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Thumbs up ik budhi, ik boodha aur ik chota sa kamra................. - 6th December 2010, 02:24 PM
aaj ke modern yug mein jo hum sabhi apni responsibilities se muh mod kar khud ko sabhya hone ka dawa kar rahe hai uske asli pehlu ko ujagar karti meri kuch pantiyon ke bare mein mai aapki rai janne ko utsuk hoon yadi padhkar achcha lage to protsahan keliye reply awashya den.............aapka mitra ......... prem_anjana


aaj ke vyast mahaul se kuch samay nikala hai,
aur ik ajeej ke ghar dera dala hai.
panhucha darwaje par toh gajab ka satkaar hua,
naaste pani ka behtreen vyvhaar hua.
bhabhi ji ne muskura kar namaskaar kiya,
bhatiji bhatijon ne jhuk kar pranam kiya.
haalchal ke silsile ki shuruaat hui,
kuch purani yadon ki bhi baat hui.
par mera dhyaan toh unke bangle par tha,
uske kangooron aur aangan ke jangle par tha.
thakhaar kar maine unse poonch hi dala,
kya tumne tha kahi par daka daala.
toh muskurakar mahashay ji bole,
ki mere hisse mein aaye the itne hi dhele.
unse hi yeh ghar banwaya hai,
kaaleen aur sab saaj se sajwaya hai.
dekho kitni mehnat se design karwaya tha,
bade mushkil se baabuji ko pataya tha.
itna sunte hi mere man mein ik baat aayi,
unke maa-baabu ji ki hume yaad aayi.
bus mai jhat se bola ki babuji se milwao,
jara mata ji ke bhi darshan karwao.
itna sunkar bhabhi ji ne meri or chai badhayi,
aur boli ki mil lena abhi toh aap aaye hai bhai.
par mai "anjana" hoon apni jid ka pakka tha,
ab unse hi milne ka irada kar rakha tha.
haar kar mitra mujhe bangle ke piche le jaate hai,
aur ik chota sa kamra mujhe dikhate hai.
uk kamre mein ik boodha ik tooti chatpaayi par leta hai,
naa koi saaj hai na koi sajja ka reta hai.
ik budhiya boodhe ke pair dabati hai,
nam ankho ko apne anchal se chupati hai.
itna dekhkar sara nazara saaf hua,
dhan ka bhoot meresir se khaak hua.
he re manush!! tu apne karmo pe sharma toh jara!
ik budhi, ik boodha aur ik chota sa kamra.................ik chota sa kamra







anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
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aaj ke modern yug mein jo hum sabhi apni responsibilities se muh mod kar khud ko sabhya hone ka dawa kar rahe hai uske asli pehlu ko ujagar karti meri kuch pantiyon ke bare mein mai aapki rai janne ko utsuk hoon yadi padhkar achcha lage to protsahan keliye reply awashya den.............aapka mitra ......... prem_anjana


aaj ke vyast mahaul se kuch samay nikala hai,
aur ik ajeej ke ghar dera dala hai.
panhucha darwaje par toh gajab ka satkaar hua,
naaste pani ka behtreen vyvhaar hua.
bhabhi ji ne muskura kar namaskaar kiya,
bhatiji bhatijon ne jhuk kar pranam kiya.
haalchal ke silsile ki shuruaat hui,
kuch purani yadon ki bhi baat hui.
par mera dhyaan toh unke bangle par tha,
uske kangooron aur aangan ke jangle par tha.
thakhaar kar maine unse poonch hi dala,
kya tumne tha kahi par daka daala.
toh muskurakar mahashay ji bole,
ki mere hisse mein aaye the itne hi dhele.
unse hi yeh ghar banwaya hai,
kaaleen aur sab saaj se sajwaya hai.
dekho kitni mehnat se design karwaya tha,
bade mushkil se baabuji ko pataya tha.
itna sunte hi mere man mein ik baat aayi,
unke maa-baabu ji ki hume yaad aayi.
bus mai jhat se bola ki babuji se milwao,
jara mata ji ke bhi darshan karwao.
itna sunkar bhabhi ji ne meri or chai badhayi,
aur boli ki mil lena abhi toh aap aaye hai bhai.
par mai "anjana" hoon apni jid ka pakka tha,
ab unse hi milne ka irada kar rakha tha.
haar kar mitra mujhe bangle ke piche le jaate hai,
aur ik chota sa kamra mujhe dikhate hai.
uk kamre mein ik boodha ik tooti chatpaayi par leta hai,
naa koi saaj hai na koi sajja ka reta hai.
ik budhiya boodhe ke pair dabati hai,
nam ankho ko apne anchal se chupati hai.
itna dekhkar sara nazara saaf hua,
dhan ka bhoot meresir se khaak hua.
he re manush!! Tu apne karmo pe sharma toh jara!
ik budhi, ik boodha aur ik chota sa kamra.................ik chota sa kamra
bahut hi hraday ko choo janewali kavita hai

yesa aaj kal dekhane ko milta hai

maa baap ki yah vedana kitani hogy

aankhe num ho gayi

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Amazing..........speechless kar diya aapki is kavita ne mere bhai.

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rep k liye thanx..........

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
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bahut hi hraday ko choo janewali kavita hai

yesa aaj kal dekhane ko milta hai

maa baap ki yah vedana kitani hogy

aankhe num ho gayi

daaa hajir hai
shakuntala ji kaisi hai aap!!
kavita ko pasnd karne k liye dhanyawaad
daad sar mathe par!!.......

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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prem anjanaji,
aapki yeh kavita dekh kar garv hua ki aajkal bhi aisi paristithion par likhkha jata hai.

behad sahi "he re manush!! Tu apne karmo pe sharma toh jara!"

thanks for sharing

khwaabo.n ke par kabhii kaTne na denaa
inke sahaaron me raahai.n rahe.ngii

lage.nge ye lejaa rahe alag raste
un raston pe bhii kai seekhai.n to ho.ngii

ye seekhai.n hameshaa sameTe rakhnaa
inhii.n se to sabko manzil milai.ngii


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3rd January 2011, 04:40 PM
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aaj ke modern yug mein jo hum sabhi apni responsibilities se muh mod kar khud ko sabhya hone ka dawa kar rahe hai uske asli pehlu ko ujagar karti meri kuch pantiyon ke bare mein mai aapki rai janne ko utsuk hoon yadi padhkar achcha lage to protsahan keliye reply awashya den.............aapka mitra ......... prem_anjana


aaj ke vyast mahaul se kuch samay nikala hai,
aur ik ajeej ke ghar dera dala hai.
panhucha darwaje par toh gajab ka satkaar hua,
naaste pani ka behtreen vyvhaar hua.
bhabhi ji ne muskura kar namaskaar kiya,
bhatiji bhatijon ne jhuk kar pranam kiya.
haalchal ke silsile ki shuruaat hui,
kuch purani yadon ki bhi baat hui.
par mera dhyaan toh unke bangle par tha,
uske kangooron aur aangan ke jangle par tha.
thakhaar kar maine unse poonch hi dala,
kya tumne tha kahi par daka daala.
toh muskurakar mahashay ji bole,
ki mere hisse mein aaye the itne hi dhele.
unse hi yeh ghar banwaya hai,
kaaleen aur sab saaj se sajwaya hai.
dekho kitni mehnat se design karwaya tha,
bade mushkil se baabuji ko pataya tha.
itna sunte hi mere man mein ik baat aayi,
unke maa-baabu ji ki hume yaad aayi.
bus mai jhat se bola ki babuji se milwao,
jara mata ji ke bhi darshan karwao.
itna sunkar bhabhi ji ne meri or chai badhayi,
aur boli ki mil lena abhi toh aap aaye hai bhai.
par mai "anjana" hoon apni jid ka pakka tha,
ab unse hi milne ka irada kar rakha tha.
haar kar mitra mujhe bangle ke piche le jaate hai,
aur ik chota sa kamra mujhe dikhate hai.
uk kamre mein ik boodha ik tooti chatpaayi par leta hai,
naa koi saaj hai na koi sajja ka reta hai.
ik budhiya boodhe ke pair dabati hai,
nam ankho ko apne anchal se chupati hai.
itna dekhkar sara nazara saaf hua,
dhan ka bhoot meresir se khaak hua.
he re manush!! tu apne karmo pe sharma toh jara!
ik budhi, ik boodha aur ik chota sa kamra.................ik chota sa kamra
prem bhai namaskaar...
kaise haiN aap?

aapki is rachna ne mujhe mook kar diya hai...
ab kya kaha ja sakta hai bhai...jab apne hi apno ke saath aisa karte haiN, kisi aur ko dosh dene ke liye kya bachta hai...
aapki is peshkash ko mera salaam...
aapki aaj tak ki sabse behtareen peshkash rahi hai ye...

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Bahut hi achi kavita hai.
Khush rahein.
palli ji kaisi hai aap,
kavita ki sarahana karne kaliye thanx!!

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
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prem anjanaji,
aapki yeh kavita dekh kar garv hua ki aajkal bhi aisi paristithion par likhkha jata hai.

behad sahi "he re manush!! Tu apne karmo pe sharma toh jara!"

thanks for sharing
aarya ji ko prem anjana ka pranam.........
kavita pasand karne k liye dhanyavad
vishwaas maniye meri yehi koshish rehti hai ki mai unhi stithion par likhoo jin par likhne ki jaroorat hai........aapne protsahit kiya jis k liye thanx.........

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
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prem bhai namaskaar...
kaise haiN aap?

aapki is rachna ne mujhe mook kar diya hai...
ab kya kaha ja sakta hai bhai...jab apne hi apno ke saath aisa karte haiN, kisi aur ko dosh dene ke liye kya bachta hai...
aapki is peshkash ko mera salaam...
aapki aaj tak ki sabse behtareen peshkash rahi hai ye...

vikrambhai ko prem anjan ka namaskaar.....
aapko kavita pasand aayi uske liye thanx
bade bhai yun hi protsahit karte rahen...
bhai maine jaisa dekha waisa shabdon mein utaar diya
pasand karne k liye thanx....
aapka bhai prem anjana

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
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namaste!

bahot kam aisii rachanaa hotee hai jo aaNkhe.n nam kar detee hai aur KhaamoSh kar detee hai.. aapki rachanaa aankhei.n nam kar ga'ii aur kuChh keh nah paau.nga!

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Bahut Khoob lagi hume aapki rachna ... Prem Ji !

dili daad li jiye ... aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ...!

Very Nice Creation ................. !

duaaon ke saath ... !

naresh ji kaise hai aap .!!........namaskaar!!
aapka saath pakar bahot khushi huyi .jaankar achcha laga ki kavita aapko pasand aayi......
daad sar mathe par..........
dhanyavaad ..........aapka.......... prem anjana

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
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waah,prem ji aise log kum hain jo social topics par likhte hain,aapki is kavita me aapne bahut ache jazbaat rakhe hain,awesome poem


aakash ji aapne kvita pasand ki thanx.........
maine toh wahi likh diya jo, aajkal sabhi log bejhijhak kar rahe hai....
samay dene aursarahana karne ke liye thanx..............

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
mai sabko hasata chala gaya.
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namaste!

bahot kam aisii rachanaa hotee hai jo aaNkhe.n nam kar detee hai aur KhaamoSh kar detee hai.. aapki rachanaa aankhei.n nam kar ga'ii aur kuChh keh nah paau.nga!

yuuNhi liKhate rahe.n...!

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bahut hi khoobsurti se aapne aaj ke halaat bayaan kiye hain. aapki kalm umardraaz ho
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hardev ji sarahna aur aashirwaad k liye dhanyawaad !! yu hi aate rahiye, himmat badhate rahiye aapka prem anjana.....

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
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pasand thi jamane ko meri barbadi,
mai unpe dil-o-jaan lutata chala gaya.
   
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man ki kalam.....
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bahut hi khoobsurti se aapne aaj ke halaat bayaan kiye hain. aapki kalm umardraaz ho
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hardev ji ko prem ka pranam...... hardev ji kavita pasand karne k liye aur protsahan k liye thanx..... aapka prem anjana

anjana prem
sab meri muskurahat se jalte hai,
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