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kaya toota kaya bikhar gaya yeh main janta hoon,............ -
23rd June 2006, 06:29 PM
ek gustakhi appki khidmat main........
kaya toota kaya bikhar gaya yeh main janta hoon, aandhiyon main chiraag jalanay ki saza main janta hoon... janay wo kon log thay jinko mila sila mohabton ka, zakham-e-mohabat ki tarap ka mazza main janta hoon..... door say dekho isko paas jaogay to pachhtaogay, zindagi kay chhehray pay hai kaya likha main janta hoon.. unkay kochay say uthay jo mera janaza to kaya baat hai, unki baahon main marnay ka mazza main janta hoon....... o chaand taro tum to yuhi bewajha jagtay ho, kisi ki yaadon main jagnay ka mazza main janta hoon..... kiyon bewajha mujhay zindagi say milatay ho yarro, zindagi or moot kay beech ka khala main janta hoon.... wo khaffa hai 'veer' say yeh bhee janta hoon main, unki narazgi main bhee hai ik adda main janta hoon...... appka dost..........raj........bass raj yu hee gustakhia karta rahega agar app jabaab detay rahogay...... ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj) |
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rajveer ji aaj aapki ek purani post padi...bahut accha lagga....purane ahsaaso ko padna. aapki dost  .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th April 2007, 05:02 PM
big B pranaam:
kya baat hai! o chaand taro tum to yuhi bewajha jagtay ho, kisi ki yaadon main jagnay ka mazza main janta hoon.... bahot hi khoob sher rahaa yeH aise hi liKhte raheN duaoN ke saath ijaazaT aapkaa chHotu |
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1st June 2007, 03:50 PM
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kaya toota kaya bikhar gaya yeh main janta hoon, its really very nice lines i hav no word k kinj tareef kra bcoz word ghat jaounge tareef karn layee toooooooo gud mainu shayeri d ta knowledge nahi bilkul v par jo eshsaas tusi ehna lines vich dsse ne inj lagda jive tuhade dil d galll nu kise ne moti vuch pro k mala bna diti.really tooooooooooo gud rb kre tusi inj hee sohna sohna likhde rho aur jo tusi likhde o tuhade ehsaas inj hee sadi ruhha nu chhuhnde rehn. ritu quote=rajveeer;204632]ek gustakhi appki khidmat main........ kaya toota kaya bikhar gaya yeh main janta hoon, aandhiyon main chiraag jalanay ki saza main janta hoon... janay wo kon log thay jinko mila sila mohabton ka, zakham-e-mohabat ki tarap ka mazza main janta hoon..... door say dekho isko paas jaogay to pachhtaogay, zindagi kay chhehray pay hai kaya likha main janta hoon.. unkay kochay say uthay jo mera janaza to kaya baat hai, unki baahon main marnay ka mazza main janta hoon....... o chaand taro tum to yuhi bewajha jagtay ho, kisi ki yaadon main jagnay ka mazza main janta hoon..... kiyon bewajha mujhay zindagi say milatay ho yarro, zindagi or moot kay beech ka khala main janta hoon.... wo khaffa hai 'veer' say yeh bhee janta hoon main, unki narazgi main bhee hai ik adda main janta hoon...... appka dost..........raj........bass raj yu hee gustakhia karta rahega agar app jabaab detay rahogay......[/quote] |
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1st June 2007, 07:18 PM
Bahot hi achha lagaa isse parh kar...
Dunya ke sitam ka koi hisaab nahi, Lekin meri houslo ka bhi jawaab nahi...
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1st June 2007, 07:28 PM
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gustakhii ki sazaa mil jaaye to kya baat ho... hai na Raj ji....? sazaa yeh hai ki aap aise hi mehfil sajaate rahein bas tc jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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2nd June 2007, 01:18 AM
Pranaam,
unkay kochay say uthay jo mera janaza to kaya baat hai, unki baahon main marnay ka mazza main janta hoon....... Bahot sunadar likha hai. Bas meri to zabaan khamosh ho jaati hai apke samne. Ijaazat!!! Grazie Apki gudiya Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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2nd June 2007, 11:29 AM
hi raj ji
kese ho aap? pehle to raj je ye bataiye ki itni achchhi rachna ko kaha chhupa ke rakha tha ki aaj kariban ek sal baad hamare rubaru ho rahi hai ab aapki rachna ki baat kare to wo bahut hi khub hai, ek bahut hi umde alfaazo ke sath aapne ye rachna ko likha hai, pyaar, dard, tadap sabka ek anokha mel aapne is rachna mein kiya hai o chaand taro tum to yuhi bewajha jagtay ho, kisi ki yaadon main jagnay ka mazza main janta hoon..... wo khaffa hai 'veer' say yeh bhee janta hoon main, unki narazgi main bhee hai ik adda main janta hoon...... raj ji aapki ye do panktiyo pe to daad hazir hai, ese hi mehfil sajate rahiyega aapka dost merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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2nd June 2007, 12:45 PM
bare bhaiyaa ,
pranaam, kya khub likhaa hai jii aapne.....ese hii likhte rahiye jii.. kaya toota kaya bikhar gaya yeh main janta hoon, aandhiyon main chiraag jalanay ki saza main janta hoon... wah kya khub kahaa jii.... janay wo kon log thay jinko mila sila mohabton ka, zakham-e-mohabat ki tarap ka mazza main janta hoon..... abb kya kahu .......achi line thi jii.. door say dekho isko paas jaogay to pachhtaogay, zindagi kay chhehray pay hai kaya likha main janta hoon.. jii thik hii kaha aapne...... unkay kochay say uthay jo mera janaza to kaya baat hai, unki baahon main marnay ka mazza main janta hoon....... sach me ye line dil ko chu gayii jii.. o chaand taro tum to yuhi bewajha jagtay ho, kisi ki yaadon main jagnay ka mazza main janta hoon..... wah jii.. kiyon bewajha mujhay zindagi say milatay ho yarro, zindagi or moot kay beech ka khala main janta hoon.... bahut khubb... wo khaffa hai 'veer' say yeh bhee janta hoon main, unki narazgi main bhee hai ik adda main janta hoon...... kya khub kaha jii.....dil khush ho gaya...sach kahu to aapko aaj parke dil hii khush ho gaya ....bahut achaa aur pyaraa lagaa...dil ko gahraii tak chu gayaa..jii.... ese hii likhte rahiye ......aur hume aapko parne kaa moka dete rahiye...aap jase logo se hii to sikhne ko miltaa hai ...jii.. aapki choti bahan~ saloni  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ jindagii jiinaa hai agr to, jindagii kuch ese bitaao roro ke to sab jite hai,tum har gam me bhi muskurao ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~~~~~***SALONI***~~~~~~
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24th March 2009, 01:01 AM
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bohat khoob rajveer ji.............yuhi likhte rahiye,aur mehfil me aate rahiye.. zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th March 2009, 05:08 PM
Kya padh raha hai zamana alfaazoN ke ambaar maiN...
ehsaasoN maiN veer ke hona fanah maiN jaanta huN... Bohat hi khoob veer bhai .. dil nikaal liya sach maiN .. bohat saral masoom aur accha .. maiN apni khushi ka izhaar nahi kar sakta .. ek ek shek ko padh ke chehre pe muskaan ne chaap chor di.. jo halchal macha rahi thi .. ki ye hi soch sakta hai koi aap aise hi likhe dua hai Kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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24th March 2009, 06:28 PM
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mashallah.....bahut khoob RAJVEER ji.....aapki rachnayein hamesha bahut hi umdaa hoti hai...bas yu hi likhte rahiyega...  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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24th March 2009, 06:37 PM
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keep writing wonderful stuff bro. Save me from the safety of my SILENCE
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