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23rd May 2005, 02:51 PM
Doston....kal shaam baithe - baitha ek khayal aaya....kisi ke pyar ko dekh.....socha pyar mein aitbaar kitna jaroori hai......ek saath aur samajh ki zaroorat hai....jo kayi log ishq mein samajh nahi paate aur baad mein pachtaate hain......
bus isi khayal mein jo kutch likha aapki nazar kar raha hoon...... wafa ka ilzaam ^AMAN^ bewaafi se behtar hai..... zindagi ki shaam, ruswaai se behtar hai...... Duniya mein chahne waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Paraya dard apnaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Girte ko sambhalene waale milenge bahut, magar…. Haath bada, thaamne waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Kis-kis se juoojhoge, ye ilzaam sang hi le jaana hai….. Khaalis faisla sunane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Gila-o-shikwa se kutch na hoga tumhe bhi haasil…… roothe ko manane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Maayoos ho, mefil se dost, yun na utha kijiye….. Sada de, bulaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Khuda ka shukra hai jo fooka apne armaanon ko….. Varna, laash jalaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Kya ranj, jo hanste.N hai teri daastaan pe ^AMAN^ Mohabaat ke aise afsaane kam hi mila karte hain…. **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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23rd May 2005, 03:09 PM
wafa ka ilzaam ^AMAN^ bewaafi se behtar hai..... zindagi ki shaam, ruswaai se behtar hai...... Duniya mein chahne waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Paraya dard apnaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Girte ko sambhalene waale milenge bahut, magar…. Haath bada, thaamne waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Kis-kis se juoojhoge, ye ilzaam sang hi le jaana hai….. Khaalis faisla sunane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Gila-o-shikwa se kutch na hoga tumhe bhi haasil…… roothe ko manane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Maayoos ho, mefil se dost, yun na utha kijiye….. Sada de, bulaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Khuda ka shukra hai jo fooka apne armaanon ko….. Varna, laash jalaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Kya ranj, jo hanste.N hai teri daastaan pe ^AMAN^ Mohabaat ke aise afsaane kam hi mila karte hain…. Aman Bhai...!Kiss sher ke tareef karein...Kehna moushkil hai...Ek ek line dil ko chou gaya! Daad kaboul kijiye... Thanks Dard parayaa leke jeene waale kam hi mila karte hein Soukh dekar dard sehne waale kam hi mila karte hein... Amanush...  Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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23rd May 2005, 03:34 PM
wow firse ek optimistic kalam..aap bhi badal gaye...achaa hain..waise apne laash shabd ka istemal kiya hain..lekin yaha chalega..itna bura nahin lag raha hain...
 Gila-o-shikwa se kutch na hoga tumhe bhi haasil…… roothe ko manane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. very true..... waise to saare ashaar bahut acche hain lekin uparwala kuch zindagi ki sacchai sa hain....... aapki sis.. mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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23rd May 2005, 03:40 PM
wafa ka ilzaam ^AMAN^ bewaafi se behtar hai.....
zindagi ki shaam, ruswaai se behtar hai...... Classs.. Kya baat kahi hai bhai!! Duniya mein chahne waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Paraya dard apnaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Girte ko sambhalene waale milenge bahut, magar…. Haath bada, thaamne waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Welll Said... Gehri baat hai..!! Kis-kis se juoojhoge, ye ilzaam sang hi le jaana hai….. Khaalis faisla sunane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Gila-o-shikwa se kutch na hoga tumhe bhi haasil…… roothe ko manane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Waaaahhh.. Lekin aapko roothhne hi nahi denge hum.. manane ki baat to baad me aayi! Maayoos ho, mefil se dost, yun na utha kijiye….. Sada de, bulaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Khuda ka shukra hai jo fooka apne armaanon ko….. Varna, laash jalaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Waaaah! Dard ahi magar bahut khoobsurat!! Kya ranj, jo hanste.N hai teri daastaan pe ^AMAN^ Mohabaat ke aise afsaane kam hi mila karte hain…. WaaaaaH! Bahut klhoobsurat Sher hai!! Aman Bhai! Bahut gehre ehsaas hain lekin inhe bahut hi saadgi se kaagaz par utaar diya hai.... Har sher apne aap me kahani kehta hua seedha dil me utara raha hai.... Meri dil se daad kubool kar lena bhai.... Aise hi likhte raho....apna khayal bhi rakhna Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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23rd May 2005, 03:52 PM
Bhaiya...
bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne.. ek ek sher apane aapme bahut kuchh kehata huwa.. aise hi likhate raho bhaiya.. lekin haa yaad hai na maine jo likhane ko bola tha.. abhi use bhi jald pura karna.. aapki pyaari bahan |
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24th May 2005, 10:55 AM
Aman Bhai...!Kiss sher ke tareef karein...Kehna moushkil
hai...Ek ek line dil ko chou gaya! Daad kaboul kijiye... Thanks Dard parayaa leke jeene waale kam hi mila karte hein Soukh dekar dard sehne waale kam hi mila karte hein... Amanush bhai..... jawab mein likha sher bhi aacha laga...... khush rahoo...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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its well said by u tht u need to understand each other in love. if trust is not there still its not love. well har ek sher dil ko chu gaya. milti jhulti hai kahani meri bhi par sach mein padh kar aapka yeh ehsaas acha laga. meri teh dil se daad kabool kijiye dost. yu h likhte rahiye. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.  mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha, ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha! na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya, jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha! ***************************** Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki….. Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki…. Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar….. Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav…. Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar… Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar…. Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai… Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai…. Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman…. Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar…. 
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tumhare kehne ke anusaar.....saade lafzon mein likha hai..... aur tumne apne avtaar mein key board todna kyun band kar diya.....hilte hue tum jayada aache lagte ho.....jaldi hi poorana vaala avtaar kar lo...... tumhara bhai.... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Jas kutch apnon ke kahayl aur zindagi ka haal hi bayan karne ki koshsih ki hai......naam nahi likhoonga shayad tum samajh sakoo...... shukriya jas....dua karoonga ki khush rahoo aur tumhe beshumaar pyar mile.... thuvada dost..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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Maayoos ho, mefil se dost, yun na utha kijiye…..
Sada de, bulaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Khuda ka shukra hai jo fooka apne armaanon ko….. Varna, laash jalaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Aman Praaji, Acha likha hai aapne.... Upar wali line jo quote ki hain woh to ek dum dil mein ghus gayi.... Wah bahut khoob... Dard par wah karte hue acha to nahi lagta magar.. Acha likha hai aapne... thanks Rohin |
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26th May 2005, 07:45 PM
my dearest Aman,
tusi bahut acha likheya hai......kehna mushkil hai kehri lines achiya ney...they all are the best dil nu chu gayi tuhadi eh rachna. really good one..i really really liked it wafa ka ilzaam ^AMAN^ bewaafi se behtar hai..... zindagi ki shaam, ruswaai se behtar hai...... Duniya mein chahne waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Paraya dard apnaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Girte ko sambhalene waale milenge bahut, magar…. Haath bada, thaamne waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Kis-kis se juoojhoge, ye ilzaam sang hi le jaana hai….. Khaalis faisla sunane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Gila-o-shikwa se kutch na hoga tumhe bhi haasil…… roothe ko manane waale kam hi mila karte hain….. Maayoos ho, mefil se dost, yun na utha kijiye….. Sada de, bulaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…… Khuda ka shukra hai jo fooka apne armaanon ko….. Varna, laash jalaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. Kya ranj, jo hanste.N hai teri daastaan pe ^AMAN^ Mohabaat ke aise afsaane kam hi mila karte hain…. touched my hrt aman too good this is....... Priya ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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Agar ye kahUn ki is ek sher maiN jeewan ki sabse badi sacchai hai to shayad galat nahi hoga ,..... bas aapne itna kamaal likha hai ki 3 4 bar padh daa la ise .... bohat khoob ... nacheez ki daad kabool kijiyega .... aapka apna kunal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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30th May 2005, 08:05 PM
Ek aur sach..Wah veer ji..
ek sher jo dil ko chuu gaya.. Khuda ka shukra hai jo fooka apne armaanon ko….. Varna, laash jalaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. aab tak aapke dil ka duaa yaha uth raha hai... yeh kuch lafz aapke aage Sach hai nibhaane waale kam hi milaa karte hain dil ko dil baat sunaane waale kam hi milaa karte hain.. ek hum hai ki har mod har saksh se dil laga lete hai yun dil par dil lutaane waale kam hi milaa karte hain.. har hasrat bade armaano se aarzoo ka naam leti hai aur har aarzoo pe dil jalaane waale kam hi milaa karte hain.. Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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30th May 2005, 08:45 PM
mere aman,
tumhari yah rachna...... tumhare khayal.... bhul nahi paaungi... khush raho di |
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30th May 2005, 08:48 PM
Hey AMan,
Very well written mate.. Really enjoyed it.. Keep it up chal waha chal jahan tere jaise aur bhi hai... |
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Shukriya bhai.....dard hi dard ko mehsoos kar sakta hai.....aur likhne vaale ka haal bhi..... saath dete rehna...... tumhara apna...... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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tumhare saale sahab..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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ki khoob likhya hai.... ek hum hai ki har mod har saksh se dil laga lete hai yun dil par dil lutaane waale kam hi milaa karte hain.. wah.....kalaam vich jehdi kaat si...poori ho gayi...... hor kitthe ho.....hun tak busy schedule chal reha hai......? cheeti -cheeti aao..... thuvada veer..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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mere aman, a re... anjane mai dukh pahuchaya ho to maafi chhati hu... par aap sabhi mere apne hai...... mere likhu ya nahi tab bhi..... lekin ek baat mai kabul karti hu k maan na aur jatana dono mai fark hai.... aur jatana jyada jaroory ....... di |
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ye to khushi ke anso the.....kayi arse ke baad kisi ne mujhe apna kaha..... aur hum sab aapke baache hi to hain......aapse bahut pyar mila hai hum sabko...... aapka baccha..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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1st June 2005, 03:02 PM
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thanks dear...... yours..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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1st June 2005, 09:04 PM
its true aman
i too agree a ghajal for you sochaaa nahii.n achhaa buraa dekhaaa sunaa kuchh bhii nahii.n maa.ngaa khudaa se raat din tere sivaa kuchh bhii nahii.n dekhaa tujhe sochaa tujhe chaahaa tujhe puujaa tujhe merii Khataa merii wafaa terii Khataa kuchh bhii nahii.n jis par hamaarii aa.Nkh ne motii bichhaaye raat bhar bhejaa wahii kaaGaz use hamane likhaa kuchh bhii nahii.n ik shaam kii dahaliiz par baiThe rahe wo der tak aa.Nkho.n se kii baate.n bahut muu.Nh se kahaa kuchh bhii nahii take care mrinal |
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2nd June 2005, 10:31 AM
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Kahan ho dear....kaafi dinon ke baad hi aati ho...... u know how much we miss you......atleast once in a blue moon apne doston ko yaad kar liya karoo.... Gazal bahut aachi hai Mrinal..... take care....hope to see you soon again.... Urs Friend..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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5th June 2005, 05:35 PM
amanji
very nice...acha laga padh ke sonal There would come a time when we have to stop loving a person not because that person started hating us ..... but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go..... |
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8th June 2005, 09:35 AM
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kutch yaadein...kutch baatein..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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8th June 2005, 03:33 PM
OH Aman ji...22 gud!
..this one must be amongst ur bests..! Maayoos ho, mefil se dost, yun na utha kijiye….. Sada de, bulaane waale kam hi mila karte hain……wah! Khuda ka shukra hai jo fooka apne armaanon ko….. Varna, laash jalaane waale kam hi mila karte hain…. bahot nokila dard hai...! bahot gehri baate ...bahot achha laga padh kar!... har hasrat bade armaano se aarzoo ka naam leti hai aur har aarzoo pe dil jalaane waale kam hi milaa karte hain.. WAh...ye sher bhi mast hai Mast ji!... tc komal |
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8th June 2005, 04:38 PM
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aapki her line uske her shabd unmein chhupe huye jajjbaat sabhi tareef ke kabil hain bahut hi achchha likha hai aapne.. bahut achchhe shayr to aap hain hi. bas yahi kahunga ki aage bhi likhate rahiyega.. Akant... आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो... AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho... |
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9th June 2005, 08:56 AM
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TC..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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9th June 2005, 11:59 AM
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aapne pada aur ise saraha.....shukriya aapka..... kush rahiye..... aapka apna..... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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