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13th January 2006, 07:49 PM
Hours of darkness end in a handful of tears
Waiting for a caring hand to nurture… The pain inside never seems to end Numbness has crept in and now my eyes are wet… I wish I could share all this and more If only you knew that my heart isn’t a stone… Heart of stone! I wish I had one… To feel the heaven though it’s hurting like hell… My hope of life has blown away the light of my life How do I go on… Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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13th January 2006, 11:04 PM
wowwwwwwwies!!!!!
idiottttt......nice nice nice.....man.....awesome!! but remember.....stone of heart? never.....then life wldnt be life if u had a stone of heart....u wldnt have loved..... by the way.....where the hell are u?????? take care bye u kno »~:¤.·º`·.»WARDA«.·´º·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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14th January 2006, 09:35 AM
kartik ji,
nice,wondeful,and i do agree with mukhra heart of stone never .coz than u wont be able to feel ur pain and others as well. than how u will write this much gud poems. keep writings like this shrdh 
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14th January 2006, 01:42 PM
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really very nice.... beautifully expressed..keep writing dear..... take care Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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14th January 2006, 06:05 PM
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wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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14th January 2006, 07:51 PM
bro very nice 1.but wud only say,that life is a preety very funny game.but it must go on.
GHAYAL ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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15th January 2006, 02:45 PM
very nice buddy
keep it up  jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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16th January 2006, 02:53 AM
Very nice...! Karthik Bhai !
The emotion is expressed so well... Keep writing like this Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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16th January 2006, 02:41 PM
Hours of darkness end in a handful of tears
Waiting for a caring hand to nurture… The pain inside never seems to end Numbness has crept in and now my eyes are wet… I wish I could share all this and more If only you knew that my heart isn’t a stone… Heart of stone! I wish I had one… To feel the heaven though it’s hurting like hell… My hope of life has blown away the light of my life How do I go on… Karthik, A very beautiufl expression once agin bro...but Life is to go on... Dont let the candle of hope cease...U nver know what time has in store for u...! Do keep writing.. TC..! Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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