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aashiqi - 25th February 2003, 07:12 PM
uf teri yeh zulfain
tera yeh chaand chehra
kabhi dupte ki oodh se nikal kar aata hain
to har aashiq dil ka dil machalta hain
eh jaane man teri ankhon main tare nachte hain
meri jaan zindagi main mujhse door na hona
varna main maut se phele mar jaongi

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Question HI - 25th February 2003, 07:46 PM
Ms. Romana,,
Nice Words,,,Mugar Let tell u one thing,,
Chand Chara or Payari Zulfoo wala loog,,buhat zaiada logo ko waqat sa pahala mar deta haa,,
Muhsan Naqvi ak 2 Share Yad aa Raha ha,,

Zahan O Dil Gin Ki Sadaqat Ka Bhi Munkar Hoo Gay,,,,
Sanahaa Aasa bhi Aa, Aa Ka Guzar Gatea Haa,,
Munhasar Aahala Sitam Per Hi Nahi Ha Muhsan
Loog Aapno Ki Aanayat Sa Bhi Mar Gata Haa,,

Keep Surchng for this """AAPNA''''
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hi - 25th February 2003, 07:52 PM
thnx zeeshaan for ur support aise loog itne bure bi nahein hote hain shaiad aapko koi acha nahein mila mujhe in do lafzo ki samjh nahein

Munhasar

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in ka kiya matlib hain ls if u dont mind
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hi - 25th February 2003, 08:00 PM
Ma General Bat ker Raha Ho ,,Aam tor per aasa hi Hota Ha,,
any way ya to aapna naseeb ki bat ha,,

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Good one - 26th February 2003, 11:39 AM
Romana aapki ye post bhi khoob rahi, Yoonhi likhte rahiyega.

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hi - 26th February 2003, 05:42 PM
hi chaand ji

thanx offcourse i will write ab tu humain likhna acha bi lagne laga hain us se gham kam ho jaata hain aur khushiyaa dugni hoo jaati hain

thanx again for liking my poetry did u really like it aur u r just sayin it becuase u r my frnd
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Love 26th February 2003, 07:42 PM
kya baat hai romana
kya khoob likha hai ..isis tareh likhti raho......aur is mehfil mein chaar chand lagavo
   
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hi - 26th February 2003, 08:35 PM
hw r u
thanx yaar aap logon ko meri shayri achi lagi is se ziada achi baat aur kiya ho sakti hai

main to likhti rahongi aap batao ap kiyon nahein likhte hoon
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Cool Yes I liked it.. - 26th February 2003, 10:12 PM
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uf teri yeh zulfain
tera yeh chaand chehra
kabhi dupte ki oodh se nikal kar aata hain
to har aashiq dil ka dil machalta hain
eh jaane man teri ankhon main tare nachte hain
meri jaan zindagi main mujhse door na hona
varna main maut se phele mar jaongi

Yahi likha tha aapne or mujhe pasand bhi aaya tha, kisi ki hausla afzaai karna bhi ek achhi baat hai par agar aapne kuchh likha hai or wo mujhe pasand bhi aaya to mai reply jaroor karta hoon, or agar reply nahi karta to ye bhi ho sakta hai wo meri nazar se gujra hi na ho, ya achha to ho par mai hi theek se na samajh paya hooN, or kabhi kabhi time bhi problem ho sakta hai.

Kya samjhe dear... par ye mujhe waqai achha laga. Keep smiling

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hi - 27th February 2003, 05:47 PM
hi
how r u i know u r very busy with ur first love and everything but it be over soon i m not enjoying cricket this time its not fu and no one is really playing up to the standard i really like well i m gonna watch the finals only i hate it when ever i go home my bro's are always watchin it

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