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Muddat se terii Yaad hai.... - 15th February 2012, 12:26 AM

Muddat se terii yaad hai na Dil ko Mere Hosh hai,
Ab sochtaa hoon kya likhuN Noke-Qalam Khaamosh hai.

Main Aabalaa-Paa Chal rahaa tha Deed ki hasrat Liye,
Zauqe-FugaaN me Marr mitaa teraa bhalaa kyaa Dosh hai.

Rindaana Aalam kyaa huaa uske yahaaN aa jaane se,
Saaqi banaa wo aap hai, Saara Shahar Madhosh hai.

Uske ye Labb Dariyaa to meraa Aks hai jaltaaa Chaman,
Main Khaar hoon us Shaakh ka wo Gul bhi hai Gulposh hai.

Ahle-Sukhan ki Bazm me jab bhi karooN Aaghaaze-Gham,
Har dard par ik Daad hai, har Aahh par ik Nosh hai.

Abb "Shaad" jaise Chandd Shaayar aa gaye Meyaar par,
Naa hai Muqaabil MEER YaaN Naa Saathn koyee JOSH hai.



Aabala-paa-- pairon ke Chaale
FugaaN--- Heart
Meer--- Meer Taqi Meer
Josh--- Josh Maleehabaadi




Shaad...

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15th February 2012, 08:25 AM
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Muddat se terii yaad hai na Dil ko Mere Hosh hai,
Ab sochtaa hoon kya likhuN Noke-Qalam Khaamosh hai.

Main Aabalaa-Paa Chal rahaa tha Deed ki hasrat Liye,
Zauqe-FugaaN me Marr mitaa teraa bhalaa kyaa Dosh hai.

Rindaana Aalam kyaa huaa uske yahaaN aa jaane se,
Saaqi banaa wo aap hai, Saara Shahar Madhosh hai.

Uske ye Labb Dariyaa to meraa Aks hai jaltaaa Chaman,
Main Khaar hoon us Shaakh ka wo Gul bhi hai Gulposh hai.

Ahle-Sukhan ki Bazm me jab bhi karooN Aaghaaze-Gham,
Har dard par ik Daad hai, har Aahh par ik Nosh hai.

Abb "Shaad" jaise Chandd Shaayar aa gaye Meyaar par,
Naa hai Muqaabil MEER YaaN Naa Saathn koyee JOSH hai.


Aabala-paa-- pairon ke Chaale
FugaaN--- Heart
Meer--- Meer Taqi Meer
Josh--- Josh Maleehabaadi

Shaad...
WaaH ! Shaad Bhai !! BaDhe Khoobsurat Ashaar BayaaN Kiye HaiN .. Asar Angez !

BehtreeN Khayaal Aur Labo Lehzaa !

Dilkash Peshkash !

Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!



YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...

---Naresh Mehra----
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subhan allah shad bhai. kya kahane....................bhai wahh.

kya behatreen shaayri karte hai aap ? behad dilqash ghazal.......................behad

dilqash. aapko is khoobsurat ghazal par reps nahee de paa rahaa hu...............sorry.

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15th February 2012, 01:21 PM

Muddat se terii yaad hai na Dil ko Mere Hosh hai,
Ab sochtaa hoon kya likhuN Noke-Qalam Khaamosh hai.

Khubsurat Matla….. Acha Kaha

Main Aabalaa-Paa Chal rahaa tha Deed ki hasrat Liye,
Zauqe-FugaaN me Marr mitaa teraa bhalaa kyaa Dosh hai.

Wahhhh… Khooob

Rindaana Aalam kyaa huaa uske yahaaN aa jaane se,
Saaqi banaa wo aap hai, Saara Shahar Madhosh hai.

Wahhh …. Khubsurat… Kia Kehnay

Uske ye Labb Dariyaa to meraa Aks hai jaltaaa Chaman,
Main Khaar hoon us Shaakh ka wo Gul bhi hai Gulposh hai.

Wahhhh

Ahle-Sukhan ki Bazm me jab bhi karooN Aaghaaze-Gham,
Har dard par ik Daad hai, har Aahh par ik Nosh hai.

Acha Hai…..

Abb "Shaad" jaise Chandd Shaayar aa gaye Meyaar par,
Naa hai Muqaabil MEER YaaN Naa Saathn koyee JOSH hai.
Wah Wah Wah Maqta Boht Khooob Raha……
Janab Shaad Saheb… Aik Behtreeen Or Khubsurat Ghazal Hui Hai…..
Aap ka Fun Din –ba-Din Nikharta Ja Raha Hai….
ALLAH Mazid Taraqqi De….
Likhtay Rahiye…. Sada Khush Rahiye…..



Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi

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15th February 2012, 02:58 PM
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Muddat se terii yaad hai na Dil ko Mere Hosh hai,
Ab sochtaa hoon kya likhuN Noke-Qalam Khaamosh hai.

Main Aabalaa-Paa Chal rahaa tha Deed ki hasrat Liye,
Zauqe-FugaaN me Marr mitaa teraa bhalaa kyaa Dosh hai.

Rindaana Aalam kyaa huaa uske yahaaN aa jaane se,
Saaqi banaa wo aap hai, Saara Shahar Madhosh hai.

Uske ye Labb Dariyaa to meraa Aks hai jaltaaa Chaman,
Main Khaar hoon us Shaakh ka wo Gul bhi hai Gulposh hai.

Ahle-Sukhan ki Bazm me jab bhi karooN Aaghaaze-Gham,
Har dard par ik Daad hai, har Aahh par ik Nosh hai.

Abb "Shaad" jaise Chandd Shaayar aa gaye Meyaar par,
Naa hai Muqaabil MEER YaaN Naa Saathn koyee JOSH hai.



Aabala-paa-- pairon ke Chaale
FugaaN--- Heart
Meer--- Meer Taqi Meer
Josh--- Josh Maleehabaadi




Shaad...



Shaab bhai....................hamesha ki tarah top class shayri....dil se daad hazir hai.

pyar aur duaon ke saath
dii

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WaaH ! Shaad Bhai !! BaDhe Khoobsurat Ashaar BayaaN Kiye HaiN .. Asar Angez !

BehtreeN Khayaal Aur Labo Lehzaa !

Dilkash Peshkash !

Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!

Aapki MuhabbatoN aur nawaazishoN ka behad shukrguzaar hoon Naresh bhaiyaa.. ummeed hai aage bhi Nazre karam farmaate rahenge...

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Fifth sher is superb,!!.....................

Baqi ghazal bhi behad umda hai........

bohat khoob...........



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Bhai Shaad ...agar tumhein daad ki zara si bhi tawaqqo thi to itni acchee ghazal nahiin kehni chaahiye thi ki parhkar hosh gum ho jaaye aur kuchch kehne sunnane ki haalat mein hi n rahein.

Bas suroor mein itna hi lab se khud ba khud nikal gaya ...

maanaa ki meer o josh ke koyee muqaabil hai nahiin
keyf e sukhan se shaad ke zarraa magar madhosh hai

to ab daad nahiin doonga bas yeh dua karta hoon ki aap kamyaabee ki har hadd paar kar lein aur apko zindagi ki saaree khushiyaan milein.....aur hosh aaney tak daad udhaar rahee
   
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subhan allah shad bhai. kya kahane....................bhai wahh.

kya behatreen shaayri karte hai aap ? behad dilqash ghazal.......................behad

dilqash. aapko is khoobsurat ghazal par reps nahee de paa rahaa hu...............sorry.

lekin mere dil kee hazaaro lakho reps+++++++++++++

khush rahiye aur aise hee lajawaab qalaamo se hume ru b ru karate rahiye.................

Aadab janaab Uff-aq saahab..... Awwal to Shukriyaa kahnaa chaungaa jo aapne bazm me shirqat farmaai... Baad iske ye kahunga ke meri bahot khushnaseebi jo aapne is adnaa se kalaam ki pazeeraai farmaai...

rahi Reps ki baat bhai, to sach kahuN ke jo aapke dil se nikli duaa hain wo reps points se kahiin zyaada ahmiyat rakhti haiN mere liye... Allah aapko hardam khush o khurram rakkhe... Apna khayaal rakhiyega..

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Muddat se terii yaad hai na Dil ko Mere Hosh hai,
Ab sochtaa hoon kya likhuN Noke-Qalam Khaamosh hai.


Khubsurat Matla….. Acha Kaha

Main Aabalaa-Paa Chal rahaa tha Deed ki hasrat Liye,
Zauqe-FugaaN me Marr mitaa teraa bhalaa kyaa Dosh hai.


Wahhhh… Khooob

Rindaana Aalam kyaa huaa uske yahaaN aa jaane se,
Saaqi banaa wo aap hai, Saara Shahar Madhosh hai.


Wahhh …. Khubsurat… Kia Kehnay

Uske ye Labb Dariyaa to meraa Aks hai jaltaaa Chaman,
Main Khaar hoon us Shaakh ka wo Gul bhi hai Gulposh hai.


Wahhhh

Ahle-Sukhan ki Bazm me jab bhi karooN Aaghaaze-Gham,
Har dard par ik Daad hai, har Aahh par ik Nosh hai.


Acha Hai…..

Abb "Shaad" jaise Chandd Shaayar aa gaye Meyaar par,
Naa hai Muqaabil MEER YaaN Naa Saathn koyee JOSH hai.

Wah Wah Wah Maqta Boht Khooob Raha……



Janab Shaad Saheb… Aik Behtreeen Or Khubsurat Ghazal Hui Hai…..
Aap ka Fun Din –ba-Din Nikharta Ja Raha Hai….
ALLAH Mazid Taraqqi De….
Likhtay Rahiye…. Sada Khush Rahiye…..


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Shaab bhai....................hamesha ki tarah top class shayri....dil se daad hazir hai.

pyar aur duaon ke saath
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Sunita dee... kaisi ho aap...

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Fifth sher is superb,!!.....................

Baqi ghazal bhi behad umda hai........

bohat khoob...........
Thanksss alotttttttttttttt Zainyyyyyyyyyy....................

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Bhai Shaad ...agar tumhein daad ki zara si bhi tawaqqo thi to itni acchee ghazal nahiin kehni chaahiye thi ki parhkar hosh gum ho jaaye aur kuchch kehne sunnane ki haalat mein hi n rahein.

Bas suroor mein itna hi lab se khud ba khud nikal gaya ...

maanaa ki meer o josh ke koyee muqaabil hai nahiin
keyf e sukhan se shaad ke zarraa magar madhosh hai

to ab daad nahiin doonga bas yeh dua karta hoon ki aap kamyaabee ki har hadd paar kar lein aur apko zindagi ki saaree khushiyaan milein.....aur hosh aaney tak daad udhaar rahee


Waahh kya sher kahaa meri jaan.... Dil loot gaye tumhaare alfaaz,. bhai kya khauN ab to ye shero shaayri khoon me basne lagi hai.. kuch pal kabhi khamosh baithta hoon to zahen me sher na jane kahan se aa jaate hain... waise har baar ki tarah aapne itni tareef kar di hai ke bandaa hawaa me uddne laga hai.. behad shukriyaa aapki Muhabbaton ke liye...

Main Allah se Duaa karoonga ke aapke hosh jald thikaane aa jaayen.. kyonki koi badee basabree se apne hisse ki daad ka intezaar kar rahaa hai.. lol

Apna khayaal rakhiyega aur aate raha kijiye.. shukriyaa...

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Shaad ji,
behat hi umdaa kalam pesh kiya hai aapne
daad qabool kijiye
likhte rahiye

take care
Aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa Lilly jee... aapko kalaam pasand aa saka meri khushkismati... ek baat kahna chahunga jo display pic aapne lagaai hhai wo masha allah bahot cute hai.. i hope (guess) that she is the lovely princess your daughter... am i right??

God bless you all.... take care

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Muddat se terii yaad hai na Dil ko Mere Hosh hai,
Ab sochtaa hoon kya likhuN Noke-Qalam Khaamosh hai.

Main Aabalaa-Paa Chal rahaa tha Deed ki hasrat Liye,
Zauqe-FugaaN me Marr mitaa teraa bhalaa kyaa Dosh hai.

Rindaana Aalam kyaa huaa uske yahaaN aa jaane se,
Saaqi banaa wo aap hai, Saara Shahar Madhosh hai.

Uske ye Labb Dariyaa to meraa Aks hai jaltaaa Chaman,
Main Khaar hoon us Shaakh ka wo Gul bhi hai Gulposh hai.

Ahle-Sukhan ki Bazm me jab bhi karooN Aaghaaze-Gham,
Har dard par ik Daad hai, har Aahh par ik Nosh hai.

Abb "Shaad" jaise Chandd Shaayar aa gaye Meyaar par,
Naa hai Muqaabil MEER YaaN Naa Saathn koyee JOSH hai.



Aabala-paa-- pairon ke Chaale
FugaaN--- Heart
Meer--- Meer Taqi Meer
Josh--- Josh Maleehabaadi

Shaad...
bahut Khoob ... Shaad Bhai !

acchi peshkash ... dil se daad hazir hai ... likhte rahiye ... radhe radhe .....

Aapka Apna
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17th February 2012, 10:39 PM
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Waahh kya sher kahaa meri jaan.... Dil loot gaye tumhaare alfaaz,. bhai kya khauN ab to ye shero shaayri khoon me basne lagi hai.. kuch pal kabhi khamosh baithta hoon to zahen me sher na jane kahan se aa jaate hain... waise har baar ki tarah aapne itni tareef kar di hai ke bandaa hawaa me uddne laga hai.. behad shukriyaa aapki Muhabbaton ke liye...

Main Allah se Duaa karoonga ke aapke hosh jald thikaane aa jaayen.. kyonki koi badee basabree se apne hisse ki daad ka intezaar kar rahaa hai.. lol

Apna khayaal rakhiyega aur aate raha kijiye.. shukriyaa...

Shaad..
Ha ha ! Bhai do din kaam kaaj par mehnat mashakkat karke hosh thikaaney a gaye aur paanv wapas dharti par laut aaye Aur ab apke hissey ki daad bakayda gift wrap kar ke chaandi ki tashtari mein pesh kar raha hoon, qabool farmaiyega ! take care my friend ...
   
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Ha ha ! Bhai do din kaam kaaj par mehnat mashakkat karke hosh thikaaney a gaye aur paanv wapas dharti par laut aaye Aur ab apke hissey ki daad bakayda gift wrap kar ke chaandi ki tashtari mein pesh kar raha hoon, qabool farmaiyega ! take care my friend ...

Aaye haaye maar daala Zaalim ne.....

Allah ka laakh laakh shukr ke aap hosh me aa gaye... Waise aapka shukriyaa jo aaapne hame ye neamat bakshi.. shukriyaa saab .. bahot bahot waala...
take a good care of yourself...

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bahut Khoob ... Shaad Bhai !

acchi peshkash ... dil se daad hazir hai ... likhte rahiye ... radhe radhe .....
Bahot bahot bahoooooooooooooooooot shukriyaa Rajinder bhai jo aaapne itnii izzat bakshi... khushi hui aaj aapko yahan dekhkar... shukriyaaa...


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bohat khubh sameer ji
aap ki to baat hi nirali hai.
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aapka bahot bahot shukriyaa Saini ji..... thanks once again

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Muddat se terii yaad hai na Dil ko Mere Hosh hai,
Ab sochtaa hoon kya likhuN Noke-Qalam Khaamosh hai.

Main Aabalaa-Paa Chal rahaa tha Deed ki hasrat Liye,
Zauqe-FugaaN me Marr mitaa teraa bhalaa kyaa Dosh hai.

Rindaana Aalam kyaa huaa uske yahaaN aa jaane se,
Saaqi banaa wo aap hai, Saara Shahar Madhosh hai.

Uske ye Labb Dariyaa to meraa Aks hai jaltaaa Chaman,
Main Khaar hoon us Shaakh ka wo Gul bhi hai Gulposh hai.

Ahle-Sukhan ki Bazm me jab bhi karooN Aaghaaze-Gham,
Har dard par ik Daad hai, har Aahh par ik Nosh hai.

Abb "Shaad" jaise Chandd Shaayar aa gaye Meyaar par,
Naa hai Muqaabil MEER YaaN Naa Saathn koyee JOSH hai.



Aabala-paa-- pairon ke Chaale
FugaaN--- Heart
Meer--- Meer Taqi Meer
Josh--- Josh Maleehabaadi




Shaad...
Shaad bhai pur asar..aapka yeh nazraana dil ki teh tak utaar gaya..ehsaason ke saath saath aapne shayri ki baaki baarekiyon ko bhi khoob nibhaaya hai...mera salaam qubool farmaiye..

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