Dil uktaa sa jaaye...tau bagaavat pe utar aata hai...na qaayde ka dhyaan rehta hai...na hi galat sahi ki pehchaan...shayad phir wo kuch iss tarah se likhe...nazar-e-karam farmaayiega...
Har karvat siskiyaaN lega badan
Har ik saans mein utthegaa rudan
Subuk kirchiyon ki chubhan ki
AankhoN se phir mulaqaaT hogi
Kone mein dil ke na chhupa saka koyi
Na qeemaT ashqoN ki chukaa saka koyi
Sikhaa raha hai jine ke bahaane naye
Nadaan wafaaT pe ab kya shuruaaT hogi?
Taa-umr ruuh bhatakti rahi akeli
Mujhse pyaar karne wafaa aayi saheli
Bhinchi muthhi se jakkad bhi lein seena
Mehnge padhe lamhon se kya nijaaT hogi?
Adaaon mein meri kya jaadu nahiN thaa
Kya ishq mera masoom, be-gunaah nahiN thaa
Ruk ruk ke waqt-e-khanjar ne taraasha hai mujhko
Khuda dena ‘paras’ ko tu jawaab tujhse bhi baat hogi
subuk = delicate, (bareek)
kirchiyon = broken glass pieces
wafaat = death
Nijaat = escape
Uchaat = worn out
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
Last edited by Parastaar; 17th April 2006 at 12:24 PM..
Har karvat siskiyaaN lega badan
Har ik saans mein utthegaa rudan
Subuk kirchiyon ki chubhan ki
AankhoN se phir mulaqaaT hogi
Kone mein dil ke na chhupa saka koyi
Na qeemaT ashqoN ki chukaa saka koyi
Sikhaa raha hai jine ke bahaane naye
Nadaan wafaaT pe ab kya shuruaaT hogi?
Adaaon mein meri kya jaadu nahiN thaa
Kya ishq mera masoom, be-gunaah nahiN thaa
Ruk ruk ke waqt-e-khanjar ne taraasha hai mujhko
Khuda dena ‘paras’ ko tu jawaab tujhse bhi baat hogi
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AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH Paras kya jamaane me dard ki kami thi...jo tumne apne is kalaam me itna dard bhar diya...yahi bol muh se nikal pare hai...aur ham bhi apne sine ko muthhi se bheeche diye ja rahe hai....
uper k ye kuchh aashaar hame bahut pasand aaye...jo ki ham react kiye bina na reh paaye...jabki ham yaha kisi ko talab nahi kar paate aur hamne khud b likhna chhor diya hai..par aapke dard ne hame yaha kheech liya aur sirf aapke hi liye.....
aapke liye kuchh vichar kaundh gaye hai jo u hai...
OOOO Allaah!! mat de dard itna meri paras ko...
vo toot jayegi......Dar hai mujhe....!!
mat de dard itna meri paras ko....
vo bikher jayegi.....
fir kaun teri khidmat karega.....????
Kaun jhukaiga tere sazde me sir ko.....??
kaun chahega tujhe.....Kaun vishwas rakhega tujh per...??
OOOO Allaah!! mat de dard itna meri paras ko...
take care ........janu.........lv u...bye....urs.....
Re: Qayamat kee raat... -
18th April 2006, 10:24 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by Parastaar Dosto...
Dil uktaa sa jaaye...tau bagaavat pe utar aata hai...na qaayde ka dhyaan rehta hai...na hi galat sahi ki pehchaan...shayad phir wo kuch iss tarah se likhe...nazar-e-karam farmaayiega...
Har karvat siskiyaaN lega badan
Har ik saans mein utthegaa rudan
Subuk kirchiyon ki chubhan ki
AankhoN se phir mulaqaaT hogi
Kone mein dil ke na chhupa saka koyi
Na qeemaT ashqoN ki chukaa saka koyi
Sikhaa raha hai jine ke bahaane naye
Nadaan wafaaT pe ab kya shuruaaT hogi?
Taa-umr ruuh bhatakti rahi akeli
Mujhse pyaar karne wafaa aayi saheli
Bhinchi muthhi se jakkad bhi lein seena
Mehnge padhe lamhon se kya nijaaT hogi?
Adaaon mein meri kya jaadu nahiN thaa
Kya ishq mera masoom, be-gunaah nahiN thaa
Ruk ruk ke waqt-e-khanjar ne taraasha hai mujhko
Khuda dena ‘paras’ ko tu jawaab tujhse bhi baat hogi
subuk = delicate, (bareek)
kirchiyon = broken glass pieces
wafaat = death
Nijaat = escape
Uchaat = worn out
Paras Ji
aaj subah subah aapki lines padi to bohat khusi hui hei. lajawab lika hei aapne, aapka shukriya
Another masterpiece with so much pain captured in so little and beautiful words. And the beautiful part is that again u’ve written in so much free thought but it is effective to the core. Do keep blessing us with more such gems.
Aapka nalayak shagird
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
Adaaon mein meri kya jaadu nahiN thaa
Kya ishq mera masoom, be-gunaah nahiN thaa
Ruk ruk ke waqt-e-khanjar ne taraasha hai mujhko
Khuda dena ‘paras’ ko tu jawaab tujhse bhi baat hogi
Waaaaaaaaaahhhhh....
Sachhi boloon.... Main to bass yeh last sher padhta reh gaya... it was soooo well expressed... Just loved this one... Likhti raho aise hi... TC
Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
jab mayoosi had se barh jaaye.
jab her kisi se aitbaar uth jaaye.
jab dil ka dard aur qaraar sab hem se rukhsat ho jaaye to bilkul aisi hi kaifiyet hoti hai jo tumhari is muntashir khayaali se ayaan se hai.
mein aaj kal khud ajeeb si kaifiyaat aur masaayil ka shikaar hoon.
yahan aanaa bhi bohat kem kem ho raha hai. us per aaj tumhari yeh nazm parhi to andaaza huaa ke mein hi is rakht-e-safer mein pareshaan naheen hoon.
meri behan bhi isi kaifiyet ka shikaar hai.
meri dua hai ke tum bas khush raho, aabaad raho,
tumhari tarz e tehreer ko parh ker dil ko khushi bhi hoti hai ke alfaaz ki rawaani aur adab se aagaahi ab sir chal ker boal rahi hai, mager dil udaas bhi hotaa hai ke behan ki yeh kaifiyet haqiqi na ho, meri behan bas khush rahe, aur abaad rahe, yehi dua hai yehi tamanna.
mein aaj kal khud ajab se adem tawajjahi, aur zehni tention ka shikaar hoon isi liye kyaa keh raha hoon kyaa likh raha hoon kuch pata naheen chal raha hai.
Gam-e-lashkar, kaanch, Dear Salim, Vipin ji, Pulkit my Buddy, Shradhha, aur mere Mushi Bhayyia….
Aap sab ne waqt nikaal kar mujhe padha…bahut bahut shukriya aap sabka, yoonhi hausla afzaayi kar diya kijiey…time nikaalne ki fiqr mein din nikal jaate isliey aap sabhi ko eksaath jawaab de rahi hoon…iss gustakhi ke liye sharminda hoon…muaaf kijieyga…
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho