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ye sochta koi jazba gazal meiN laate hue - 2nd July 2020, 11:27 AM

ये सोचता कोई जज़्बा ग़ज़ल में लाते हुए
असल को कितना गंवाया नक़ल में लाते हुए

कहीं वो शख़्स मिले मुझ को जो कभी मैं था
तो शर्मसार रहूंगा बग़ल में लाते हुए

अजब उन आंखों की गहराई इक न बूंद गिरी
तमाम झील का पानी कंवल में लाते हुए

उजाड़ पा के चमन को उदास लौट रहा
के देखा फूल से बच्चों को क़लमें लाते हुए

ये तर्क-ए-इश्क़ की धमकी भी अहद-ए-इश्क़ सी है
के ना-तमाम रहे है अमल में लाते हुए

मुझे शऊर हुआ अपनी बे-शऊरी का
किसी के हुस्न-ए-अज़ल को ग़ज़ल में लाते हुए

मेरी शराब में साक़ी मिला दिया क्यूं ज़हर
ज़रा छलक गई “ज़र्रा" असल में लाते हुए

- ज़र्रा

ye sochta koi jazba gazal meiN laate hue
asal ko kitna gaNwaaya naqal meiN laate hue

kaheeN wo shakhs mile mujh ko jo kabhi maiN tha
to sharmsaar rahooNga bagal meiN laate hue

ajab un aaNkhoN ki gahraai ik na booNd giri
tamaam jheel ka paani kaNval meiN laate hue

ujaad pa ke chaman ko udaas laut raha
ke dekha phool se bachchoN ko qalmeiN* laate hue
*cutting of a plant for replanting

ye tark*-e-ishq ki dhamki bhi ahd**-e-ishq si hai
ke na-tamaam*** rahe hai amal**** meiN laate hue
*relinquish **promise ***incomplete ****practice

mujhe shaoor* hua apni be-shaoori** ka
kisi ke husn-e-azal*** ko gazal meiN laate hue
*consciousness **bereft of consciousness ***eternal beauty

meri sharaab meiN saaqi mila diya kyooN zahar
zara chhalak gayi “zarraa” asal meiN laate hue

- zarraa


is meiN achchhe naheeN magar “zarraa”
aadat-e-shayari naheeN jaati
   
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6th July 2020, 03:33 PM

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ये सोचता कोई जज़्बा ग़ज़ल में लाते हुए
असल को कितना गंवाया नक़ल में लाते हुए

कहीं वो शख़्स मिले मुझ को जो कभी मैं था
तो शर्मसार रहूंगा बग़ल में लाते हुए

अजब उन आंखों की गहराई इक न बूंद गिरी
तमाम झील का पानी कंवल में लाते हुए

उजाड़ पा के चमन को उदास लौट रहा
के देखा फूल से बच्चों को क़लमें लाते हुए

ये तर्क-ए-इश्क़ की धमकी भी अहद-ए-इश्क़ सी है
के ना-तमाम रहे है अमल में लाते हुए

मुझे शऊर हुआ अपनी बे-शऊरी का
किसी के हुस्न-ए-अज़ल को ग़ज़ल में लाते हुए

मेरी शराब में साक़ी मिला दिया क्यूं ज़हर
ज़रा छलक गई “ज़र्रा" असल में लाते हुए

- ज़र्रा

ye sochta koi jazba gazal meiN laate hue
asal ko kitna gaNwaaya naqal meiN laate hue

kaheeN wo shakhs mile mujh ko jo kabhi maiN tha
to sharmsaar rahooNga bagal meiN laate hue

ajab un aaNkhoN ki gahraai ik na booNd giri
tamaam jheel ka paani kaNval meiN laate hue

ujaad pa ke chaman ko udaas laut raha
ke dekha phool se bachchoN ko qalmeiN* laate hue
*cutting of a plant for replanting

ye tark*-e-ishq ki dhamki bhi ahd**-e-ishq si hai
ke na-tamaam*** rahe hai amal**** meiN laate hue
*relinquish **promise ***incomplete ****practice

mujhe shaoor* hua apni be-shaoori** ka
kisi ke husn-e-azal*** ko gazal meiN laate hue
*consciousness **bereft of consciousness ***eternal beauty

meri sharaab meiN saaqi mila diya kyooN zahar
zara chhalak gayi “zarraa” asal meiN laate hue

- zarraa
Waah kya baat hai zarra sahab umda kalaam
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8th July 2020, 12:40 PM

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Waah kya baat hai zarra sahab umda kalaam
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bahaut shukriya madhu ji ...............................


is meiN achchhe naheeN magar “zarraa”
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