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16th April 2015, 09:09 PM
Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...
Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....
Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mein mana lun tuje.…
Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…
Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….
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16th April 2015, 10:27 PM
Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
waaaaah..
Bahut khoob...gyan jee.
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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17th April 2015, 08:58 AM
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Originally Posted by Gyan Saxena
Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...
Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....
Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mein mana lun tuje.…
Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…
Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….
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kyaa baat hai janaab.... kyaa andaaz hai aur kyaa khoob ghazalgoii hai....
ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai.... aapka har kalaam khud apne aap me ek misaal hai..... hamaaraa naseeb jo aap hamaare saath hain Gyaan ji....
aate raha kijiye.... aur dher saari mubaarakbaad is khoobsurat ghazal ki tameer ke liye..... shukriyaa
Shaad....
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17th April 2015, 02:01 PM
Saxena saaheb
Dil se daad ees nafees koshish ke liye
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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17th April 2015, 02:31 PM
Gyan Saxena jee..
waaah waaah ... bohat khoob...
daad qabool kejiye!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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17th April 2015, 08:23 PM
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Originally Posted by Madhu 14
Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
waaaaah..
Bahut khoob...gyan jee.
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Shukriya Madhu ji.
Iss ghazal ko type karte waqt typing error ho gayi thi so I am reposting the correct words as below:
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Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...
Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....
Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mana lun tuje.…
Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…
Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….
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...............Aapka- Gyan Saxena
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17th April 2015, 08:24 PM
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Gyan Saxena jee..
waaah waaah ... bohat khoob...
daad qabool kejiye!
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Shukriya Hassan ji.
Iss ghazal ko type karte waqt typing error ho gayi thi so I am reposting the correct words as below:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx
Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...
Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....
Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mana lun tuje.…
Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…
Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx
...............Aapka- Gyan Saxena
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17th April 2015, 08:25 PM
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Saxena saaheb
Dil se daad ees nafees koshish ke liye
Aapka
Dhaval
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Shukriya Dhaval ji.
Iss ghazal ko type karte waqt typing error ho gayi thi so I am reposting the correct words as below:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx
Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...
Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....
Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mana lun tuje.…
Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…
Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx
...............Aapka- Gyan Saxena
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17th April 2015, 08:26 PM
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kyaa baat hai janaab.... kyaa andaaz hai aur kyaa khoob ghazalgoii hai....
ke bas padhte hi bantaa hai.... aapka har kalaam khud apne aap me ek misaal hai..... hamaaraa naseeb jo aap hamaare saath hain Gyaan ji....
aate raha kijiye.... aur dher saari mubaarakbaad is khoobsurat ghazal ki tameer ke liye..... shukriyaa
Shaad....
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Shukriya Shaad ji.
Iss ghazal ko type karte waqt typing error ho gayi thi so I am reposting the correct words as below:
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx
Ae ghazal aa gunguna lun tujhe....
Tujhmein kho jaaun our paa lun tujhe...
Itna mat soch ki ho bahakna mushkil
Tootkar baahon mein bikhar, mein sambhlun, sambhaalun tujhe....
Kya maza pyaar ka jo pyaar mein takraar na ho
Tu rooth ja yunhi mein yunhi mana lun tuje.…
Nazar na lag jaaye kahin iss duniya ki tujhe
Aa baahon mein sametun, aankhon mein chupa lun tujhe…
Tu kabhi gulab, kabhi chand, kabhi tajmahal hai,
Zara sa our thahar our sanwaarun, our saja lun tujhe….
Dil-e-aashiq mein kuch rahe to buss ye armaan rahe
Ki tera ho jaaun our apna bana lun thuje….
xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxx
...............Aapka- Gyan Saxena
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18th April 2015, 05:43 PM
gyan jee bahut sundar ghazal hui...daad kubul kijiye
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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