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20th August 2003, 12:20 PM
tumhey na chahney ki kasam khatey hai her roz
tumhey dekh kar her kasam todd detey hai her roz, koi na koi sira nikal kar ,kisi treh bhi kud ko tumharey sath sey jod letey hai her roz! |
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20th August 2003, 01:27 PM
Hi meetu jee ,bahot hi khubsurat lines likhin hain aapney .........jitni bhi tariff ki jaye kam hai..
"koi na koi sira nikal kar ,kisi treh bhi kud ko tumharey sath sey jod letey hai her roz!" Mujhe bhi mere ek dost ne kuch bahot pehele bheji thi kuch lines woh meine yahan likhna chaa raha hoon.......... "aasreey mat bana e dil aasreey tote jatey hai bahut rota hai yeh dil kinareey chut jatey hai!" |
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20th August 2003, 03:06 PM
shukriya...yeh shukriya yahan just reply deney k liye nahi hai aam_aadmi ji, yeh hai aapkey us dost k sher k liye...sach hi to likha hai...aasrey tote jatey hai.
or kahi na kahi is sher ka theme bhi kuch aisa hi hai. |
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20th August 2003, 05:28 PM
Bahut Achhe . .
Ye Roz Roz ki KasHmKasH ki Ada BayanGi DilChasp LaGi .. Likhti RaHo |
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21st August 2003, 04:11 AM
hi meetu ji apne bahut acha likha hai.har roz kasam khate hain ke ab na yaad karnge unhe par nibha nahin pate hain.bahut ache
bye punnu |
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21st August 2003, 06:22 PM
meetuji,
tumhey na chahney ki kasam khatey hai her roz tumhey dekh kar her kasam todd detey hai her roz, koi na koi sira nikal kar ,kisi treh bhi kud ko tumharey sath sey jod letey hai her roz! bahot khub..... taarif ki had paar kar di hai... tumhari is baat ne... |
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22nd August 2003, 07:06 PM
tnx meena ji & punnu ji...waisey yeh sher tarif k kabil kaisey ho sakta hai...yahan to her kasam todi ja rahi hai..really kai bar insaan aapney banay huey fesloon per aamel nahi ker pata or .....
na chahtey huey bhi unhey tod deta hai..hena! |
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22nd August 2003, 10:42 PM
meetu dost,
par kai kasmae todne k liyae hi banti hai.... jaha pyaar ho jaha apnapan ho waha door rahna munasib hi nahi aisi laakh kasmae todna bahetar... aur is liyae hi muje yah pasand aaya sahi maie taarif k kaabil hai |
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23rd August 2003, 09:12 PM
wah meetu ji wah
bahut khoob baat boli hai. ek sher arz hai isi baat par "Ek nazar dekh loon aajaao kazaa se pehle, Tumse milne ki tamanna hai khuda se pehle" ================== aviral |
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25th August 2003, 07:50 PM
tnx meena ji &aviral ji
aapki likhi lines bhi bhut kub hai.... i like it. |
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31st August 2003, 07:08 PM
tumhey na chahney ki kasam khatey hai her roz
tumhey dekh kar her kasam todd detey hai her roz, koi na koi sira nikal kar ,kisi treh bhi kud ko tumharey sath sey jod letey hai her roz Jodne ke liye kya use karti ho Fevicol ya something else hey ek kaam karo tum na kabhi Fevi-Quick use kar ke dekhna fir roz roz jodne ki nobat nahi aayegi permanently fix ho jayogi.....  |
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hi! -
1st September 2003, 07:22 PM
tnx for ur advise...mohit ji!
yeh sab materialistic goods shayad aapkey emotions ko jod sakey per jahan tak insaano ki baat hai to yeh sab useless hai...wha don't u try! oh! i think yeh sab aap apply ker chukey hai...hena....  |
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