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9th September 2006, 05:38 PM

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yaar i really like your id sachha pyar......
bahut good si feeling aati hai pad ke.........

anyways keep it up......

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Well poore page maiN kuch to pasand aaya ... id hi sahi .,... waise kamaal ki nazrern hai aapki .. itni sare alfazoN main us alfaaz ko dhundh hi liya jo mere dil ke kareeb hai ....

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Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! - 9th September 2006, 11:24 PM

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Adaab ek arse baad...

Hum alag sahi aaj ke daur maiN... par kaise bhooluN maiN wo raaheN... chalte the sath kadam chalti thi sang sanseN...batao kya badla hai is jindgi main... pehle jagte the tere pyar maiN, abbas intzaar maiN kat-ti hai raateN, mil leta tha tujhse tab roobroo, aur ab tasveer se hoti hai bateN.. tabhi mera dil tere liye aaj bhi dhadakta hai... tere naam pe na jane kitna tadapta hai.. kehta hai tujhe jab koi bewafa... roti hai meri aankheN.. haN sach roti hai meri aaNkheN..........

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Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe…

Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN…
Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe…

Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala..
kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe…

*Khaas, important person


NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle…
Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe…

* aankhoN ki chamak,


Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka…
Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe…

Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN…
Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe…

HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar..
Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe…

*Aadat


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hi kaise hai aap kunal ji

aaj apki iss post ka reply bhi kar rahi hu.

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10th September 2006, 12:37 AM

hi kunal


kaise ho janab

aapne bahot hi umda likha hai aur aapki ye peskas bahot hi behtrin hai


ummid hai aapki achi peshkas age aur padhne ko milegi


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kunal bhai daad lete lete thak nahi jaate........

kya isse kuch gum kam hota hai .....
ya dard ko badava milta hia.......
ki aur bade dard to apne zakham kagaz pe utaar sake....

bura mat mannana.....

mian bhi yaha apna gum baantne hi aayi hoon.....

par na jaane kyun aur kayi loho ke gum jud rahe hain....

hum to soch rahe hai ke abhi to bahut kuch hona baaki hai....
kya ahum jhel payenge........

anyways u wright good

paas aa kar sabhi door chale jaate hain,
hum akele the akle hi reh jaate hain,
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marahm lagane waale hi dard de jaate hain............
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Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! - 10th September 2006, 01:37 PM

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Adaab ek arse baad...

Hum alag sahi aaj ke daur maiN... par kaise bhooluN maiN wo raaheN... chalte the sath kadam chalti thi sang sanseN...batao kya badla hai is jindgi main... pehle jagte the tere pyar maiN, abbas intzaar maiN kat-ti hai raateN, mil leta tha tujhse tab roobroo, aur ab tasveer se hoti hai bateN.. tabhi mera dil tere liye aaj bhi dhadakta hai... tere naam pe na jane kitna tadapta hai.. kehta hai tujhe jab koi bewafa... roti hai meri aankheN.. haN sach roti hai meri aaNkheN..........

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Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe…

Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN…
Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe…

Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala..
kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe…

*Khaas, important person


NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle…
Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe…

* aankhoN ki chamak,


Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka…
Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe…

Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN…
Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe…

HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar..
Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe…

*Aadat


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Kunaal -: 30-8-2006

wah janab kya dard bayan kiya hai aapne apni shayri main such hamare dil ke bhi kuch purane jakham fir se hare ho gaye
aapke is khoobsurat kalam pe dil se hamari daad hazir hai kabool farmaiye.

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Re: Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! - 10th September 2006, 07:37 PM

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hi kunal


kaise ho janab

aapne bahot hi umda likha hai aur aapki ye peskas bahot hi behtrin hai


ummid hai aapki achi peshkas age aur padhne ko milegi


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kunal bhai daad lete lete thak nahi jaate........

kya isse kuch gum kam hota hai .....
ya dard ko badava milta hia.......
ki aur bade dard to apne zakham kagaz pe utaar sake....

bura mat mannana.....

mian bhi yaha apna gum baantne hi aayi hoon.....

par na jaane kyun aur kayi loho ke gum jud rahe hain....

hum to soch rahe hai ke abhi to bahut kuch hona baaki hai....
kya ahum jhel payenge........

anyways u wright good

paas aa kar sabhi door chale jaate hain,
hum akele the akle hi reh jaate hain,
dil ka dard kise dikhaye,
marahm lagane waale hi dard de jaate hain............
Neha ...

MaiN kisi se bhi ye umeed nahi karta likhte waqt ki sab aayenge aur mujhe apni waah se laad deNge ... par jo bhi maine likha .. uska matlab sirf mazaak se hi tha .. dukh sabke paas hai ... mere paas bhi shayad ho .. par kyuN is dard bhari mehfil main dard pe dard karke .. jakhmon ko kureedte hi raheN bas,... waise bhi yahaN dard pe dard aur ah ka chalan hai .. par jo dard bayaN karke bhi muskurayeN .. wahi zindgi pe jeet hasil karte hai .. aur dikha dete hai dard ko ..ki wo kitna bhi bada kyuN na ho chota hai bohat .. zinda-dili ke saamne ...

par tab bhi aapko meri baat galat lagi ho to muafi ka talabgaar huN ...

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Re: Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! - 10th September 2006, 08:06 PM

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wah janab kya dard bayan kiya hai aapne apni shayri main such hamare dil ke bhi kuch purane jakham fir se hare ho gaye
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Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii - 19th September 2006, 10:04 PM

Hi Kunal ji

kese hai aap ? vese mey behot deeno se is forum per hu mager aaj tak aap ki kisi bhi post ko nehi pedha nezane ku nazer andaaz karta reha uske liye maafi chahta hu aur rehi baat aap ke is kalaam ki tho iski shaan mey kahene ko kuch bhi nehi mere paas dil ki zuba aap ne is kadar beya ki hai ke mey kuch likh nehi paaya tarif mey aur nahi koi lafz mile is kalaam ki tarif ke liye sochta hu ke kya likhu aap ke kalaam ka har lafz dil ke taar beja reha hi behot hi umda likha hai aapne kisi ki sikayato ko aap ne bade nazakat se likha hai aap ka ye pahela kalaam hai jo mene pedha aur behot pasand aaya

us khuda se duwa karta hu ke aap uhi likhte rahe !

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bahut hi pyari aur dil mai dard ka ehsas jagane wali panktiyain likien haien aapnaie.

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Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! - 20th September 2006, 05:43 PM

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Adaab ek arse baad...

Hum alag sahi aaj ke daur maiN... par kaise bhooluN maiN wo raaheN... chalte the sath kadam chalti thi sang sanseN...batao kya badla hai is jindgi main... pehle jagte the tere pyar maiN, abbas intzaar maiN kat-ti hai raateN, mil leta tha tujhse tab roobroo, aur ab tasveer se hoti hai bateN.. tabhi mera dil tere liye aaj bhi dhadakta hai... tere naam pe na jane kitna tadapta hai.. kehta hai tujhe jab koi bewafa... roti hai meri aankheN.. haN sach roti hai meri aaNkheN..........

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Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe…

Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN…
Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe…

Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala..
kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe…

*Khaas, important person


NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle…
Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe…

* aankhoN ki chamak,


Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka…
Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe…

Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN…
Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe…

HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar..
Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe…

*Aadat


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Jiwan to hai ek sangram,
Jise tum jito har DWAR par.

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Re: Hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii - 20th September 2006, 07:15 PM

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Hi Kunal ji

kese hai aap ? vese mey behot deeno se is forum per hu mager aaj tak aap ki kisi bhi post ko nehi pedha nezane ku nazer andaaz karta reha uske liye maafi chahta hu aur rehi baat aap ke is kalaam ki tho iski shaan mey kahene ko kuch bhi nehi mere paas dil ki zuba aap ne is kadar beya ki hai ke mey kuch likh nehi paaya tarif mey aur nahi koi lafz mile is kalaam ki tarif ke liye sochta hu ke kya likhu aap ke kalaam ka har lafz dil ke taar beja reha hi behot hi umda likha hai aapne kisi ki sikayato ko aap ne bade nazakat se likha hai aap ka ye pahela kalaam hai jo mene pedha aur behot pasand aaya

us khuda se duwa karta hu ke aap uhi likhte rahe !

abhi ke liye chalta hu

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apna khayal rakhiyega .. behtari se...

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Re: Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! - 20th September 2006, 07:19 PM

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bahut khub bahiya
Tumhara bhi bohat bohat shukriya chote bhai....



aur aap sabhi ka shukraguzaar huN maiN ... ki itne dino baad mehfil maai aaya hUn aur aapne itna maan diya .. pyaar diya .. umeedd hai ye sath chutega nahi aur aap log apne pyaar se mujhe yuN hi nawazte rahenge ... aapka apna

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Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! - 21st September 2006, 02:48 PM

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Adaab ek arse baad...

Hum alag sahi aaj ke daur maiN... par kaise bhooluN maiN wo raaheN... chalte the sath kadam chalti thi sang sanseN...batao kya badla hai is jindgi main... pehle jagte the tere pyar maiN, abbas intzaar maiN kat-ti hai raateN, mil leta tha tujhse tab roobroo, aur ab tasveer se hoti hai bateN.. tabhi mera dil tere liye aaj bhi dhadakta hai... tere naam pe na jane kitna tadapta hai.. kehta hai tujhe jab koi bewafa... roti hai meri aankheN.. haN sach roti hai meri aaNkheN..........

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Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe…

Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN…
Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe…

Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala..
kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe…

*Khaas, important person


NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle…
Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe…

* aankhoN ki chamak,


Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka…
Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe…

Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN…
Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe…

HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar..
Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe…

*Aadat


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Kunaal -: 30-8-2006
namaskar kunal ji.....!

main aaj shayad phele baar aapki post par aaye hu, par aapki gazal phele bhi pad chuki hu, aap etne aachey shayer hain to hum bhalla aapki tareef bhi kaya karey. aapki gazal to kuad aapki tareef karti hain. har ek share dil ko chu gaya. bahut sachai hai appki gazal main.

Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN…
Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe…

Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala..
kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe…

bahut khoob......!

NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle…
Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe…

bilkul sach kaha....!


HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar..
Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe…


great.................!

dua karti hu aap hamesha yu hi likhtey rahey.

aapki dost


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Re: Re: Aur wo VEHAM bataate Rahe....! - 23rd September 2006, 08:48 PM

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namaskar kunal ji.....!

main aaj shayad phele baar aapki post par aaye hu, par aapki gazal phele bhi pad chuki hu, aap etne aachey shayer hain to hum bhalla aapki tareef bhi kaya karey. aapki gazal to kuad aapki tareef karti hain. har ek share dil ko chu gaya. bahut sachai hai appki gazal main.

great.................!

dua karti hu aap hamesha yu hi likhtey rahey.

aapki dost
Sunita ji ...

Ganimat hai aap aa to gayi .. is khaak ki tukbandi pe ... aur yuN itni tareef karke mujhe sharminda na kijiye .. ye aap logo ka hi rehmokaram hai jo mujhe yahan banaya hua hai abhi tak .. warna kunaal ki bisaat hi kya .. mitti maiN mile to barsoN ho gaye use ,,,

aap apna khayal rakhiyega ... aur aane ke liye behad shukriya

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hi kunal


yaar i really like your id sachha pyar......
bahut good si feeling aati hai pad ke.........

anyways keep it up......

neha
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Bewafa na wo na MaiN, hum apne karam nibahte rahe…
MaiN sehta raha sitam sare, aur wo sitam dhaate rahe…

beautiful bhayee ..


Kis baat ki kahani kahuN, kis baat ke fasaane sunauN…
Liktha raha naam jo dil pe, wo dil se sanam mitate rahe…

hmm acha hai

Is gali phir us gali maiN, pairoN par Zulm karte chala..
kehta gaya apna unhe,wo gairoN ko aham*bataate rahe…

aham.............. kya baat hia ye word pahli dafa padha ghazal mai


*Khaas, important person


NazroN maiN bache ehsaas uski nishani bana sambahle…
Mai roya gham-e-judai pe, wo noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe…

noor-e-chashm*bahate rahe

kamaal hia yaar
kamaal hai ... ye bhi sorrat kamaal rahi


* aankhoN ki chamak,


Pyaasi raahoN se kya poochuN pata dar-e-mohabbat ka…
Rahe sambhalte kaantoN par, wo beraham bichaate rahe…

yaar tumne to had kar di hai
baksh do bhayee unko bhi


Aasra unka kahaN khuda bhi jo kiye ‘saccha_pyar’ yahaN…
Hum mit gaye chahat mai unki, aur wo veham*batate rahe…

hasil-e-ghazal kahunga ise to
jabardast.!!!!!!!


HaaN bewafa wo kaise, usne bewafai se wafa to ki yaar..
Illat*meri bhi khoob kaho, wafa unse hardam nibhate rahe…

again doosra hasil-e-gahzal

baat hai teri har baat main
koe din ugayega tu raat main

likhte raho bhayee
likhte hi raho
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