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Teri Ankhon ka suroor... - 17th October 2009, 12:07 PM
Shayro...
Aap logo ki shayri se kuch seekh kar,
maine aaj ek shayri likhne ki koshish ki hai..
Please is par apni rai mujhe de..

Teri Ankhon ka suroor...
Teri Ankhon ka suroor,
Bujhti shama jala de !
Hoon to mein Aashique...
Tu chahe to KHUDA bana de!!

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17th October 2009, 12:39 PM
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Shayro...
Aap logo ki shayri se kuch seekh kar,
maine aaj ek shayri likhne ki koshish ki hai..
Please is par apni rai mujhe de..

Teri Ankhon ka suroor...
Teri Ankhon ka suroor,
Bujhti shama jala de !
Hoon to mein Aashique...
Tu chahe to KHUDA bana de!!

Aapka Apna
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17th October 2009, 04:16 PM
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Shayro...
Aap logo ki shayri se kuch seekh kar,
maine aaj ek shayri likhne ki koshish ki hai..
Please is par apni rai mujhe de..

Teri Ankhon ka suroor...
Teri Ankhon ka suroor,
Bujhti shama jala de !
Hoon to mein Aashique...
Tu chahe to KHUDA bana de!!

Aapka Apna
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Nice start... Aap aage achcha likhenge ummid hai..
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