Ghazal - Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho -
5th January 2006, 07:14 PM
Sabhi ahbaab ko naye saal ki nek Khahishaat pesh karta huuN. Bade dinoN baad aap se muKhatib huuN, ye Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai. Aapki aara ka intezaar rahega.
GHAZAL
Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho
Ek paTthar se bol kar dekho
Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki
Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho
Unke peeche chhupa hua hai kya
Apne patte to khol kar dekho
Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari
Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho
Baat uski zabaan meiN to karo
Waqt bolega bol kar dekho
Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko
Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho
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Praveen Saxena
raah meiN hi manziloN ka zikr mat chedo Praveen
manziloN ne sun liya toh aur woh badh jaayeNgi
Praveen Ji,
Aapke naye saal ki nek khahishaat bahut khoob hai. Khaaskar yeh
Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki
Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho
It's true. It requires guts to fulfill ambitions. Thanks for sharing this with us.
^^^Shalini^^^
... jab se kisi ne
karli hai suraj ki chori
aao
chal ke suraj dhoondhein
aur na mile toh
kiran kiran phir jama karein hum
aur ik suraj naya banyein
-NM
nam parha ummeed thee achha kalam parhne ko milega wahee huya bahut pyree baten hain koyee sher kam nahee par ye do yaad rahenge kabhee kisee ko tumhara nam le ke sunayoonga wah ko kitnee baar kahoon pata nahee par jitnee baar likhoon kam lagegee
Anil
Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari
Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho
mere ashar ko mahoob samjh ke chhoomte the jo
kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai
itna nayaab heera kaise chupa reh gaya itne din...? dar asal hum zyada dard ki galiyon mein hi phera lagaate hain shayad isiliey...Anil ji ka shukriya jo unhone is heere ko dhuundne ki zehmat ki...
Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari
Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho
dil se mehsoos kiya ja sakta hai apke in ehsaason ko...behad khuubsurat!
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho
wah Praveen sir
bahut hi badhiya likha hai
shabdo ka kam prayog karke bahut kuchh samjha diya hai apne
ese hi likte rahiye or mehfil ko sajate rahiye
hum ese hi aapko padhte rahegenge or aapse sikhte rahenge
Sabhi ahbaab ko naye saal ki nek Khahishaat pesh karta huuN. Bade dinoN baad aap se muKhatib huuN, ye Ghazal pesh-e-Khidmat hai. Aapki aara ka intezaar rahega.
GHAZAL
Ret ka dil tatol kar dekho
Ek paTthar se bol kar dekho
Itni chahat hai gar baharoN ki
Koi toofaN tatol kar dekho
Unke peeche chhupa hua hai kya
Apne patte to khol kar dekho
Maal-o-daulat se hote haiN bhaari
Chand ehsaas tol kar dekho
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho
Baat uski zabaan meiN to karo
Waqt bolega bol kar dekho
Mil hi jaaoNga main kahiiN tumko
Band lamhoN ko khol kar dekho
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Praveen Saxena
Praveen ji
aapki yeh aik purani shayri par nazar gye to maiN padey bina reh na saki...etne sacche ehsaas.....dil ke khaas kareeb rhi yeh poetry.
yeh sher muje apne dil ke bahutttttttttt kareeb lga.
ZaKhm itne ke gin na paaoge
Meri muskaan khol kar dekho
yu hi likhtey rhiye aur bazm mein aate rhiye.
regards
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...