udas ji namaskar--^--
shukriya udas ji, accha laga aapko mera dard samajh
main aaya, udas ji aapne to meri har line ko gaur se
padha aur uska jawab bhi diya, iske liye aapka teh dil
se shukra gujar hun, aapke rply ka andaaj bohat accha
tha... isi liye shayad hum aapko shamsheer wali kehte hai
aur jab koi shayri post karte hai to umeed karte hai
ki kam se kam aap to use padhe hi... chahe kuch likhe na
likhe .... waise mujhe samjhane ke liye shukriya
aapki baton ko maine note kar liya hai copy main
amal karne ki kosish karonga.... accha laga aapka reply
padh kar....
ye koi masti nahi ki hum yun hi jhoom jaye
ye koi basti nahi ki yun hi ghoom aaye...
ye dil hai humara thoda khayal rakhna hai iska
ye chez sasti nahi jo yun hi bhool aaye....
hahahaha
umeed hai aapko pasand aayegi ye lines
//sacccha_pyar(kunal)
tune ye mashvira suna hai kya...
jindgi sivay SACCCHA_PYAR ke hai kya