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aik tu chahiye ik gazal chahiye... - 14th December 2010, 04:10 AM
namaskar dosto...

jindgi ka mukammal mahal chahiye
aik tu chahiye ik gazal chahiye

karvato ko tasalli ye hoti rahe
ab jo palTu to teri pahal chahiye

muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.

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namaskar dosto...

jindgi ka mukammal mahal chahiye
aik tu chahiye ik gazal chahiye

karvato ko tasalli ye hoti rahe
ab jo palTu to teri pahal chahiye

muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.
Waaaah,,,,,,,its so lovely,,,,,,,,i like igazal........u hi likhte rahiye,,,,,,,,,or ham u hi waaaah waaaah keate rahe..........well don !!!!!!!!!
   
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namaskar dosto...

jindgi ka mukammal mahal chahiye
aik tu chahiye ik gazal chahiye

karvato ko tasalli ye hoti rahe
ab jo palTu to teri pahal chahiye

muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.
Very very nice gazal.........beautiful feeling he es gazal me,,,,,well done !!!!
   
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8th January 2011, 12:48 PM
Bohat khoob Baagi Jee.......har sher lajawab raha...........khaas kar yeh 2 sher.

muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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8th January 2011, 01:00 PM
Baagi Ji........

Boht KHooob Khayalaat Or Us Se Bhi Umdah Andaz-e-Bayan........
Acha Laga aap Ko Parhna........Daad Qabool Farmayen
Khush Rahen Or Yunhi Aatay Rahen



Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar
Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi

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8th January 2011, 03:43 PM
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namaskar dosto...

jindgi ka mukammal mahal chahiye
aik tu chahiye ik gazal chahiye

karvato ko tasalli ye hoti rahe
ab jo palTu to teri pahal chahiye

muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.

Bahut khoob Baagi ji.....!!! dil se daad hazir hai.... Kabool kijiyega....!! aise hi likhte rahiye....!!

KAVITA NEGI

Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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8th January 2011, 04:00 PM
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namaskar dosto...

jindgi ka mukammal mahal chahiye
aik tu chahiye ik gazal chahiye

karvato ko tasalli ye hoti rahe
ab jo palTu to teri pahal chahiye

muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.

aadaab
janaab baaghi saahab
bahot achhee ghazal rahee khoobsooarat hai naye aor anokhe andaaz nazar aaye badaa achhaa lagaa
bas ek hi baat mujhe nazar aa rahee hai jise kahnaa chaahungaa ki aap ne ,,,NA SAL ,,( 1-2 ) likhaa hai jab ki mere kheyaal se ye lafz ,,,NAS L ,, ( 2-1) hai yaa aisaa ho saktaa hai ki meree baat hi sahee na ho bahar haal aap dekh len kiun ki is se bahr ka maslaa bhi aa jataa hai
bahot peyaaree ghazal hai nayaa pan hai aap aise hain jo bheer me alag nazar aate hain ap apnaa raastaa dunyaa se alag banaane ka jonoon rakhte hain . bahot khoob
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muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.

Bahut Khoob ....... Baagi Ji !

dilee daad qubuul famaayeN ... !

aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

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Waaaah,,,,,,,its so lovely,,,,,,,,i like igazal........u hi likhte rahiye,,,,,,,,,or ham u hi waaaah waaaah keate rahe..........well don !!!!!!!!!
bahut shukriya apka sneha ji....aise hi housla dete rahiye..

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Bohat khoob Baagi Jee.......har sher lajawab raha...........khaas kar yeh 2 sher.

muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
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mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.
bahut shukriya sajid bhai.....housla dete rahen..

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Baagi Ji........

Boht KHooob Khayalaat Or Us Se Bhi Umdah Andaz-e-Bayan........
Acha Laga aap Ko Parhna........Daad Qabool Farmayen
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bahot achhee ghazal rahee khoobsooarat hai naye aor anokhe andaaz nazar aaye badaa achhaa lagaa
bas ek hi baat mujhe nazar aa rahee hai jise kahnaa chaahungaa ki aap ne ,,,NA SAL ,,( 1-2 ) likhaa hai jab ki mere kheyaal se ye lafz ,,,NAS L ,, ( 2-1) hai yaa aisaa ho saktaa hai ki meree baat hi sahee na ho bahar haal aap dekh len kiun ki is se bahr ka maslaa bhi aa jataa hai
bahot peyaaree ghazal hai nayaa pan hai aap aise hain jo bheer me alag nazar aate hain ap apnaa raastaa dunyaa se alag banaane ka jonoon rakhte hain . bahot khoob
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muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.

Bahut Khoob ....... Baagi Ji !

dilee daad qubuul famaayeN ... !

aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... !

duaaon ke saath ... !
bahut shukriya naresh ji...apka hamesha sath milta raha hai...aise hi housla dete rahiye...khush rahiye.....apka baagi

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namaskar dosto...

jindgi ka mukammal mahal chahiye
aik tu chahiye ik gazal chahiye

karvato ko tasalli ye hoti rahe
ab jo palTu to teri pahal chahiye

muddato tere gam ko main jeeta raha
tujhko main ji saku aisa pal chahiye

mazhabo aur naslo kee ye jang hai
ishq har dil me ho vo nasal chahiye.
Waaaahhh!.....bahut khoob...

Ummed hai ....Aapki qalam se aur bhi qalaam jald padhne milenge...

Aate rahiye...


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