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30th June 2005, 09:28 PM
bahut dino baad aapke khidmet main ek sher arz ker rha hu
accha lage to tarif kareye ga !!yu khamosh baethaenge to aap yaad ayenge yaado ke mausam sanjh ke rang main dhal jayenge dil na na chaha mager aapki mehfil se chale jayenge na sunyenge yeh kissa ki log hansi udayge jab bhi tere bare main sochenge to ansu nikle ayenge sanso ki hulchul main ,her pal main hamesha aap yaad ayenge waqt ke sath yeh din yeh raat guzar jayenge bhut pakka tha mere pyar ka rang yeh aap bhi samajh jayenge kush  |
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12th July 2005, 04:19 PM
salam, i read urs poetry that is good,
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15th July 2005, 06:44 PM
thanks for appretiating it
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20th July 2005, 04:32 PM
Great hai Kush ji..
bahut pakka hai pyar ka rang.. samajh jayenge.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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dil ko chu liya tune........... |
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dil ko chu liya tune........... -
23rd July 2005, 10:24 AM
aye dost dil ko chuliya hai tune
soyi hui yaado ko jaga diya hai tune yaad aate hai woh gujre hue pal humne bhi jiye the khushi ke kuch pal pyaar bhoola nahi boojha diya tha humne dil toda nahi par dill dookhaya tha humne maafi maagte thak chuke hai par woh hai ki mur ke bhi nahi dekhte hai kya pyaar me aisa hi kuch pyaya aur khoya tha tune? |
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23rd July 2005, 11:35 AM
bahut khoob Kush ji aapki shayri to dil mein ghar kar gayi yu hi likhte rehna kyunki
CHAAN ADHOORA HAI SITARON KE BINA BAAGH ADHOORA HAI PHOOLON KE BINA SAMUNDER ADHOORA HAI KINARON KE BINA AUR HUM ADOORE HAI AAPKI SHAYRI KE DEEDARON KE BINA  Kuhulika.... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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23rd July 2005, 12:11 PM
miss its not writn by khush ji its me rooswa zindagi yaa phir vishal keh lo
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23rd July 2005, 12:48 PM
salaam namaste
gustaakhi maaf Vishal ji humse khata ho gayi humne galat naam padd liya tha humein maaf kar dijiye waise aapki shayri bahut hi kamaal ki hain Kuhulika..... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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23rd July 2005, 01:04 PM
maafi kya hoti hai woh nahi hume malum
dil toota tha to mart gaye the hum zinda hu to base dost pane ki tammna me kya kehti hai kya hum ho sakte hai aap ke sahil pe |
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23rd July 2005, 01:27 PM
very nice sher
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