka intezaar rahega...

yuhi likhte rahiye...................




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Bohat accha likha hai aapne Akant ji...

Aapki aur se nayi peshkash ka intezaar rahega...

yuhi likhte rahiye...................
Dear Zainy Ji,

Thank you ji....
well ummid hai ki nayi post jald pesh karunga..per abhi exact kahana shayd muskil hai. aap aayi yaha dekhker khushi huyi.. aur jagjit singh ki ghazal ki line yaad aa gayi...

Dekh ker tumko yakin hota hai....
Koi etana bhi haNshi hota hai...


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aaj bahut yaad aayi... meri yah creation..

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