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Mere zehan mein basi teri khusbu
Kuch bikhri si kuch mehaki si
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Kya kahne....
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Mere zehn mein jab bhi tumhara naam aata hai
Na koi dard hota hai na hi aaraam aata hai
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Kya baat kya baat...kya kuch kah diya in do line me..
Bahut khoob sarika.....
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22nd July 2016, 02:37 PM
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Zahan se mei.N teri yadei.N mita daloo.N magar Fakhri
Karoo.Nga kya mei.N us khaali jagah ka yeh bata jana
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Waahhh!!! Kya sawaal hai...bahut khoob andaaz raha fakhri sahab.....
Daad pesh hai..
Aate rahiyega.....
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24th July 2016, 12:05 AM
Zehn mein ab bhi aate ho kabhi tum yaad ban kar jab
Meri saansein mehakti hain, main dhadkan thaam leti hoon
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24th July 2016, 09:39 AM
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Zehn mein ab bhi aate ho kabhi tum yaad ban kar jab
Meri saansein mehakti hain, main dhadkan thaam leti hoon
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24th July 2016, 09:51 AM
Aap sabhi mohtaram khvateen aur hazraat ka shukriya
Zehan se wabasta ashaar pesh karne ke liye
Chaliye iss hafte ka naya lafz pesh-e-khudmat hai
Aap sab kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge aisi umeed karta hu
Word: Sitam
Ye fiza-e-baagh mujh ko raas na aayi kabhi
Zindagi asloob ye kaisa sitam bhi karney ka (MUJAHID)
Asloob= manner/style/form
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24th July 2016, 11:25 PM
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Kya baat kya baat...kya kuch kah diya in do line me..
Bahut khoob sarika.....
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Shukriya...........madhu.
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24th July 2016, 11:26 PM
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25th July 2016, 07:30 AM
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Aap sabhi mohtaram khvateen aur hazraat ka shukriya
Zehan se wabasta ashaar pesh karne ke liye
Chaliye iss hafte ka naya lafz pesh-e-khudmat hai
Aap sab kaseer ta'daad mai shirkat karenge aisi umeed karta hu
Word: Sitam
Ye fiza-e-baagh mujh ko raas na aayi kabhi
Zindagi asloob ye kaisa sitam bhi karney ka (MUJAHID)
Asloob= manner/style/form
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Bahut khoob......
Ek purani koshish pesh karti hun......
Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN.....
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25th July 2016, 03:42 PM
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Bahut khoob......
Ek purani koshish pesh karti hun......
Ki sitam ko us ki ada samajh ke laga liya maine seene se
Meri ek zara huyi bhool to vo gina raha hai hisaab meiN.....
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25th July 2016, 03:56 PM
Mana mehboob ke sitam kam nahi
Unka ye hum pe karam kam nahi
Vo humko yaad to karte honge
Jeene ko itna veham kam nahi
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25th July 2016, 08:01 PM
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Oye hoye hoye hoye....so true na....?..................
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Haan ji.........sachchi baat hai.....dil ka haal khoob samajh liya tumne...
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25th July 2016, 08:03 PM
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Mana mehboob ke sitam kam nahi
Unka ye hum pe karam kam nahi
Vo humko yaad to karte honge
Jeene ko itna veham kam nahi
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Haye !!kya baat ye vaham hee to hai jo unka khayaal nhi jata dil se........bahut khoob madam.........
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25th July 2016, 09:14 PM
Woh karam kare ya sitam kare
Koii unse kehdo ke kum kare
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25th July 2016, 10:05 PM
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Mana mehboob ke sitam kam nahi
Unka ye hum pe karam kam nahi
Vo humko yaad to karte honge
Jeene ko itna veham kam nahi
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25th July 2016, 10:06 PM
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Woh karam kare ya sitam kare
Koii unse kehdo ke kum kare
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Bohat aala sher pesh kiya aapne fakhri ji
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26th July 2016, 06:21 PM
Hamaare aage tera jub kisi ne naam liya
Dil-e-sitam zadha ko hum ne thaam thaam liya
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26th July 2016, 08:34 PM
Tera her sitam mai.N ne jhela hai, Tu yeh na samajh woh akela hai
Tujhe pachtana hoga aek din, Tu ne kaisa khel yeh khela hai
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26th July 2016, 11:12 PM
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Tera her sitam mai.N ne jhela hai, Tu yeh na samajh woh akela hai
Tujhe pachtana hoga aek din, Tu ne kaisa khel yeh khela hai
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Bohat khoob sher hai fakhri ji
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27th July 2016, 09:42 AM
Fakhri sahab.....kamaal ke sher pesh kiye hain aapne....
Bahut lutf aaya......bahut khoob....
Ek aur koshish meri taraf se...
Vo sitam kare ye hai aarzoo kisi baat ka main gila karun
Koi rabt unse bana rahe koi kaam ho ki mila karun......
Madhu....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
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27th July 2016, 11:00 AM
Bohat khoob madhu sahiba
Bara hi dilkash sher pesh kiya aapne
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27th July 2016, 06:46 PM
Shukria Mujahidbhai aur Madhubehen. Madhubehen aap ka sher lajawab hai aur jitno tareef ki jaey utni kum hai. Aap dono ki himmat afzai ka bohot shukria.
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Shukria Mujahidbhai aur Madhubehen. Madhubehen aap ka sher lajawab hai aur jitno tareef ki jaey utni kum hai. Aap dono ki himmat afzai ka bohot shukria.
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Hausla afzai ka behad shukriya fakhri ji...
Salamat rahein..
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29th July 2016, 09:16 AM
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Fakhri sahab.....kamaal ke sher pesh kiye hain aapne....
Bahut lutf aaya......bahut khoob....
Ek aur koshish meri taraf se...
Vo sitam kare ye hai aarzoo kisi baat ka main gila karun
Koi rabt unse bana rahe koi kaam ho ki mila karun......
Madhu....
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Bahut hi aala sher Madhu...daad qubool farmaiye
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29th July 2016, 09:17 AM
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Woh karam kare ya sitam kare
Koii unse kehdo ke kum kare
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Waah kya saadgi janaab mazaa aa gaya
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29th July 2016, 09:19 AM
Sitam ulfat ka hum pe abhi jaari hai
log kehte hai saal hum pe bhaari hai
nabz dekhi hai jin bhi haakimon ne
kehne lage gehri bahut bimaari hai
teri zeenat mein aisi bhi koi baat nahi
teri aankhon ki hi saari zimmedaari hai
haule haule ye daur guzar jaayega
chaayi dil pe abhi ishq ki khumaari hai
mehfuus hoon baahon mein hi rehne dena
is lamhe ke liye zindagi guzaari hai
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29th July 2016, 09:54 AM
Mast sahab Kya kehne
Wallah har ek sher ne dil ko romaanvi kar diya
Itna pur-asar kalaam uff mast sahab
Yaqeen maniye alfaaz nahi mere paas
3rd sher ne maano dil ko cheer diya
Mubarak aisi umda kalaam ko takhleeq karne ke liye
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Mast sahab Kya kehne
Wallah har ek sher ne dil ko romaanvi kar diya
Itna pur-asar kalaam uff mast sahab
Yaqeen maniye alfaaz nahi mere paas
3rd sher ne maano dil ko cheer diya
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Shukriyaa janaab kabhi yun hota hai ki kuch nahi banta aur kabhi ghazal pal bhar mein muqammal ho jaati hai aaj kuch aise hi hua...sach kahiye to to 3rd mera bhi pasandida sher hai...saath ka shukriyaa
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Sitam ulfat ka hum pe abhi jaari hai
log kehte hai saal hum pe bhaari hai
nabz dekhi hai jin bhi haakimon ne
kehne lage gehri bahut bimaari hai
teri zeenat mein aisi bhi koi baat nahi
teri aankhon ki hi saari zimmedaari hai
haule haule ye daur guzar jaayega
chaayi dil pe abhi ishq ki khumaari hai
mehfuus hoon baahon mein hi rehne dena
is lamhe ke liye zindagi guzaari hai
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Anu....aapke roomani andaaz ke ham hamesha se fan hain...aur aaj to vo jadu sar chad kar bol raha hai...ek ek sher bas dil me utar gaya...ye sitam yun hee jari rahe yahi dua hai......
Ghazal me jaam ka nasha, kya ghazab khumari hai
Inayatein yun karte rahna iltza hamari hai...
Salamat rahein...
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30th July 2016, 08:16 AM
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Anu....aapke roomani andaaz ke ham hamesha se fan hain...aur aaj to vo jadu sar chad kar bol raha hai...ek ek sher bas dil me utar gaya...ye sitam yun hee jari rahe yahi dua hai......
Ghazal me jaam ka nasha, kya ghazab khumari hai
Inayatein yun karte rahna iltza hamari hai...
Salamat rahein...
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Aapki iltza sar aankhon par, bahut bahut shukriyaa saath aur daad dono ka...
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3rd August 2016, 08:53 AM
Dosto pesh-e-khidmat iss hafte ka naya lafz
Word: Kirdaar
Iss kahaani mai faqat dou kirdaar hai
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4th August 2016, 04:51 AM
Tum mere kirdaar ka kya poochte ho sheikh ji
Ger raat ko mai.N kehdo.N din, suraj nikal aaey waha.N
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kahani me kaii kirdaar ho.nge
Sabhi ko dekh lu.n parda hate to.........
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Meri ek koshish...
har kirdaar hai zariya tere nazdeek aane ka
tassavur mein tujhe rakhkar zamaana bhul jaane ka
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Meri ek koshish...
har kirdaar hai zariya tere nazdeek aane ka
tassavur mein tujhe rakhkar zamaana bhul jaane ka
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Bohat la-jawaab sher pesh kiya aapne
Dil garden garden hogaya
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Bunta hai aur bigaDta hai kirdar se hi aadmi
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Bunta hai aur bigaDta hai kirdar se hi aadmi
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Bahut khoob fakhri sahab......waah!!
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tassavur mein tujhe rakhkar zamaana bhul jaane ka
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Kya baat haii...............waah!!!!
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Shukria Madhuji. Aap ko pasand aaya, khushi hui.
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Dil garden garden hogaya
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