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Pagli aatma - 19th August 2010, 03:50 PM

PAGLI AATMA


Peepal ke ped ke neeche ek aatma ,safed sarhi me bhatkti rahti hai.
Gahra jaata hai jab raat ka sannata ,uske rudan ki nadi bahti hai.

Maine ye kissa suna , socha, thoda dara par fir rah na paya,
Mai ne us manzar se do chaar hone ka mansooba banaya.

Chala raat ko peepal ki taraf ,ek pair aage ek peechhe jaata tha,
Thoda dil ko kada karta tha , lekin thoda sa ghabraata tha.

Jaise taise jaap karta hua pahuncha manjil-e-maqsood par,
Chaandni raat me nazar parhi ek insaani vazood par.

Dar gaya ikdam , dil dhaad dhaad baj utha, ghabraya,
Lekin tarqsheel tha islie housla jutaya ,aage qadam badhaya.

Ajeeb manzar tha ,baal bikhraaey , ek daal pe nazar jamaaey,
Safed sarhi me baithi thi ik udaas aurat door taktaki lagaaey.

Baaju me dabaaey baithi ek potli numa bagli thi,
Mujhe laga shayad vo gaao.n ki hi koi pagli thi.

Mujhe dekh kar vo birju birju kah ke rone hasne lagi,
Uski haalat dekh ke mai vaythit ho utha,udaasi mujhe dasne lagi.

Maine use thoda naram lahze me , apnepan se bulaya,
Vo baat karne lagi aur mujhe apna dukh bhara sach bataya.

Birju uska pati tha , do beegha zameen par kheti karta tha
kadi dhoop me mushaqqat se , mushkil se guzar karta tha .

Apne aap se ghulta rahta tha, karaz ke bojh na sah saka ,
Khuddar tha ,haath na faila saka ,darad kisi se na kah saka,

Raat ko is hi peepal ke ped se fanda laga ke jhool gaya,
Vo azaad bharat ka ankheela lekin jazbaati kisaan tha.
Jis jagah jaam-e-shahadat pee gaya mulk ka ann data,
Ab pagli ka yehi ashyana , ye hi mandir , yehi shamshaan tha.

Usko yaad karti thi ,raat ke sannate me uski awaaz sunti thi pagli,
Diya jalaati thi uski yaad me, gum hue naqash fir bunti thi pagli.

Bichude sajan ki yaad me , aansu bahaati ped ke neeche mandrati
hai,
Pagli ko peepal me birju nazar aata hai , logo.n ko pagli ,aatma nazar aati hai.

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20th August 2010, 03:37 PM
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PAGLI AATMA


Peepal ke ped ke neeche ek aatma ,safed sarhi me bhatkti rahti hai.
Gahra jaata hai jab raat ka sannata ,uske rudan ki nadi bahti hai.

Maine ye kissa suna , socha, thoda dara par fir rah na paya,
Mai ne us manzar se do chaar hone ka mansooba banaya.

Chala raat ko peepal ki taraf ,ek pair aage ek peechhe jaata tha,
Thoda dil ko kada karta tha , lekin thoda sa ghabraata tha.

Jaise taise jaap karta hua pahuncha manjil-e-maqsood par,
Chaandni raat me nazar parhi ek insaani vazood par.

Dar gaya ikdam , dil dhaad dhaad baj utha, ghabraya,
Lekin tarqsheel tha islie housla jutaya ,aage qadam badhaya.

Ajeeb manzar tha ,baal bikhraaey , ek daal pe nazar jamaaey,
Safed sarhi me baithi thi ik udaas aurat door taktaki lagaaey.

Baaju me dabaaey baithi ek potli numa bagli thi,
Mujhe laga shayad vo gaao.n ki hi koi pagli thi.

Mujhe dekh kar vo birju birju kah ke rone hasne lagi,
Uski haalat dekh ke mai vaythit ho utha,udaasi mujhe dasne lagi.

Maine use thoda naram lahze me , apnepan se bulaya,
Vo baat karne lagi aur mujhe apna dukh bhara sach bataya.

Birju uska pati tha , do beegha zameen par kheti karta tha
kadi dhoop me mushaqqat se , mushkil se guzar karta tha .

Apne aap se ghulta rahta tha, karaz ke bojh na sah saka ,
Khuddar tha ,haath na faila saka ,darad kisi se na kah saka,

Raat ko is hi peepal ke ped se fanda laga ke jhool gaya,
Vo azaad bharat ka ankheela lekin jazbaati kisaan tha.
Jis jagah jaam-e-shahadat pee gaya mulk ka ann data,
Ab pagli ka yehi ashyana , ye hi mandir , yehi shamshaan tha.

Usko yaad karti thi ,raat ke sannate me uski awaaz sunti thi pagli,
Diya jalaati thi uski yaad me, gum hue naqash fir bunti thi pagli.

Bichude sajan ki yaad me , aansu bahaati ped ke neeche mandrati
hai,
Pagli ko peepal me birju nazar aata hai , logo.n ko pagli ,aatma nazar aati hai.
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aadab parveen sahab ,,

bebasi o lachari ki kya khoob akkasi ki hai ,, sach pucho to jo ap beeti chod jagbeti kahe wohi shayar hai , aur ap is hunar ki shahinsha ho .. ik nahi balke hazarah dad apki pur asar nazm pe ...umid hai aage bhi issi tarhan apni giran khadar takhleeqo.N se bazm ki tajaliyat me izafa karte rahenge .. Pata nahi kyun mujhe ye nazm behad pasand aai .. jo paigham apne diya hai wo khabile khadr hai ...Mubarak baad ke mustahiq hai.N ap ..aisi taherire.N ab khal-khal hi nazar se guzarti hai.N..allah apko khush rakhe ...shad o abad rakhe ..


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21st August 2010, 03:13 PM
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PAGLI AATMA


Peepal ke ped ke neeche ek aatma ,safed sarhi me bhatkti rahti hai.
Gahra jaata hai jab raat ka sannata ,uske rudan ki nadi bahti hai.

Maine ye kissa suna , socha, thoda dara par fir rah na paya,
Mai ne us manzar se do chaar hone ka mansooba banaya.

Chala raat ko peepal ki taraf ,ek pair aage ek peechhe jaata tha,
Thoda dil ko kada karta tha , lekin thoda sa ghabraata tha.

Jaise taise jaap karta hua pahuncha manjil-e-maqsood par,
Chaandni raat me nazar parhi ek insaani vazood par.

Dar gaya ikdam , dil dhaad dhaad baj utha, ghabraya,
Lekin tarqsheel tha islie housla jutaya ,aage qadam badhaya.

Ajeeb manzar tha ,baal bikhraaey , ek daal pe nazar jamaaey,
Safed sarhi me baithi thi ik udaas aurat door taktaki lagaaey.

Baaju me dabaaey baithi ek potli numa bagli thi,
Mujhe laga shayad vo gaao.n ki hi koi pagli thi.

Mujhe dekh kar vo birju birju kah ke rone hasne lagi,
Uski haalat dekh ke mai vaythit ho utha,udaasi mujhe dasne lagi.

Maine use thoda naram lahze me , apnepan se bulaya,
Vo baat karne lagi aur mujhe apna dukh bhara sach bataya.

Birju uska pati tha , do beegha zameen par kheti karta tha
kadi dhoop me mushaqqat se , mushkil se guzar karta tha .

Apne aap se ghulta rahta tha, karaz ke bojh na sah saka ,
Khuddar tha ,haath na faila saka ,darad kisi se na kah saka,

Raat ko is hi peepal ke ped se fanda laga ke jhool gaya,
Vo azaad bharat ka ankheela lekin jazbaati kisaan tha.
Jis jagah jaam-e-shahadat pee gaya mulk ka ann data,
Ab pagli ka yehi ashyana , ye hi mandir , yehi shamshaan tha.

Usko yaad karti thi ,raat ke sannate me uski awaaz sunti thi pagli,
Diya jalaati thi uski yaad me, gum hue naqash fir bunti thi pagli.

Bichude sajan ki yaad me , aansu bahaati ped ke neeche mandrati
hai,
Pagli ko peepal me birju nazar aata hai , logo.n ko pagli ,aatma nazar aati hai.


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21st August 2010, 03:29 PM
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PAGLI AATMA


Peepal ke ped ke neeche ek aatma ,safed sarhi me bhatkti rahti hai.
Gahra jaata hai jab raat ka sannata ,uske rudan ki nadi bahti hai.

Maine ye kissa suna , socha, thoda dara par fir rah na paya,
Mai ne us manzar se do chaar hone ka mansooba banaya.

Chala raat ko peepal ki taraf ,ek pair aage ek peechhe jaata tha,
Thoda dil ko kada karta tha , lekin thoda sa ghabraata tha.

Jaise taise jaap karta hua pahuncha manjil-e-maqsood par,
Chaandni raat me nazar parhi ek insaani vazood par.

Dar gaya ikdam , dil dhaad dhaad baj utha, ghabraya,
Lekin tarqsheel tha islie housla jutaya ,aage qadam badhaya.

Ajeeb manzar tha ,baal bikhraaey , ek daal pe nazar jamaaey,
Safed sarhi me baithi thi ik udaas aurat door taktaki lagaaey.

Baaju me dabaaey baithi ek potli numa bagli thi,
Mujhe laga shayad vo gaao.n ki hi koi pagli thi.

Mujhe dekh kar vo birju birju kah ke rone hasne lagi,
Uski haalat dekh ke mai vaythit ho utha,udaasi mujhe dasne lagi.

Maine use thoda naram lahze me , apnepan se bulaya,
Vo baat karne lagi aur mujhe apna dukh bhara sach bataya.

Birju uska pati tha , do beegha zameen par kheti karta tha
kadi dhoop me mushaqqat se , mushkil se guzar karta tha .

Apne aap se ghulta rahta tha, karaz ke bojh na sah saka ,
Khuddar tha ,haath na faila saka ,darad kisi se na kah saka,

Raat ko is hi peepal ke ped se fanda laga ke jhool gaya,
Vo azaad bharat ka ankheela lekin jazbaati kisaan tha.
Jis jagah jaam-e-shahadat pee gaya mulk ka ann data,
Ab pagli ka yehi ashyana , ye hi mandir , yehi shamshaan tha.

Usko yaad karti thi ,raat ke sannate me uski awaaz sunti thi pagli,
Diya jalaati thi uski yaad me, gum hue naqash fir bunti thi pagli.

Bichude sajan ki yaad me , aansu bahaati ped ke neeche mandrati
hai,
Pagli ko peepal me birju nazar aata hai , logo.n ko pagli ,aatma nazar aati hai.
Hi kamal
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Parveen Komal ji,

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qadeer bhai..dil se shukarguzar hoo.n aapka . apki daad murde me jaan jaga deti hai.aapki daad vicharo.n ko pankh laga deti hai.

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Parveen ji, es waqt raat ke 11:30 ho rahe haiN, jab aapki yeh rachna padni shuru ki to darr laga ki paduN ya abhi na paduN

par jab poori padi to dil majboor ho gaya yeh sochne par ki bebasi bhi kya cheez hai, har kisi ko apni jaan bahut pyari hoti hai jab usko khud kho dete haiN hum to us waqt ensaaN kitna majboor hota hoga...yeh marne wala hi jaanta hai, pagli ka drad bas wahi jaanti hai....kisi apne ko khone ka dard kya hota hai.

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thanks sunita ji. chhote kisaano ki mazboori hoti hai karaz lena , aur jab ek dafa ye silsila shuru ho jaata hai to fir rukne ka naam nahi leta. aur jab lendaar jaleel karte hai.n aur sarkaar se bhi koi rahat nahi milti to bebas karzdaar ke samne ek hi rasta hota hai--khudkushi. iska santaap bhogte hai.n maqtool ke ghar ke nirdosh log.

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Praveen Ji ... ! Sunita Ji ... ne ekdum sahi kaha hai.....

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shukria naresh ji, kissano.n me is tarah ki niraasha ka alam behad chintajanak hai . aise muddo.n par bahas bhi honi chahie

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wah parveen ji its an awesome writtin.....shuru me bhot drawni hsi....keep writtin........
thanks gazal ji aapka.....................

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