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Exclamation rotiyaaN SOCH kar so jata hooN...!! - 16th November 2015, 06:12 PM
Bahut waqt baad ik choti si peshkas le kar bazm me haazir hun. Bhool chook ke liye muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga...


shaam ho ke sehar so jata hooN,
zulm se darbadar so jata hooN...

jab hawa thand me thithurti hai,
ghuthnoN me rakh ke sar so jata hooN...

neeNd aati nahi mere dar pe,
jaane kaise magar so jata hooN...

paet aawazen karne lagta jab,
rotiyaaN soch kar so jata hooN.

yaad mujhko satati apno ki,
aaNkheN seeNch kar so jata hooN.

jaanleva to hoti hai footpath,
fir bhi kyun roz idhar so jata hooN...

mujhko kitna badal diya sabne,
aaine se bhi darr so jata hooN...

loot li zindagi siyasat ne,
aaNkheN rakh aaNkhoN par so jata hooN..

haNste-haNste uthana mujhko 'Taish',
rote-rote agar so jata hooN...



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16th November 2015, 07:02 PM
waaaah!! Har sher par daad hazir hai janaab...bahut khoob...bahut achcha laga aapko padhna...behatreen ghazal par mubarakbaad aapko..

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17th November 2015, 09:53 AM
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Bahut waqt baad ik choti si peshkas le kar bazm me haazir hun. Bhool chook ke liye muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga...


shaam ho ke sehar so jata hooN,
zulm se darbadar so jata hooN...

jab hawa thand me thithurti hai,
ghuthnoN me rakh ke sar so jata hooN...

neeNd aati nahi mere dar pe,
jaane kaise magar so jata hooN...

paet aawazen karne lagta jab,
rotiyaaN soch kar so jata hooN.

yaad mujhko satati apno ki,
aaNkheN seeNch kar so jata hooN.

jaanleva to hoti hai footpath,
fir bhi kyun roz idhar so jata hooN...

mujhko kitna badal diya sabne,
aaine se bhi darr so jata hooN...

loot li zindagi siyasat ne,
aaNkheN rakh aaNkhoN par so jata hooN..

haNste-haNste uthana mujhko 'Taish',
rote-rote agar so jata hooN...

aree wahhh Lucky hamesha ki tarah khoobsurat ehsaasoN se sajji gazal...behad sakoon milta hai aap jaise shayroN ko padkar...aate rha kijiye aur khoobsurat gazaloN se sdc ko sajate rha kijiye.

duaoN ke saath

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17th November 2015, 11:51 AM
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waaaah!! Har sher par daad hazir hai janaab...bahut khoob...bahut achcha laga aapko padhna...behatreen ghazal par mubarakbaad aapko..

....aate raha kariye..
Madhu ji aapki daad sar aaNkhoN pe. Bas aage v aap yuNhi hausla badhsti raheN....


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17th November 2015, 12:51 PM
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Bahut waqt baad ik choti si peshkas le kar bazm me haazir hun. Bhool chook ke liye muafi ka talabgaar rahuNga...


shaam ho ke sehar so jata hooN,
zulm se darbadar so jata hooN...

jab hawa thand me thithurti hai,
ghuthnoN me rakh ke sar so jata hooN...

neeNd aati nahi mere dar pe,
jaane kaise magar so jata hooN...

paet aawazen karne lagta jab,
rotiyaaN soch kar so jata hooN.

yaad mujhko satati apno ki,
aaNkheN seeNch kar so jata hooN.

jaanleva to hoti hai footpath,
fir bhi kyun roz idhar so jata hooN...

mujhko kitna badal diya sabne,
aaine se bhi darr so jata hooN...

loot li zindagi siyasat ne,
aaNkheN rakh aaNkhoN par so jata hooN..

haNste-haNste uthana mujhko 'Taish',
rote-rote agar so jata hooN...
Wah bhai kin alfaazon mein daad dun samajh nahi aa raha hai bahut umdaa aur gehre khayaalon ko aapne alfaazon mein is saadgi se baandha hai ki kya kahun....yeh ek sher par kai baar muqararrar niklaa

jaanleva to hoti hai footpath,
fir bhi kyun roz idhar so jata hooN...

aapki is rachnaa ne ek behad puraana likha yaad dila diya...shukriyaa

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18th November 2015, 12:06 AM
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aree wahhh Lucky hamesha ki tarah khoobsurat ehsaasoN se sajji gazal...behad sakoon milta hai aap jaise shayroN ko padkar...aate rha kijiye aur khoobsurat gazaloN se sdc ko sajate rha kijiye.

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Wah bhai kin alfaazon mein daad dun samajh nahi aa raha hai bahut umdaa aur gehre khayaalon ko aapne alfaazon mein is saadgi se baandha hai ki kya kahun....yeh ek sher par kai baar muqararrar niklaa

jaanleva to hoti hai footpath,
fir bhi kyun roz idhar so jata hooN...

aapki is rachnaa ne ek behad puraana likha yaad dila diya...shukriyaa

Yunhi likhte rahiYeGaa
Bas bade bhaiya aashirwad banaye rakhiye aur hum bhi aisi kosishen karte rahenge...


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