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~$uper M0der@tor~
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kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.... -
6th April 2011, 11:46 PM
Ranj-o-fikar ka aalam hai, tanhaai kaa Safar hai,
Mausame-Ghame-hijraaN me hairaaN ek Shajar hai.
Tum they to jaise NadiyoN ki sargam sunaai deti,
Kaisa ye ab sukuut goyaa barpaa huaa Qahar hai.
Hai hosh kise begaano ka, baat to apno pe thahri,
Bheed me rah ke tanhaa hooN kaisa ye Shahar hai.
Tab ZubaaN se phool jhaDte,ab hain khamosh baithe,
Qaid-e-dahan me rakkhaa Muddat se koi Guhar hai.
Mahroome-Muhabbat ho gaye hain jab se kya kaheN,
Zeest ki tamannaaoN me Andhiyaari har Sahar hai.
Kis chehre ko talaashte ho 'Shaad' logoN me aksar,
Wo shakhs jaa chukaa, kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.??
shaad.....
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7th April 2011, 12:37 AM
Accha likhaa hai, maqtaa khaaskar pasand aaya...!
Likhte raheiN
Ashirvaad ke saath
Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai
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7th April 2011, 12:44 AM
Hai hosh kise begaano ka, baat to apno pe thahri,
Bheed me rah ke tanhaa hooN kaisa ye Shahar hai.
Kis chehre ko talaashte ho 'Shaad' logoN me aksar,
Wo shakhs jaa chukaa, kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.??
Nice Thoughts ...... Shaad Bhai !!
Very Impressive Creation ... Dil se daad hazir hai ...
Aise hi likhte raheN ... khush rahen ... !
DuaaoN ke saath ... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
---Naresh Mehra----
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7th April 2011, 01:45 PM
nice sharing..............................
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8th April 2011, 10:19 AM
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Accha likhaa hai, maqtaa khaaskar pasand aaya...!
Likhte raheiN
Ashirvaad ke saath
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Danny Chaachu....
kahan they aap zamaane ke baad aaye hain,
mere shabaab ke jaane ke baad aaye hain....
bahot khushi ho rahi hai aapko yahaaN dekhkar.. aapko maqtaa khaas laga meri koshish ka kaamyaab honaa nazar aa raha hai... yoonhi saath dete rahiye... duaaoN se nawaazte rahiye... shukriya
shaad...
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8th April 2011, 10:22 AM
Bahot bahot shukriyaa Mehraa saab, jo aapne nacheez ki bazm ko aur bhi ziyaada roshan kiya hai yahaan tashreef laakar... aapko khayaal aur andaaze- bayaan pasand aaya, meri khsuhnaseeebi hai... DuaaoN me yaad rakkhen...
shaad...
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9th April 2011, 09:24 PM
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nice sharing..............................
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thanks mittal bhai........ keep reading.
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10th April 2011, 01:00 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Ranj-o-fikar ka aalam hai, tanhaai kaa Safar hai,
Mausame-Ghame-hijraaN me hairaaN ek Shajar hai.
Tum they to jaise NadiyoN ki sargam sunaai deti,
Kaisa ye ab sukuut goyaa barpaa huaa Qahar hai.
Hai hosh kise begaano ka, baat to apno pe thahri,
Bheed me rah ke tanhaa hooN kaisa ye Shahar hai.
Tab ZubaaN se phool jhaDte,ab hain khamosh baithe,
Qaid-e-dahan me rakkhaa Muddat se koi Guhar hai.
Mahroome-Muhabbat ho gaye hain jab se kya kaheN,
Zeest ki tamannaaoN me Andhiyaari har Sahar hai.
Kis chehre ko talaashte ho 'Shaad' logoN me aksar,
Wo shakhs jaa chukaa, kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.??
shaad.....
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shaad bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoobsurat tehreer likhi hai ..... dil se daad .......
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
email: rkm179@gmail.com
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12th April 2011, 02:56 PM
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Originally Posted by ISHK EK IBADAT
shaad bhai
radhe radhe
bahut khoobsurat tehreer likhi hai ..... dil se daad .......
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Behad shukriya saath dene ke liye Rajinder bhai....
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19th April 2011, 09:51 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Ranj-o-fikar ka aalam hai, tanhaai kaa Safar hai,
Mausame-Ghame-hijraaN me hairaaN ek Shajar hai.
Tum they to jaise NadiyoN ki sargam sunaai deti,
Kaisa ye ab sukuut goyaa barpaa huaa Qahar hai.
Hai hosh kise begaano ka, baat to apno pe thahri,
Bheed me rah ke tanhaa hooN kaisa ye Shahar hai.
Tab ZubaaN se phool jhaDte,ab hain khamosh baithe,
Qaid-e-dahan me rakkhaa Muddat se koi Guhar hai.
Mahroome-Muhabbat ho gaye hain jab se kya kaheN,
Zeest ki tamannaaoN me Andhiyaari har Sahar hai.
Kis chehre ko talaashte ho 'Shaad' logoN me aksar,
Wo shakhs jaa chukaa, kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.??
shaad.....
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Shaad Jee,
Namashkaar..........!!!
Kaise Hai aap ? Behad khubsurat gazal likhi hai aapne....!!! Sabhi ashaar pasand aaye.......!!!
Hai hosh kise begaano ka, baat to apno pe thahri,
Bheed me rah ke tanhaa hooN kaisa ye Shahar hai.
Lvly creation.......!!!
Kis chehre ko talaashte ho 'Shaad' logoN me aksar,
Wo shakhs jaa chukaa, kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.??
Impressive.........!!!
Aise hi likhte rahiyee.....!!! Dil se dhero daad hazir aapki iss gazal ke liye....!!! Khush rahiyee.......!!!
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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19th April 2011, 11:59 AM
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Originally Posted by Kavita Negi
Shaad Jee,
Namashkaar..........!!!
Kaise Hai aap ? Behad khubsurat gazal likhi hai aapne....!!! Sabhi ashaar pasand aaye.......!!!
Hai hosh kise begaano ka, baat to apno pe thahri,
Bheed me rah ke tanhaa hooN kaisa ye Shahar hai.
Lvly creation.......!!!
Kis chehre ko talaashte ho 'Shaad' logoN me aksar,
Wo shakhs jaa chukaa, kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.??
Impressive.........!!!
Aise hi likhte rahiyee.....!!! Dil se dhero daad hazir aapki iss gazal ke liye....!!! Khush rahiyee.......!!!
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Kyaa kahuN..... bas itna hi kahnaa chahunga Negi saahiba, ke ye aapki inaayat hai..... aapko ghazal ke ehsaas aur mere jazbaat pasand aaye, main khud ko khusshnaseeb samjhtaa hoon... aap yoonhi saath dete rahiye hum yunhi mast nagmeN lutaate rahenge...
shukriyaa....................................
shaad...
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19th April 2011, 02:26 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Ranj-o-fikar ka aalam hai, tanhaai kaa Safar hai,
Mausame-Ghame-hijraaN me hairaaN ek Shajar hai.
Tum they to jaise NadiyoN ki sargam sunaai deti,
Kaisa ye ab sukuut goyaa barpaa huaa Qahar hai.
Hai hosh kise begaano ka, baat to apno pe thahri,
Bheed me rah ke tanhaa hooN kaisa ye Shahar hai.
Tab ZubaaN se phool jhaDte,ab hain khamosh baithe,
Qaid-e-dahan me rakkhaa Muddat se koi Guhar hai.
Mahroome-Muhabbat ho gaye hain jab se kya kaheN,
Zeest ki tamannaaoN me Andhiyaari har Sahar hai.
Kis chehre ko talaashte ho 'Shaad' logoN me aksar,
Wo shakhs jaa chukaa, kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.??
shaad.....
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assalmalekum
shaad bhai kya baat hai appka koi na koi dil ko chune wala kalam zabrdast kalam humesha hi rehta hai app itna waqt knha se niklte hai kyun ki agar mai aisa kuch likhne baithoon to pata nahi kitno dino knahi ja ke 10% iss trah ka likh paoon sach mai app ka bhut bhdiya control hai app issi trah se likhte rhyee app bhut jaldi behtareen shyaroon mai shumar hone lagenge
apka dost yasir
यूँ छुए रूह हमारी की चरंगा चरंगा हर जर्रा खुर्शेदे-आलम-ताब
हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे
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20th April 2011, 12:19 AM
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assalmalekum
shaad bhai kya baat hai appka koi na koi dil ko chune wala kalam zabrdast kalam humesha hi rehta hai app itna waqt knha se niklte hai kyun ki agar mai aisa kuch likhne baithoon to pata nahi kitno dino knahi ja ke 10% iss trah ka likh paoon sach mai app ka bhut bhdiya control hai app issi trah se likhte rhyee app bhut jaldi behtareen shyaroon mai shumar hone lagenge
apka dost yasir
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Waalekum salaam... janaab Yasir saab, aapki muhabbat aapka apnaapan lafz lafz se chalak raha hai bhai.. bahot suqoon miltaa hai jab aap tashreef-farmaa hote hain aur apne keemti alfaazoN se hame nawaazte hain... bas waqt nikaal hi leta hoon taaki aapp sab ko hamaari tuuti footi koshish padhhkar thodaa sa hi sahi lutf to mil jaae.. aur aap sab ki aisi pyaari pyaari baateN sunne ka hi main hamesha talabgaar rahtaa hoon... yoonhi saath dete rahiyegaa faqat itnii si guzaarish.................shukriyaa
shaad....
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Loquacious Adonis
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20th April 2011, 12:51 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Hai hosh kise begaano ka, baat to apno pe thahri,
Bheed me rah ke tanhaa hooN kaisa ye Shahar hai.
Tab ZubaaN se phool jhaDte,ab hain khamosh baithe,
Qaid-e-dahan me rakkhaa Muddat se koi Guhar hai.
Kis chehre ko talaashte ho 'Shaad' logoN me aksar,
Wo shakhs jaa chukaa, kyaa tumko ye khabar hai.??
shaad.....
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.....................nice, But aisa tou nahi ke you are becoming DA
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20th April 2011, 01:39 PM
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.....................nice, But aisa tou nahi ke you are becoming DA
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Thanks for your Appreciations Baqtiyaar... But whats that DA???????
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25th April 2011, 01:01 AM
DA= Dukhi Aatma...............................
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25th April 2011, 10:20 AM
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DA= Dukhi Aatma...............................
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Not at all..... wrong guess Bakhtiyaar...
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