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bahoot bechain hoon..... -
30th April 2003, 01:50 PM
ajab ehsas ke bhaNvar mein hoon,
ab main unki kaatil najar mein hoon, dil aau' jajbaat ki kadar hi nahii roj jalte hue shahar men hoon, ek din main bhi kahi pahuchunga chal pada hoon abhi saFar mein hoon, kya kahuN pyar ker liya maine, aaj kal khvaab ke manjar mein hoon, aaj tak chain se soya naa 'amber' bahoot bechain hoon barood ke ghar mein hoon. Amber Buxeri kyoNki sirf vahi janta hai ki main kaun hoon... |
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30th April 2003, 01:58 PM
Wah!..
Amberji, bada hi achha likha hai aapne... Apki ghazal mein yeh sher hume sabse zyada pasand aaye.. dil aau' jajbaat ki kadar hi nahii roj jalte hue shahar men hoon, Kya khoob kaha hai aapne... ! ek din main bhi kahi pahuchunga chal pada hoon abhi saFar mein hoon, Yeh sher dil ke bohat hi kareeb paya hai humne.. Hum sab safar kar rahe hain.. manzil mile na mile.. shayad manzil ho hi nahin, magar hume chalte rehna hai.. issi umeed me, ki kabhi na kabhi, hum kahin to pohuchenge.. Ek baar phir, aapne bohat hi achha likha hai!.. Shukria! PS: Welcome to Shayri.com!  |
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30th April 2003, 02:05 PM
Banno Rani,
hausla-aFjaie ka shukriyaH.bas jo sochta hoon vahi likh leta hoon.nida fazli ke sabdo mein.. jo kho jata hai milker jindagi mein, Ghazal hai naam uska shayri mein... Amber buxari... kyoNki sirf vahi janta hai ki main kaun hoon... |
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30th April 2003, 02:10 PM
Khair, umeed hai ki aap apne haal e dil aur soch aise hi bayaan karte rahenge..
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good -
30th April 2003, 03:24 PM
bohaat khoob aap ney likha hai
humein behaad pasaand ayaa keep it up neha |
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30th April 2003, 11:49 PM
hi there
i read this and really its superb. par sabse jiyada sachchai isme hai ek din main bhi kahi pahuchunga chal pada hoon abhi saFar mein hoon waise puri jindagi insan yahi sochta hai ki wo safar me hai, magar ye safar kabhi pura nahi hota. khair,ye wala muje jara ajeeb laga, aaj tak chain se soya naa 'amber' bahoot bechain hoon barood ke ghar mein hoon kahi aap indian army me to nahi.....just kidding finally it was really good sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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1st May 2003, 07:20 AM
sab ne jawaab de kar khoob karii, to yeh naachiiz kya kahe ga
waaqaye bahot achcha likha hai aapne! naye ho, magar isi taraH mehfil sajaate rahiye.. mujhe aapki agli ghazal ka intezaar rahe ga! taareef qabuul farmaaiiye, aman "je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa, te bibba saada dil moD de..!" kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN.. |
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1st May 2003, 09:35 AM
namaste amberji.. wakai mein ..bahut accha likha hai apne... iss mein ek gehra dard chupa hai ... bahut accha likha hai apne..
likte reahiyega.. bye &Take care Zindagi Maut ke pehlu mein soo rai hai... Us bewafa se na pucho meri maut ki wajah... Woh to bus zamane ko dikhane ke liye roo rai hai... |
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hi -
1st May 2003, 03:13 PM
Amber buxari jee,
aapane to pahali hi shayri jore daar likhi hai. shayri.com mein aapaka swagat kerta hoon. pryaas kijiyega new post jaldi dalane ki. aapka shubhchintak, Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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Thanks everyone... |
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Thanks everyone... -
20th May 2003, 01:45 PM
Sorry friends for replying late
Afshan ji, Once again thank you. aapke liye ek aur sheyr arz hai. Fasle aur sahi darmiyaN aur sahi Ghume ulfat ke liye asmaN aur sahi. Neha ji, Tareef ke liye shukriyaH. asha hai aage bhi javab dengi. Sanam ji, Shukriyah. bahoot achchha laga, ki aapko mere sher achchhe lage.contact rakhiyega. Aman ji, Tareef ke liye shukriyaH.Ghazal paida hogi to mahFil jaroor sajegi. Aadab arz hai. Tanhai ji, aap hi ke karan likhta hoon.bura na maniye tanhaie hi likhane ke liye prerit kerti hai. Akant ji, ab aapne kaha hai to socha ek aur likh hi duN. mulahija fermaiye.. aap sabhi ka shukragujar hoon ki es nachiij ko aap sab ne tareef ke kabil samjha.once again thank you all. Amber Buxari kyoNki sirf vahi janta hai ki main kaun hoon... |
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